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You need to finish this.

 

-CF

 

Agreed.

 

 

Up to the hips, it's fine. The torso, though, I'm not sure what's wrong with it(but I'll probably realize at 3am and promptly forget again), but it just doesn't match the legs.

I think that it's because it just doesn't... flow into the legs, no?

LEGS.

NAOUGH.

Um... they're right there... NAOUGH...

Up to the hips, it's fine. The torso, though, I'm not sure what's wrong with it(but I'll probably realize at 3am and promptly forget again), but it just doesn't match the legs.

Hmm...

It's just not as smooth as the legs are. Maybe at least take off the Inika feet on the shoulders, but I don't feel that'll completely put Cags' stomach at rest...

 

On that note be sure to keep the arms smooth/System.

 

-CF

 

Again, agreed. I just don't have that many smooth black pieces (system). I'm planning on expanding my inventory a bit this summer...

Pretty darn spiffy, a shame, this would have been one of the better entries. The shoulders are a bit high, thats all I can really pick at for now.

Thanks. I'm am planning on lowering those shoulder joints (I already noticed that when I posted him up)

The legs are awesome. Enough said.

Ditto!

Whoa. Those are some sexy legs.

 

The striping looks nice, the shape is great, and you get extra points for the missile launchers. The body, however, is a different story. It suffers from the overly common problem of looking more like a "T" than a "V," like it should. Even if you were to smooth the transition from chest to shoulders, they would still be much too wide. Pull off the Inika feet and all the jumbled stuff below and to the side of them. Attach your arms there.

Yeah, shoulders = too high/wide-ish

 

In addition to the shape, the colors of the torso are disappointing. The trans saucer on the chest contrasts poorly as it, like other parts of the MOC, is green. Trans red would looks far better. The thin green lines from the legs really need to be carried up through the torso and into the arms/head if at all possible. They look much too nice to be confined to the legs only. Start by killing all of the lime in the torso, as none of it matches the legs' style.

 

Also, I'm iffy about that blobish abdomen area.

 

Meh, I'm planning on ditching the whole design (at least in build now, I'll probably keep the concept) I like the idea of carrying the lines throughout the torso, but I'm not so sure of how I'd do that... (I'll be sure to think on it though!)

 

 

Regardless of how much I can complain about, it's looking great. Much better than anything else that I've seen from you.

 

Why, thank you sir!

Legs and upper upper torso are awesome. Main part of torso is weird, though.

 

Those legs are just really awesome...

 

and Shine speaks the truth - he's awesome, and gives awesome advise.

Thanks! I believe that we all agree on the legs being win!

I like the legs.

I just needed four to be first. >_>

BtB

Yar dude, that was clooooose... XD

 

Done on a trackpad, mind you.

-Laka

 

*Gasp!* A image review!

I agree with everything you marked. As to the head, I'm gonna have to think on it, but I may do something along the lines of Cags' MoC (the first head he had for it)

Hey, for doin' that on a trackpad, that's pretty good.

Thanks for the input guys! I replied to your posts in your posts (via editing).

 

~GBG~

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I tell you, if you had finnished this in time for the contest, it would have won!

So sleek... Mesmerizing...