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Universe Swept Aside


bonesiii

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Poem. :)




A new universe


Worlds blink into existence


First large and wide
second pulling together into shimmering orbs


A moon here, a planet there, a comet streaking there

Growing in size

Growing in number


Blink


One second twenty worlds

Next second a million




Even as the universe grows, its fate is sealed

Worlds grow too large. Out of control. Worlds merge. Collapse.

Two great arms stretch out


A horrible chorus of screams reaches beyond the universe

as it is swept aside




Even as the universe sloshes aside, new worlds appear behind the arms

Swept aside, too as the arms return to their position beneath the*



(It's a cyclical universe It's a cyclical universe It's a cyclical universe It's cyclical universe

(The scientists determine this near the end of each cycle, before their world ends.
Does anyone escape? Is there a legacy? Is there still history?)


It's a cyclical universe It's a cyclical universe Endlessly repeat until
the rain stops pouring down upon the*
)







*windshield.




A new universe...

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The ending was totally unexpected...

 

Then again, I suppose quite a few things could be perceived that way, couldn't they?

 

 

 

 

-Ngakunui

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The ending was totally unexpected...

 

Then again, I suppose quite a few things could be perceived that way, couldn't they?

 

 

 

 

-Ngakunui

Yep. :)

 

 

*highlights*

 

*tilts*

 

*pokes*

 

Where is the sublimal message? o.O

 

~EW~

There's no sublimal message. There's no limal message either. In fact, I would have to say that the message has nothing to do with lime at all. :P

 

I just skipped to the end. Was that okay?

 

 

 

 

:P

Shoooo-wer... :unsure:

 

Huh? I don't get it.

why is all the text in like different indentations?

 

Save the Comedy Forum!

~Zaxvo

Supposed to represent raindrops in poetic form. Like the poem itself is falling randomly all over the "page", just like raindrops on a windshield. :)

 

 

Edit: Oh, somebody ask me about the banner! :P

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I didn't

get it

at first

but

it's

brilliant

but

would be

less

 

striking

and effective

if not for

the

crazy formatting

.

 

What about the banner?

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I didn't

get it

at first

but

it's

brilliant

but

would be

less

 

striking

and effective

if not for

the

crazy formatting

.

 

What about the banner?

 

Lol. And the banner is an image of stars (CG, randomly googled, but stars nonetheless), but with an edited black diagonal line going across it. If you look at it another way, it could be raindrops on a windshield at night with headlights or streetlights behind them. :) Subtle hint there. :P

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Is the main portion of the Paracosmos over? Is that what you are meaning, or is it completely swept aside by the recent developments in the official story?

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Is the main portion of the Paracosmos over? Is that what you are meaning, or is it completely swept aside by the recent developments in the official story?

Nothing in the Paracosmos is ever messed up by official things, as it is a parallel universe that is different in many ways (even ones we have known all along) as a central part of the plot. :) The recent developments might not even happen in it, because there is a classified story reason to doubt it would be the case. :P

 

Anyways, no, this poem has nothing to do with the Paracosmos, or Bionicle for that matter. Just saw a similar scene on a windshield at night recently and thought it would make an interesting poem. :P (After being mind-controlled to stop hating poetry in a college class on the subject. But that's neither here nor there...)

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