I re-vamped my first two chapters. I have changed them really quite drastically and have added a lot. As always I'm sorry for spelling and grammar mistakes. For some reasons there are some that I never spot first times around. Its stupid. Ill end up missing out entire words. I think I am getting better a spotting them now though.

One word I used in there "Demon" is put in there in a non-religion basis. I;m really not sure if it would fit. I think the word Demon has moved on from Satan's minions now, and just means a being of pure evil. The characters never say it, I just use is for describing. Any way, hope you enjoy.

I really did notice I rushed parts of the chapters in the first draft, however I feel that is all now fixed and runs a lot smoother.

By they way, I am aware that not many people at the moment are really interested in my word(If at all), but I personally think its decent stuff(for me atleast), so I'm going to put it out there still, for the hope some one does one day take an interest. I'm not saying its perfect, becuase quite frankly, its far from it, but I find it difficult to believe that if some one works so hard at something, then it will turn out a complete failure. I think the worst thing with this sort of stuff is to doubt your self, which I have the tendency to do I often set my limits a lot higher than what they need to be but I wouldn't call that a bad thing. I hope some say some one will ejnoy my stories, but in the mean time, what else can i do except keep putting it out there.

If you are remotly interseted, please follow the blog, it just lets me know people actually care.

Any way, I wont go one :/

Thanks for reading.