-Bionicleman- Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 Post your thoughts on my epic here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fighty Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 I want to start out by saying that I really enjoyed the prologue. It didn't necessarily do much in setting up the plot - besides the fact that Teridax is using Infected Kanohi to control Rahi - but it had a nice style that was simple and concise. It gave me a good sense of place without being overly descriptive, and it gave me a good sense of action and progression without skimping on the details. It's a good, solid style that is easy and enjoyable to read. If the rest of the epic is like this, I may just have to give it a look. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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