Sundown - Lord Ghirahim (AKA Angel Bob)
Assigned to Charlie Brown (Jedi Master J.).
Posted Apr 23 2012 - 08:37 PM
Sundown - Lord Ghirahim (AKA Angel Bob)
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender

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Posted Apr 23 2012 - 08:55 PM
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Posted Apr 23 2012 - 10:30 PM
Posted Apr 23 2012 - 11:45 PM
Has there been any word from Shawn Spencer? I still haven't gotten my review on Kingdoms.
Posted Apr 24 2012 - 12:48 AM
RedemptionIf you're still taking requests for reviews, I would greatly appreciate a review for
Edited by Velox, Apr 24 2012 - 01:27 AM.
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender

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Posted Apr 24 2012 - 12:03 PM
Ok, thanks! MIA made me laugh, dunno why...And "I Will Return" will be reviewed by Jedi Master J. (many thanks for volunteering), since Jinklemeister is still MIA.
Posted Apr 24 2012 - 09:11 PM
Posted Apr 25 2012 - 09:37 AM
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Posted Apr 25 2012 - 10:58 AM
Posted Apr 25 2012 - 12:18 PM
The Mystery of Death by thebeggerpie
Posted Apr 25 2012 - 12:31 PM
The Mystery of Death by thebeggerpie
Regrettably, your last request (My Old Friend) has not yet been critiqued, and thus, we cannot accept The Mystery of Death at this time. See the "One story at a time" rule in the SSCC's initial post. Once Tyler Durden has critiqued the first short story, feel free to return with The Mystery of Death. Thank you!
-Ced
Posted Apr 25 2012 - 08:07 PM
Posted Apr 25 2012 - 09:21 PM
Edited by Nick Silverpen, Apr 25 2012 - 09:22 PM.
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Posted Apr 26 2012 - 11:35 AM
All the rowboats, in the paintings
They keep trying to row away
And the captains' worried faces
Stay contorted and staring at the waves
They keep hanging in their golden frames
For forever, forever and a day
All the rowboats, in oil paintings
They keep trying to row away, row away
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Posted Apr 26 2012 - 01:08 PM
Posted May 04 2012 - 12:25 PM
Angel by Peach 00
I'm not sure if things are filled up or not, but if you guys can review it, I'd really, really appreciate.
(Just as a side note, for critics MIA, I'd love to help out if that's fine, just as a temporary critic - only if critics are busy, that is. If that's cool, I'm happy to help. ^^)
Posted May 05 2012 - 06:55 PM
Posted May 06 2012 - 09:00 PM
Requesting a review on my story
Slipping Through http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4570
by Nick Silverpen
Thanks!
http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4534(Delving Too Deep) - Lord Darkon
Edited by Velox, May 06 2012 - 09:01 PM.
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender

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Posted May 07 2012 - 01:44 PM

Posted May 07 2012 - 03:05 PM
I'm not sure whether or not to count the downtime, but it definitely has been at least a week since I applied for a review. There's no need to jump to it, though; I suppose I'll just write something else and wait for my friends to review it.
Posted May 07 2012 - 03:49 PM
Sorry about that, apparently Velox forgot to mention that I PMed him to inform you all that I won't be able to write up a review for either of my assignments here until after I am finished with my finals this week. And well, that won't be until after this Wednesday.I'm not sure whether or not to count the downtime, but it definitely has been at least a week since I applied for a review. There's no need to jump to it, though; I suppose I'll just write something else and wait for my friends to review it.
Again I did contact Velox here (On the day that forums came back.), so this information should of been pass along already. However I admit I probably should of made a post here, so I am sorry about that and I'll try to be mindful of doing that in the future, if something like this happens again.Even without the downtime, the critic assigned to handle your request has exceeded their seven day deadline. Upon glancing at his profile, it would appear he will be away until the 11th. I'm not sure whether Velox was informed of that beforehand. In any event, I'll try to speak with Velox later today about this matter. On behalf of the SSCC, I apologize for this unanticipated (to my knowledge) setback.
-Ced

Posted May 07 2012 - 04:23 PM
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender

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Posted May 08 2012 - 07:49 AM
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Posted May 14 2012 - 01:28 AM
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender

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Posted May 15 2012 - 07:39 AM
No need to apologize, IMO. Thanks!As requested, I have reviewed I Will Return. Apologizes for the lateness.
Posted May 19 2012 - 09:00 AM
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Posted May 19 2012 - 03:25 PM
Glatorian Chronicles #12: The Future Begins Where the Past Ends by TNTOS.
-TNTOS-
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Posted May 19 2012 - 06:27 PM
Posted May 20 2012 - 08:31 PM
To Take The Stars From The Sky (http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4874) - Lord Darkon
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Posted May 25 2012 - 02:31 PM
From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith ![]()
Posted May 26 2012 - 05:00 PM
In the Jungle, by Nuile: The Daft Wordbender, please.
I appreciate the quality of the reviews given here. It's nice in general when someone reads your story and comments, but you don't get quality reviews from every reader in the library.
From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith
Posted May 29 2012 - 06:20 AM
Posted May 29 2012 - 06:48 AM
Edited by Βalta, May 29 2012 - 07:29 PM.
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