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Destiny Of A Hero -- TIM Sneak Peek

Posted by Blessed Blade , in BZP, Computers, Creativity, Internet, The Terakou Files, Writing Nov 03 2008 · 475 views

Destiny of a Hero
As Kaze stepped through the portal, he had a feeling something was wrong. Everyone who was from the right dimension had quickly followed him, but seconds later Kaze found out why he felt something was wrong, as an explosion rocked the portal that was sending the group back to their true dimension. As a side-effect of the explosion, too, Kaze lost consciousness. When he awoke, he found himself lying on his back in the middle of no-where.
Why does everything have to happen in the middle of nowhere? Kaze thought, as he sat up and rubbed his head to look around. He found himself feet away from what looked to him to be a warehouse, and also saw that there was grass all around, along with sand.
Great. From a place that's totally cold to a desert. Just great. Kaze thought with a sigh, as he got up, and saw three people running from the warehouse.
"There he is! One of those Ki-shooting freaks that Neo told us about!" The one in the middle yelled out, as they pulled out Chaos Hunter standard Laser guns.
Well this definitely is my right dimension, the Chaos Hunters aren't on our side. But, how'd they know it was me? Kaze thought, as he grabbed the chainblade off his back and got into a battle stance. Kaze thought about using his Armour, but shrugged off that thought as they were just grunts, and nothing to use it against. Kaze ran at the three Hunters, and slashed at them, who jumped back and let off some shots, which Kaze leaned back to try and dodge, and sent two Ki blasts at the left and right Hunters, knocking out the one of the right and injuring the one of the left, though he just kept shooting at Kaze. Kaze decided to run at the remaining two Chaos Hunters, and slashed twice at the two, each hit with the flat side of the sword, and knocked them back, and unconscious.
"Whew, that was hard..." Kaze said to himself, as he saw someone else walk up and draw a sword.
"Blade Hikari I presume?" The new guy asked, and Kaze got into a battle position again.
"What's it to you if I am?" Kaze asked, and the guy smirked.
"If you are... You're going to die before my hands."

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*adds comment*

I'm really looking forward to this part. It has the makings of a great chappie, especially since you branched off from the previous one, leaving not much out. I wonder what that guy has that makes him think Kaze will die. ohmy.gif

And I'm still thinking of what "TIM" could mean.
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Hmmm, Kaze?
Thats the name of one of my Characters!!!!
Hes one of the Toa Idiotas from my Epic: Tails of the makuta Anima!
Link in sig
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Blessed Blade
Nov 04 2008 10:27 AM
... Well, ain't that interesting, not only does one of your chars have one of my names, but a second. Among the ones I already know you had since I submitted them =P
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*Sonia and Blade attack Kaze and Kaze*
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Blessed Blade
Nov 04 2008 03:22 PM
Sonia and Blade are from DoaH as well, Blade being Kaze's alternate name. And so is that second character ironically for Sonia, Kamiko or shortened, Kami... Pretty ironic XD
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Nov 04 2008 06:28 PM
Tim? Now I get to enter another guessing game, where I won't figure it out until we actually start it. tongue.gif
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Blessed Blade
Nov 04 2008 06:35 PM
T.I.M it should be, but I didn't think to separate the letters =P
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Kanto Dex: 109/62 -- Yellow

Johto Dex: Not Yet Started -- Crystal

Hoenn Dex: Not Yet Started -- Emerald
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Sinnoh Dex: Not Yet Started -- Platinum
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Alola Dex: 301/301 - Main File/Moon