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I Love You Enough To Fix You

Posted by Kughii , in Poetry Oct 26 2011 · 390 views

Kughii Acceptance conundrums drama poetry comedy logic
I love you.
Take my words,
And place them in your heart,
Like the batteries to an alarm clock,
setting off your world at the right time.

Let me help you,
Let me open up that door,
Get you that coffee at Starbucks.

Take a look.
I'm not doing anything,
You wouldn't do for me,

Sitting down on summer nights,
Bundled up for Winter's sights,
Spread eagle on the floor,
Light flitting from around the edge,
An opening door.

I love you enough to fix you,
Don't turn away from me.

Acceptance from the many,
Acceptance isn't just a game.

To out in the streets,
Not normal,
Not sweet,
Broken golf club,
half-gone cigarette,
Sweetly talking,
Like you know what's best.

Speak softly.

Whisper loud.

Children should not meet the dying breath of your world.

When you go with a bang,
I'll be at the side of the bridge,
As you drop.

It was your own fault.

I loved you enough to fix you,
Why wouldn't you let me fix you?

You were my Ibis,
My exotic bird,
Dying with a croak,
Disheveled in my driveway.

Was being me so bad?


NOTE: NO, I'm not suicidal, phycopathic or anything like that... I've been writing an essay about the meaning of James Hurst's "Scarlet Ibis" and I needed to vent. Do enjoy!

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In the future, please don't use inappropriate acronyms as tags.
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Which one do you want me to remove?
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Cool poem bro

In other news





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... Perhaps that was a scream best directed at the chairman of CRANE? I, for one, am not a shrink that works for free. :P
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E, I'm no chairman. I'm just the founder. I don't even run it, really.

But I did read this poem, and 'twas decent. I can't really say much more about it than that, because although I read the story which you were inspired by and now get what you were trying to say, this poem is written in a style alien to me. Hence I did not comment on this entry until now.

-The Fearless Leader
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