Do You Smell Popcorn?
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Kughii
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Oct 16 2011
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... No, but I DO smell coffee!
Velcome to my Vorld! Or, at least the confines of my boundless mind. Somewhere between the smells, sights, sounds, tastes, and fission reactions of creativity lays a golden gem of written language. I attempt to tip toe quietly past that.
If you have flaming criticism, trolling to perform, or other shananigans (spelling, who cares about shpealing?), please leave them in the comment section BELOW with a joke or new and interesting word (with definition and type of word -- adj, v, noun... -- thanks) attached. I will feed off your literary inefficiencies as a zombie leeches off a brain. In other words, your work will become--
--MINE.
This Journal is to act goofy, read goofy, and otherwise enjoy the public release of my literary constipation.
Enjoy.
--Kughii
Velcome to my Vorld! Or, at least the confines of my boundless mind. Somewhere between the smells, sights, sounds, tastes, and fission reactions of creativity lays a golden gem of written language. I attempt to tip toe quietly past that.
If you have flaming criticism, trolling to perform, or other shananigans (spelling, who cares about shpealing?), please leave them in the comment section BELOW with a joke or new and interesting word (with definition and type of word -- adj, v, noun... -- thanks) attached. I will feed off your literary inefficiencies as a zombie leeches off a brain. In other words, your work will become--
--MINE.
This Journal is to act goofy, read goofy, and otherwise enjoy the public release of my literary constipation.
Enjoy.
--Kughii








Your RPing is bad.
I mean, just look at an example of recent terrible RPing you posted (Don't even get me started on Aensetr Derrum...)!
Oh, gosh no.
Never start off an IC with an onomatopoeia, especially one written just like it sounds. It doesn't make people interested in the rest of it. Like, at all. Not kidding. 100% serious.
Never, ever, go descriptive. People hate that. I mean, like, you know Lord of The Rings and Harry Potter and all that stuff with actual descriptions? Naw, no one liked that.
And, like, no foreshadowing. It really doesn't build up interest. At all. Not kidding again (SERIOUSLY). 100% honest.
And, oh, never use dashes as punctuation. It doesn't provide a tone. And it most certainly doesn't show disarray. Nope. Not at all.
Oh, gosh. What was I just telling you? No descriptions. No one ever got anywhere with them. Nope. And especially no showing stuff from the muaka's point of view. I mean, no one wants to hear about how it thinks people are sandwiches because it's an animal! It's a monster, not an animal!
And, like, this has all been soooooooooo much better in comparison to this line. I mean, you never reveal that it's a person who will become a sadistic psychopath dreaming depressing and quite scary dreams. Like, that actually makes them human. And of course, no sadistic maniacs are human, right? A bunch of monsters, the lot of them.
...Yes, Kughii, I've got to admit: Your writing is terrible...
...In that it makes all others' around you seem terrible in comparison.
Keep it up, brodawg ;3
And as for the word, here's one: Griseous-adj. meaning mottled with gray, usually bluish gray; grizzled.
-The Fearless Leader