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BIONICLE: The Legend Imploded - Preview #6


TNTOS

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Here's the sixth preview for my upcoming comedy, BIONICLE: The Legend Imploded, which is coming out in the Comedies forum on Saturday, December 1st. This preview is from Chapter 6:

It was then that Mata Nui heard a hissing noise; a lot of hissing noises, actually. He looked around and realized that he was surrounded by what appeared to be thousands of yellow-armored beings, but they looked nothing like him despite sharing the same armor color.

They looked something like snakes mounted on humanoid bodies. They held two sided shot guns, which would have made them look fierce if they didn’t stand shorter than Mata Nui’s knee. If anything, these newcomers actually looked kind of cute, but that wasn’t on Mata Nui’s mind as he understood his situation.

“Rahkshi,” said Mata Nui, redoubling his grip on his gun. “Teridax’s sons, right?”

The lead Rahkshi hissed. “Yesss. We are hissss sssonsss.”

“Teridax must have gotten busy,” said Mata Nui, looking around. “I mean, look at all of you.”

“Sssssome of ussss are adopted, you know,” said one Rahkshi, sounding like his feelings were hurt. “Actually, mosssst of ussss are.”

 

“I see,” said Mata Nui. “Well, don’t let anyone tell you that just because you’re adopted that means your dad doesn’t love you. That’s a lie; a deliberate, harmful lie.”

Many of the Rahkshi shed tears at Mata Nui’s words, as though they had been waiting their whole lives to hear such encouraging words. That didn’t quite quell the desire in their hearts to rip Mata Nui limb from limb, but many of the Rahkshi gained a newfound respect for Mata Nui just the same.

“So let me guess,” said Mata Nui as he cocked his gun. “Y’all are gonna kill me, right? Just following your daddy’s orders?”

“Yessss, Mata Nui,” the lead Rahkshi said. “Daddy told ussss to kill you. We must obey our daddy’sssssss wishessss.”

“Teridax must be getting stupid, then,” said Mata Nui. “Thinks a bunch of adopted children can kill me? He’s losing his game, he is.”

That ‘adopted children’ bit enraged the Rahkshi, causing them to jump toward him with frightening speed.

Remember to keep an eye on the Comedies forum on Saturday, December 1st, where I will begin posting TLI. It's going to be awesome.

-TNTOS-

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