once whole short story
There it is. Title: "Once Whole."
Any and all comments/critiques are welcome.
Regarding the Flash Fiction Marathon (which is still ongoing, btw--enter here or vote here), I'm excited to see such a large influx of entries for this contest. Over 20 in just the first round! Go BZP library-folks.
Also, 'tis (edit: 'twas) my birthday. Thanks for the well-wishings people.