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The Update on Frosam



Edit 7/26/16: This was originally posted back in 2014, but I tried to fix a broken Majhost link last year... only to forget that BZP's anniversary had just ended. Okay, seriously, BZPower needs to disable the option of editing blog posts for non-premier members if they're just going to leave the blog post in draft mode. This is the second time that this has happened to me!


Okay, so I know there's probably only two of you who have ever read The Story of Frosam or Vakama's Secret, and had one of you not suddenly showed up again after nearly a year of absence I probably wouldn't even bother to write this blog entry. But here we are again, it's always such a pleasure, and while only two of you care about this blog entry, I'm writing this blog entry specifically for you.


Now, I bet you're wondering, "What's the status on Reign of Shadows? Or Shadow's Reign, as you've been forced to call it since Greg Farshtey copyrighted Reign of Shadows?" Well, the short answer is... if you're holding your breath for Shadow's Reign, you're going to die of suffocation, because I honestly don't think I'll write it at this point.


Don't get me wrong. I would love to finish the trilogy and wrap up the story arc with the Shifting Shadows and reveal Meench Vyzumi's secrets and show how Turaga Wodahs and his Matoran fit into the whole thing... but at this rate, I think it would be unrealistic to honestly say that I will be able to write it.


Part one of the problem? Part one of the trilogy: The Story of Frosam. It sucks.


And, thanks to a certain hacker, it's no longer online.


Don't worry - I still have it saved on several computers, USB drives, and external harddrives. Unlike how BZPower handled the forum archive, I can take care of my stuff so long as I have it saved somewhere.


However, if you want to read Vakama's Secret and, subsequently, Shadow's Reign, you need to read The Story of Frosam first. Therefore, reposting The Story of Frosam is a major priority if I want to write Shadow's Reign. But it sucks. Who would want to read it, even if I reposted it?


And then I got an idea. Ideas are very dangerous things.


What if I rewrote The Story of Frosam?


And then I started thinking. Thinking is a dangerous pastime, I know.


And the more I thought about it, the more ideas came to me. Eventually, they became a flood, and I could not hold them back. I knew then and there that I had to do it. I had to rewrite The Story of Frosam.


Now, here's the problem. I've been working on this rewrite since last fall. I've only just started the second chapter. At this rate, it'll take a long time to finish this rewrite.


Also, there's Vakama's Secret. It's a significant improvement over The Story of Frosam, but it still has a number of problems. Worse, one of the ideas I came up with for the rewrite of The Story of Frosam completely retcons... well, Vakama's secret, which as you can imagine is a big part of Vakama's Secret. Now, Vakama still has a secret concerning the Shifting Shadows, and it's similar to the one in the original, but not quite the same. However, I don't have nearly as many ideas for a Vakama's Secret rewrite at the present moment, which is probably a good thing at this point.


But for now, I'm focusing my efforts on a rewrite of The Story of Frosam. And even though I'm barely over a chapter finished, I'm very pleased with the results so far. I'm torn on whether or not I want to wait until later chapters are completed before I post the first chapter, but I'll keep you guys (all two of you) posted.


In the meantime... please enjoy this preview image of a certain major character who desperately needed a revamp:




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After waiting like seven years for Part 3 I think I can safely say this is even better news! Granted, I thought it was already fairly good -- compelling characters and such -- but I cannot wait to see what the rewrite will hold. Take all the time you need

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Frosam sounds like a ship name for Frodo Baggins and Samwise Gamgee. No offense.


None taken.  Believe me, I found that out the hard way a long time ago during a Google search.


This blog post is two years old, and therefore rather out-of-date as far as the Frosam rewrite is concerned.  For example, I've since opted to rename the title character "Rosamu" after receiving some encouragement from Jacks and other readers.  In addition to avoiding aforementioned connotations, this new name was crafted to fit Tolkien's Matoran Dictionary.  Therefore, it sound more like an actual BIONICLE name than "Frosam" ever did.  Certainly helps that it apparently follows the naming scheme of Onepu, Taipu, Nuparu, Mamru, and other such Onu-Matoran.


So, I guess this comment serves as an update to this blog post which was originally supposed to be an update.  Two years and not a single word from me regarding this story (on this website, at least)?  Still, I am working on it... slowly.  I've written up to chapter 8 of what is currently projected to be approximately 16-20 chapters.


Not that anybody cares... after all, the first blog comment I get in two years is nothing more than pointing out the similarities between a name and a ship...

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