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Can't put my finger on it

Posted by Taipu1 , Mar 12 2013 · 111 views

Can't put my finger on it So I made this enhanced version of my avatar, but I don't want to use it, because there is something wrong with it.  Can people critique it, so I can work out what is wrong with it? Because something is wrong with it, I just don't know what it is.




I think it's the eyes - they're rounder and friendlier in your current avatar. Also, the chestpiece seems abnormally straight.

His cheeks look fat

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The Inquisitive Automaton
Mar 12 2013 04:17 PM

Yeah, I'm gonna have to agree with GSR there. The way the eyes are slanted makes them look a little...off in comparison to your old one. 

The cheek slit area thingies are too far apart and curved slightly outwards at the bottom.   Making the edges of the inner cheeks parellel might fix it.   That's my opinion.

it's too Chibi D:

Thanks for the feedback guys, I'll look into all those points.

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