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#81 Offline Velox

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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 01:46 AM

After talking it over with some trusted advisors, I have decided to make a command decision and edit the rule: You are now allowed to edit your story up to a half-hour after posting it without permission. This is to allow formatting errors to be fixed, as it is quite understandable that they will happen [especially with the new forums making copying/pasting things a little wonky at times], without having to have a bunch of people PMing me after they post their stories. Keep in mind that you will still have to PM me if you wish to edit your story after the half-hour mark.

There should be no qualms about this because if you already posted your story and would wish to edit something, you can just PM me.

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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 07:13 AM

I don't know if this has already been answered, but I know it's been asked. I haven't seen a reply, but it could just be my moronic tendancies. Are we allowed to write songfics for this? Because I've been planning a Bad Apple one that could fit "An Exile's Tale".

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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 07:50 AM

I don't know if this has already been answered, but I know it's been asked. I haven't seen a reply, but it could just be my moronic tendancies. Are we allowed to write songfics for this? Because I've been planning a Bad Apple one that could fit "An Exile's Tale".


Yay, I'm happy :) This finally gives me an excuse to write. Are songfics allowed?


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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 08:07 AM


I don't know if this has already been answered, but I know it's been asked. I haven't seen a reply, but it could just be my moronic tendancies. Are we allowed to write songfics for this? Because I've been planning a Bad Apple one that could fit "An Exile's Tale".


Yay, I'm happy :) This finally gives me an excuse to write. Are songfics allowed?


Yes.

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Oh.

Sorry. My bad. :) Thank you.

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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 10:14 AM

Member name: Tolkien
Entry name and link: The Coming of the Toa

There 'tis.

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Member name: Makuta Dralcax
Entry: A Cold Light Dawns

Member Name: Cederak
Entry Name and Link: All That Glitters

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Entry name and link: Before the Storm

Also, does anyone know how to indent properly, like creating separate paragraphs and whatnot, on here? All my dialogue is really confusing, now... :dozingoff:


The previous four submissions have been updated to the list. If I missed one please let me know.

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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 02:07 PM

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Entry name and link: 12.5

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#87 Offline Applejack

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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 02:15 PM

Can I post multiple stories with comic names, and decide which I want to enter, at a later time?

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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 03:20 PM

Member Name: Shyyrn
Entry name and link: 12.5

Thank you! :)

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Updated.

Can I post multiple stories with comic names, and decide which I want to enter, at a later time?

You can write as many stories as you want, but the moment you submit one here, that is your entry.

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#89 Offline Velox

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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 03:29 PM


Can I post multiple stories with comic names, and decide which I want to enter, at a later time?

You can write as many stories as you want, but the moment you submit one here, that is your entry.


Indeed. OmiShad, your story must be entered right when it is posted -- it would be unfair to allow you to receive replies first and then pick the story with the best reviews. Send them to a couple friends to see how they like it if you want, but if you post all of them in the SSs forum, you must choose your entry from the get-go, not after you receive replies.

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#90 Offline Applejack

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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 04:11 PM

Could I post them on another site, to see which is best?

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Posted Oct 30 2011 - 04:21 PM

If it's not on BZP, I can't stop you, but I would prefer if you didn't.

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#92 Offline Applejack

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Posted Oct 31 2011 - 01:11 AM

If it's not on BZP, I can't stop you, but I would prefer if you didn't.

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Alright, I understand. I won't post it on another site, before BZP.


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Posted Oct 31 2011 - 07:44 PM

Member name: Snoopy82
Entry: Deep into Darkness


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Posted Nov 01 2011 - 06:08 PM

Member name: Bite My Shiny Metal Armor
Entry name and link: To Trap a Tahnok

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Posted Nov 01 2011 - 08:29 PM

Member name: Snoopy82
Entry: Deep into Darkness

Member name: Bite My Shiny Metal Armor
Entry name and link: To Trap a Tahnok


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Posted Nov 02 2011 - 03:23 PM

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#97 Offline BioCry

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Posted Nov 02 2011 - 10:14 PM

Am I allowed to do one comic separated into two comics?

Namely, Journey's End Part 1 and Part 2?

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Posted Nov 02 2011 - 10:24 PM

So, All that Glitters and Rebirth? No, you'd have to just pick one. If the comic title was actually "part 1/part 2" then sure, but I don't think there are any like that. You can still center your story around both titles, but just make one a little more prominent and then make that your title.

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Posted Nov 03 2011 - 01:14 AM

Are we allowed to do re-interpretations of actual events in canon? Like, say, re-writing a scene from one of the movies?
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#100 Offline Applejack

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Posted Nov 03 2011 - 04:11 PM

Would I be allowed to ask in my blog, which story idea I might do, would be best?

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Posted Nov 03 2011 - 04:36 PM

When you say that it should stay PG-13 friendly, you mean exactly what?

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Posted Nov 03 2011 - 10:25 PM

Are we allowed to do re-interpretations of actual events in canon? Like, say, re-writing a scene from one of the movies?



As long as you don't make it too alike to the original, I suppose so -- you want to base it off canon, not plagiarize. :psychotwitch:

Would I be allowed to ask in my blog, which story idea I might do, would be best?



Sure, as long as you're not posting the whole stories [outlines or just your ideas are fine].

When you say that it should stay PG-13 friendly, you mean exactly what?



I mean it should be within BZP's rules -- no explicit sex, drugs, violence, etc. If you think a scene might be too much, it probably is, but you can send it to a contest assistant or host as long as it's not too long [so just send the scene, not the whole story] to make sure. Keep in mind this is a kid's forum, and I know it's hard to do that when writing [believe me, I very, very much so wish the rules could be more lenient for writing], but we gotta stay within the rules here.

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Posted Nov 04 2011 - 04:16 PM

On the rules of violence, could an exceedingly large amount of people be murdered - rather gruesomely - as long as it doesn't involve excessively gory details?

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Posted Nov 04 2011 - 05:00 PM

As long as it doesn't get too much into the details, it should be fine.

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Posted Nov 04 2011 - 08:44 PM

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Well, here goes. :)

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Posted Nov 05 2011 - 11:10 AM

Sounds like fun. I may try to enter, but I doubt I'll win. It's worth a try, though. Good luck to all of the contestants.



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Posted Nov 06 2011 - 01:49 PM

Could I have someone's two cents on my entry over there? No need to be nice, I'd just really appreciate some kind of opinion. I'm not exactly 100% sure about it.

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#108 Offline Toa of Dancing

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Posted Nov 06 2011 - 05:04 PM

The SS forum isn't the most active. It'll probably get reviewed in time.

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Posted Nov 06 2011 - 05:26 PM

Oh I know, believe me. That's why I was asking in here. It's just a request, not a complaint.

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Posted Nov 07 2011 - 01:41 PM

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Good luck to all entrants. :) You'll need it. ;D If my literary skill is half of what my conceit is, ya'll stand no chance.


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Posted Nov 15 2011 - 09:08 PM

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Posted Nov 16 2011 - 10:50 AM

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Posted Nov 17 2011 - 09:01 PM

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Posted Nov 17 2011 - 09:20 PM

...Anymore reviews for my story '12.5,' please? I would appreciate the feedback!

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