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[Neelh]

Do not enter the mansion, for that is where they wait...


Here

CAST

Lewa - Italy Veneziano
Onua - Germany
Kopaka - Japan
Matau - Prussia

MUSIC

Episode 1 - Caught in a Dream - All Insane Kids
Episode 2 - An Awful Lot of Running - Chameleon Circuit

Miscellanous
Creeping in my Soul - Cryoshell
Bye Bye Babylon - Cryoshell
Trigger - Cryoshell
Closer to the Truth - Cryoshell
Falling - Cryoshell
The Room - Cryoshell
Come to my Heaven - Cryoshell
Murky - Cryoshell
Face Me - Cryoshell
Gravity Hurts - Cryoshell
Summertime - My Chemical Romance
S/C/A/R/E/C/R/O/W - My Chemical Romance
Bulletproof Heart - My Chemical Romance
The Only Hope For Me Is You - My Chemical Romance
The Messenger - Linkin Park
Iridescence - Linkin Park
The Kill - 30 Seconds to Mars
Boulevard of Broken Dreams - Green Day
Wake Me Up When September Ends - Green Day
21 Guns - Green ay
Last Night on Earth - Green Day
What It Takes To Be A Hero - All Insane Kids
Move Along - All American Rejects
It Ends Tonight - All American Rejects
Viva La Vida - Coldplay
Bad Apple - Hetaloid version, original by Touhou
Uninstall - Geekyfandubs version (IMO), riginally by Chiki Isakawa (s/p?)
Ichiban no Takaramoni - Karuta

AUTHOR NOTES

This will differ quite a bit from the original. For example, I may put in a little more of the original pairings, USUK, GerIta, and Spamano. Some characters may not make sense unless you know both Hetalia and Bionicle pretty well.

So, do you like it? This review is under construction at the moment. I want to make it very pretty!

...I sounded like such a girl. Or Feli. Or we could paint it wicked hipster pink!. Or white. Ah well!

Edited by Neelh, Dec 30 2011 - 06:27 AM.

[Peach 00]

Although I have absolutely no clue what Hetalia is, I'm enjoying this so far.

So far, I like it. Good descriptions, good details - the dialogue is entertaining, my favorite being: 'Is Onua afraid of ghosty-wosties?' 'Shaddup.' I had to laugh at that, because the response is quick and amusing. Might I add, also, is that the character's personalities are pretty much in the ballpark when it comes to the way they act, and especially their reactions. However, the one complaint I have is that Matau and Lewa's chutespeak/whateverspeak is kind of strangely worded.

Also, another complaint, now that I mention it: It's a little rushed. Kopaka just suddenly changes - you've got to make it a shock, to kind of dramatize it a little more. I mean, it's not entirely neccessary, but it would probably be a little better that way. Either way, it was still an interesting turn of events.

Still, this is pretty awesome so far. I can't wait for the next chapter, Neelh. KUTGW!

(By the way, any chance of Seven Legends being reposted? =] )

[Neelh]

Although I have absolutely no clue what Hetalia is, I'm enjoying this so far.

So far, I like it. Good descriptions, good details - the dialogue is entertaining, my favorite being: 'Is Onua afraid of ghosty-wosties?' 'Shaddup.' I had to laugh at that, because the response is quick and amusing. Might I add, also, is that the character's personalities are pretty much in the ballpark when it comes to the way they act, and especially their reactions. However, the one complaint I have is that Matau and Lewa's chutespeak/whateverspeak is kind of strangely worded.

Also, another complaint, now that I mention it: It's a little rushed. Kopaka just suddenly changes - you've got to make it a shock, to kind of dramatize it a little more. I mean, it's not entirely neccessary, but it would probably be a little better that way. Either way, it was still an interesting turn of events.

Still, this is pretty awesome so far. I can't wait for the next chapter, Neelh. KUTGW!

(By the way, any chance of Seven Legends being reposted? =] )

If you look at HetaOni, the characters are pretty different. I had a very short time to finish the entire episode, or else I would have never finished it. Also, he does change quite quckly. It's based on a videogame, and I actually quite liked the abruptness of it. It starts to flow better as the story goes on.