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[Indigo Individual]

Welcome to Pirok the Va-Matoran's Comix!

Series 1:
Who needs imaginative names?
A proper introduction
Fezpocalypse
Big Bang 2(96)
Temporal Ducks

Series 2:
Death Is Not the End
Attack of the Kinlukko
Rebricked
The Shocking Return of Proditor
The Cliff
Origins
The Beginning...
Of the End...
Dining with Destiny

Series 3:
The Coming Storm
Meanwhile in the Void
A Day in the Life of a Villain
The Power of Stormageddon
To Foil a Plot
Are we there yet?
A Little Rain...

Series 4:
Just in Time
Like an arrow the knee
Scriptception

Non-Canon:

Specials:
Hallowe'en Special
Oh, Christmas Tree...
A Special Announcement
Happy Endings

GS Episodes:
It's me or the raccoon.

Canon comics are added Mondays, Wednesdays and Saturdays. Non-Canon comics don't follow this schedule, though.

PGS's:
kanohi_master

Stormageddon (No BZP username)

More PGS's will be accepted. In order to PGS, PM me. I will not accept requests from posts in this topic.

Banners:

Choose to add an image to your sig, then copy this into the image. I haven't quite finished everything yet: http://www.brickshel...ix/banner_2.png


Again, choose to insert an image, then copy-paste this into the url field: http://www.brickshel...vms_comix_2.png


Yet again, insert an image, copy-paste, etcetera: http://www.brickshel...ix/banner_3.png


Blah blah, image, copy-paste: http://www.brickshel...ix/banner_6.png

Edited by Pirok the Va-Matoran, Jan 17 2012 - 02:17 PM.

[Bulik]

woah, low quality, insignificant backrounds, low story.
sorry, there just isnt much to say :\
it doesnt even define where they are, and currently has little to no personality for characters. if you up the backrounds and affects a bit, then maybe you would be off to a better start.
BUT
you did say the comic was random, and so it was

[Indigo Individual]

woah, low quality, insignificant backrounds, low story.
sorry, there just isnt much to say :\
it doesnt even define where they are, and currently has little to no personality for characters. if you up the backrounds and affects a bit, then maybe you would be off to a better start.
BUT
you did say the comic was random, and so it was

It's the first two comics. And I've never been good with backgrounds...
But at least it was random.
And has a comic ever started with advanced backgrounds, high quality, and lots of personality? Besides, the raccoon has personality.

Edited by Pirok the Va-Matoran, Oct 30 2011 - 03:53 PM.

[King Joe]

Good start. Not bad. reminds me of my own comics when I first started.

[Indigo Individual]

Okay, I have created a proper introduction, describing all current permanent characters.


I have no problem breaking the fourth wall. Consider it broken.

[Bulik]

*broken fourth wall lands on my new flatscreen HD tv and smashed my satalite cable, thus destroying my televsion channels*

"WATCH WITH FOURTH WALL YOU BREAK" i say

and i know this is your first tme, so i didnt want to be harsh in my first post here. and maybe ill make a cheap exqusite backround for you


ta-da

Edited by bulik, Oct 30 2011 - 04:42 PM.

[Indigo Individual]

Thankyou. Any and all donations will be graciously recieved, given credit, and most likely not used.

[Nujanii: Kanohi Master]

Hey Pirok!

Well, it is random, as you said. You certainly don't have good backgrounds, but that's ok. Especially with the Rayg sprites.



I had my own comic series on the old forums that I didn't bother to continue after the upgrade, btw. You can see my first and only attempt that I will continue on my sig.

[Ghosthands]

I like it! And...wait...was that Merror? Or Jaller?

[King Joe]

Time paradoxes. I luv it! And be careful... Leaving the fourth wall broken can do strange things to your comics...

[Indigo Individual]

Thanks everyone! I'll be adding a Hallowe'en special later today.
And no, GH, it was Pirok's future self, stuck in the past.
I don't use characters created by other people without permission. LotTL was the person I got when I did 'Eeny Meeny Miney Mo', so I PM'ed him for permission.

[Indigo Individual]

Hello! I am now updating, with my Hallowe'en special! If you're bothering to read this, you obviously have so little sanity left after reading the first two that you have faith that I will get better. 'Fraid not.

[Bulik]

0_O

that was random.
i'd prefer more of a story

[King Joe]

Incredible randomness...

[Bulik]

oh, and

Thankyou. Any and all donations will be graciously recieved, given credit, and most likely not used.

i'm so glad you care

[Indigo Individual]

Don't worry, the next one is very much story-based. GS comics, Holiday comics and whatnot shall not be story-based, but based in complete randomness.

[Indigo Individual]

Here it is, a story-based comic. Enjoy.

So, what do you think? My first story-based, and my first two parter?

[Touko Fukawa]

Yay, it is up! My appearance was great, this is very random, but I laughed several times. I can not wait for some nice shiny plot! Keep going! More!!
EDIT this story comic is great!! What will happen next_
Nice to see some actual plot, and I like here this is going!

Edited by Last of the Time Lords, Oct 31 2011 - 12:22 PM.

[Indigo Individual]

Yay, it is up! My appearance was great, this is very random, but I laughed several times. I can not wait for some nice shiny plot! Keep going! More!!
EDIT this story comic is great!! What will happen next_
Nice to see some actual plot, and I like here this is going!

Good to have compliments. And as for what happens next... spoilers!
EDIT: I am not a spiriah. This appearance is a mockery. Wait, my plan worked? I take it all back! Except the spiriah part.

The second part is going to be big. Really big. So big, I thought I'd give you a preview. Enjoy!

There we are. And now you have the title. And LotTL's return. Which I didn't check with him, although I'm sure it'll be fine.
And an evil villain...
And this shall be considered a stand-alone comic. But the comic itself is a preview of another comic. I'm glad you understand.

Edited by Pirok the Va-Matoran, Oct 31 2011 - 01:13 PM.

[Ghosthands]

Ah, OK. I may make an appearance at some point. Though not necessarily as one of my RPG characters...

[King Joe]

Whoo hoo! This comic is on a roll. Breaking the Fourth Wall and Destroying the spacetime continuum in just the first few comics? Wow.

[Indigo Individual]

Whoo hoo! This comic is on a roll. Breaking the Fourth Wall and Destroying the spacetime continuum in just the first few comics? Wow.

I can only wonder how the other comics will live up to it.

[Touko Fukawa]

Yay, I'm back! And a new villain! Can't wait! Also, why are there so many backrounds? I thought it was a total event collapse? Oh well. Guess I'll have to wait. Alos, glad to see that redundant tagline is fixed!

[Indigo Individual]

Yay, I'm back! And a new villain! Can't wait! Also, why are there so many backrounds? I thought it was a total event collapse? Oh well. Guess I'll have to wait. Alos, glad to see that redundant tagline is fixed!

You're gonna love it. You're gonna love it.* It's longer than the average comic length (18 boxes). I still don't know exactly how long it's gonna be, but as I said, it's gonna be big.
And there's a brand new character, who won't be permanent. A GS comic with a story. Heh heh. This is how you know the universe's ended.

*It is incredibly unlikely that you'll love it unless you enjoyed the previous comics*

Edited by Pirok the Va-Matoran, Nov 01 2011 - 05:13 AM.

[Kazi the Matoran]

Well, this is definitley the best new series I've seen in a while. I like everything about it, so I have no complaints as of yet. I have a feeling you are going to be a pioneer in the next wave of comic makers. Good luck.

[Indigo Individual]

Well, here we are! Big Bang 2(96)!

[King Joe]

THE RACCOON DID IT! GASP! You might wanna change his name, so next time the universe doesn't explode. Maybe a raccoon named raccoon...

[Indigo Individual]

[quotename='King Joe']
THE RACCOON DID IT! GASP! You might wanna change his name, so next time the universe doesn't explode. Maybe a raccoon named raccoon...
[/quote]
Oh, don't worry. Temporal Ducks will sort out that. And the universe imploded, rathering than exploding.

[Kazi the Matoran]

So if the universe imploded, everything changed colour then? At least that's what I'm seeing. Either way, this plot is really good!

[Indigo Individual]

[quotename='Kazi's not here right now.']
this plot is really good!
[/quote]
Thankyou. The next episode is called 'Temporal Ducks'. Speculate on that title as much as you wish.

[JL v2]

I dont get it. I seriously dont.

Too random, and for the story, All I know is Proditor wants to kill Pirok, Raccoon wants to do something, and the world just got messed up.

[Indigo Individual]

[quotename='Jl1 223 X']
I dont get it. I seriously dont.

Too random, and for the story, All I know is Proditor wants to kill Pirok, Raccoon wants to do something, and the world just got messed up.
[/quote]
It seems one can't please everyone. *Sighs*
But I will do my best to explain: Proditor, due to the events of BZPRPG, is dead. He is also insane. And bored. Never a good combination, especially when there's a comic nearby. He doesn't want to kill Pirok, he just wants to destroy the comic. As for the raccoon, he only wants continued existence. And the universe suffered a Total Event Collapse, meaning that everywhen and everywhere don't, never have, and never will exist. I hope this clears things up!

And a trip to Games & Trivia should sort out any confusion related to LotTL's split personalities, the title, and the subversion of jokes causing the word 'Fezpocalypse' to become a trigger for a Total Event Collapse.

[Touko Fukawa]

Yay, big episdoe! Well, I made a funny cameo, and now Pirok has a moral dilemna! Oh no! Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to sufer the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune... Yeah, kind of random, but good all the same. Would these 'Temporal Ducks' have any relation to 'No ducks in the duck pond?' Hope next ep is up soon.

[Indigo Individual]

[quotename='Last of the Time Lords']
Would these 'Temporal Ducks' have any relation to 'No ducks in the duck pond?'
[/quote]
'Fraid not. What's the first phrase that pops into your head when you think of ducks?

[quotename='Last of the Time Lords']
Hope next ep is up soon.
[/quote]
TBH, so do I!

[Angrok Va Mata]

I read the comic. It's OK, but it's too random, but it's funny. This comic is very rushed, and beats Bionicle Glatorian comics 6 and 7 by a long shot! Still good comic nonetheless.

[Indigo Individual]

What is this people are saying about 'too random'? The past 2 have barely been random at all!
Besides, you can NEVER be too random, IMO. Which is probably why people are saying this is too random...

[Indigo Individual]

Okay, here it is. The Series 1 finale, Temporal Ducks.

Don't worry, I'll be making Series 2 soon. I meant to make one a month, but October's was delayed, so there'll be two this month.
And Series 2'll be longer, as well.
That's all, folks!

[King Joe]

Series 2? Already? Ah well, carve up your comics however you see fit. Anyway...
I see there's a spacetime crack in your comics. Whoo hoo! This'll be fun!
Something I noticed, and it may just be due to the kit you use, but your characters don't move much. They have one pose, and don't change much at all, and their expressions are stoic as well. Maybe you can shake it up a bit next time? And you can do wonders with expressions with just a few pixels around the eyes. Give it a shot!

Good comic, not trying to shove you down or anything, just giving some tips!

[Indigo Individual]

Series 2? Already? Ah well, carve up your comics however you see fit. Anyway...
I see there's a spacetime crack in your comics. Whoo hoo! This'll be fun!
Something I noticed, and it may just be due to the kit you use, but your characters don't move much. They have one pose, and don't change much at all, and their expressions are stoic as well. Maybe you can shake it up a bit next time? And you can do wonders with expressions with just a few pixels around the eyes. Give it a shot!

Good comic, not trying to shove you down or anything, just giving some tips!

Don't consider them as series, more as... story arcs.
And I'm gonna do more with poses and expressions in S2. I've already begun work on 'em. Massive twist at the start! And nice job noticing the crack! That's another important bit. Pretty soon, I'll have an S2 banner ready. It'll be a .GIF.
Nevermind, having trouble making a .GIF.

Edited by Pirok the Va-Matoran, Nov 02 2011 - 02:52 PM.

[Indigo Individual]

S2 preview! Be warned, it's very much timey-wimey.


And here are a few new expressions, in order: 'Normal', 'Bored', 'Surprised', and 'Oooo! Shiny!'.

Edited by Pirok the Va-Matoran, Nov 02 2011 - 04:33 PM.