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Dragon Awakes Excerpt (chap 3)


Toa Pilak Evolved

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Since I'm stuck on this particular part of my epic series...I'm hoping to ask for anyone's opinion concerning this excerpt since I'm kinda stuck at this point :P

 

Malik then turned to face the Titans as he pushed a button, the ornate door opened with a soft whoosh.

“Do not worry, the Vahki patrol detail can be informed to look for your missing friend…”

“Ok Malik, but don’t let them stun her or anything…” Beast Boy requested with a worried expression.

“An easy enough request, the only problem is if she runs or not.”

Robin then walked up to the Matoran and looked down, “What happens if she runs?”

“Well the Vahki these days have begun to develop even more personality quirks hence some Vahki might get over-zealous when someone starts a chase.”

Beast Boy once again became nervous, “That’s normally a bad thing right?”

Malik just stared at the green boy.

 

This is also the epic where Pilak's adventures continue.

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