A Blog in Oblivion

Wow. Every time I see one of your MOCs, you just continue to improve. This is awesome.

Wow. Every time I see one of your MOCs, you just continue to improve. This is awesome.

Thanks Sumiks :3. I've been improving in my MOCing ever since I join BZP, mainly because of the very helpful reviews n stuff (not to mention Flickr helps too XD). Thanks again dude

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Lord Oblivion

You're definitely improving with shapes, but as with all of your MOCs, it's very cluttered. Partly due to poor-color management, but also partly due to exposed technic parts that look painfully out of place. Work on getting that under control.

You're definitely improving with shapes, but as with all of your MOCs, it's very cluttered. Partly due to poor-color management, but also partly due to exposed technic parts that look painfully out of place. Work on getting that under control.

 

Thanks, Could you point out some specific areas where the MOC is cluttered? So I can learn where I normally make it so. I'm not sure what you mean by poo-color management, as I kept him around 2 colors as its main color scheme with black and light grey (very little amount of light gray) in certain spots as I dont have those parts in silver or red. I wish I could make him fully silver and red ;_;. I also have to say some of the pics don't do my MOCs justice as some appear a lot smoother in front of me rather than in some of the pics :/. Thanks brickeens

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Lord Oblivion

Well it's cluttered practically everywhere, really.

What I mean by poor-color management is that the colors don't seem controlled. They're kinda in bits - disrupted by other colors, or pins, or something.

Well it's cluttered practically everywhere, really.

What I mean by poor-color management is that the colors don't seem controlled. They're kinda in bits - disrupted by other colors, or pins, or something.

I'll be attempting a revamp once I'm done with my shadow dragon so I can seriously alter him (I'll be swapping the red with black so the color scheme will flow smoother). I'll remove any unnecessary armor or parts. The disruption is un-avoidable if you consider the plack parts, as I dont have them in red or silver, thus why I'm going to make him all silver and black to fix that problem. I'm wondering would it appear better if the base of the MOC was all black, and on top there would be silver armor? Or would it not really matter? :/. Thanks though bricky this is helping a lot actually

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Lord Oblivion