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Eldritch Abomination

Posted by Velox , in Personal Writings, School Oct 31 2012 · 467 views

Halloween Poetry Poem Writing Nightmare
Eldritch Abomination

You feel
That inexplicable, utterly chilling sense
That you are being watched.


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Happy Hallowe'en, everyone! I wrote this poem a week or two ago for my Creative Writing class (with no direct inspiration from HP Lovecraft, though he is a great writer -- credit goes to Tolkien for the title), and felt it was fitting for Hallowe'en -- one of my favorite holidays simply because I love reading Hallowe'en-esque stories such as A Monster Calls, by Patrick Ness, anything by Edgar Allen Poe (seriously, that guy is a genius. A mad genius, but a genius nonetheless), etc.

So tomorrow I plan on reading some of those aforementioned scary stories and using the rest of my free time to finish planning for my NaNoWriMo novel (as I hope to finally participate this year).

Comments on the poem are very much appreciated, and don't forget to wish Harry Dresden happy birthday!

~ Velox

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Oh, shoot, now I need to go and write a Halloween story. >_< I completely forgot, and I kind of have it as a tradition to post a story for most holidays. Anyway, enough about that, I am going to go and read this with great speed. ^^
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