Kopekemaster Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 Here is where you can comment and criticize constructively on The Bionicle Comics Narration. To start things off, I realized that Kopaka never told Matoro his name, so I just worked it into the part where Matoro is telling Kopaka about the Toa. I kept wanting to go into first-person present-tense. I kept it third-person past-tense, though. Do you think I should switch? Looking forward to hearing what you all say! Quote My Writing Blog (more writing coming soon!) My Bionicle/LEGO Blog (defunct) Hyfudiar on Spotify (noise/drone/experimental music) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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