Doctor Who Season Finale part 1
Dear Steven Moffat,
Please go back to Writing 101 because you seem to have forgotten a lot things from that class. Like make sense. For instance,
what tactical advantage does armor that makes inorganic matter invisible posses? What was the point of having those skeletons out in the open for all to see? Why are the windows the same shape as the Cybermen eyes? Why is the Master back didn't he sacrifice himself to repent for his evils or something? Or did you change that with saving Gallifrey? Why did you promise so much in the trailer yet hardly any of it was in the actual episode?
Okay last one was more of a general question. Please Steven you used to be a good writer, just understand not all your ideas are good ideas. Learn this and your writing will improve significantly.
Sincerely,
Scanty Demon
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