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Yesterday Quest


GregF

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Just to update you on the new serial -- the first chapter is done, and Bink will be posting it as soon as he can (he is traveling for work, so it may be later this week). This chapter features three new Toa -- Psionics, Lightning, and Iron -- and a new villain.

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Great!

Who will be the new villain? The character who was inspired form the hungarian folklore? Who knows...

I think that will be on Monday.

 

Great, all 3 toa that I really wanted to see.

It's nice to have two female toa, they can go shopping together! :lol:

No actually I see one toa, probably Psionics to be calm and serious while Lightning to be electric (pun intended!) and sort of fun-loving, maybe a bit of a tomboy.

Good luck on this series, I'm very exited for it.

A bit tomboy!? :o What a opinion xD

Lightning will be like Air: agility, fun-loving, funny, etc.

 

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Okay; very cool chapter, but one slight thing...

 

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I thought that Toa of Psionics were supposed to be female only? =/

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A few problems. Zaria sounds too feminine for a Toa of Iron. Orde is referred to as a "he" although Psionics is an all female Element.

 

Other than that, great chapter.

 

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I love how Gelu is finally getting a leading role in a story. :)
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I personally don't think 'Zaria' sounds feminine but I can see why you think it would be (the 'ia' ending). Matter of opinion, I guess.

 

Orde's referred to as a male a bit too much for it to just be a typo...

 

The interactions within the team seem a bit forced, but maybe that's because there hasn't been enough story for it to feel natural yet. In light of that I think Greg made the right choice to only have four main characters from the start; I'd rather have stronger characters than more.

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Plasma didn't make the cut... Silly Greg. Male Psionics Toa. But Marendar seems promising... Is he Mr. Who Am I?

 

It would help if you would read the OGD. No, Marendar isn't the winner, male Psionics will be explained, it's a mystery of the serial.

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