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[Zerothemaster]

You try your best but its not quite there

1. the CAKE (exon)
2)i leik moovys


3) crisms 4)untld sotry prt 1
credit to 18 and EGGS ON





_{(this is me and Exon's new comic series for the jollies of it. Don't take it seriously, 'cuz we're not XD)}

Edited by Zerothemaster, Feb 03 2012 - 06:38 PM.

[Darcsyde]

Ripoff of Zakitano?

Nuuu, his were easier to read.

[Tavakai]

:uh: to Darcsyde.

Anyway, it's nice to see that Zakitano has apparently set the newest trend in the heightening of Artwork III's graphical style. I salute you, good sir.

[Darcsyde]

:uh: to Darcsyde.

Anyway, it's nice to see that Zakitano has apparently set the newest trend in the heightening of Artwork III's graphical style. I salute you, good sir.

And we wonder why no one has any respect for AIII...

But don't get me wrong. This comic style can be quite funny.

[Zerothemaster]

yayz new banner

at least its a post that's not a spam

[Exon]

About time I post in this...

Anyway, expect a new comic by Monday!

~Exon

[P962]

Uhh...That's a cool comic ya got there. Mind telling any of us what it's about?

[Tavakai]

Uhh...That's a cool comic ya got there. Mind telling any of us what it's about?

It chronicles the cunning exploits of Exon, who attempted to steal and consume Zero's cake, believed he had done so, and was later informed, much to his disappointment, that it was not in fact a cake, but a lie.

[Taka Nuvia]

I am not sure whether I should laugh or cry... so I'll just give you an objective 'review'.

I mean, I see what you are going for, really, but it's super-hard to distinguish what is going on. Maybe reduce the messiness by just a slight degree or two? The humor is fine, but the graphics... I am not too fond of them.

[Exon]

Uhh...That's a cool comic ya got there. Mind telling any of us what it's about?

It chronicles the cunning exploits of Exon, who attempted to steal and consume Zero's cake, believed he had done so, and was later informed, much to his disappointment, that it was not in fact a cake, but a lie.

Lol. That is quite the explanation thar. Also, instead of disappointment, I think chagrin is a much better word.

I am not sure whether I should laugh or cry... so I'll just give you an objective 'review'.

I mean, I see what you are going for, really, but it's super-hard to distinguish what is going on. Maybe reduce the messiness by just a slight degree or two? The humor is fine, but the graphics... I am not too fond of them.

Yeah, we noticed that. so we have reasoned to make future comics a little less horrendous as that one.

Also, I love the picture there. It made me laugh.

Okay, so expect a comic tomorrow from either me of Zero (probably me though, because Zero seems busy at the moment)

~Exon

[Taka Nuvia]

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I am not sure whether I should laugh or cry... so I'll just give you an objective 'review'.

I mean, I see what you are going for, really, but it's super-hard to distinguish what is going on. Maybe reduce the messiness by just a slight degree or two? The humor is fine, but the graphics... I am not too fond of them.

Yeah, we noticed that. so we have reasoned to make future comics a little less horrendous as that one.

Also, I love the picture there. It made me laugh.

Okay, so expect a comic tomorrow from either me of Zero (probably me though, because Zero seems busy at the moment)

~Exon

Well, in that case I'll be keeping an eye on this topic because, as said, the humor's fine.

Why thank you.

[Zerothemaster]

2)i leik moovys

Some people have no respect for the Higher Arts. :3

loljk

Oh, and credit to some guy named "zalgo" for the image.

Edited by Zerothemaster, Nov 28 2011 - 08:02 PM.

[King Joe]

...

FACE-PALM!
That was an awful pun.
Awful.
Absolutely terrible.
And it made me chuckle.
Even though the graphics are terrible (On purpose, I know), this still makes me laugh. I will follow this.

[Tenebrae Invictus]

eh, I'll go back to reading old BIONICLE ADVENTURS COMIXS

but to be constructive, needs more jpg distortion

Edited by Tenebrae Invictus, Nov 28 2011 - 08:36 PM.

[WVUFan!]

I'm pretty sure watching a movie version of Cupcakes would actually give you Night Mares.

Lets Go Mountaineers!

[LNU n' Pinkie Pie]

I'm pretty sure watching a movie version of Cupcakes would actually give you Night Mares.

And the worst part is such a thing actually exists.

You shouldn't worry about the common riff-raff Zero. Your humor is too refined for their taste anyway.

[Taka Nuvia]

2)i leik moovys

i liek :3

No really, in terms of graphics, it's muuuch easier to read&comprehend than the last one. And it's entertaining. ^^

[BioCry]

So much easier to read now.

I LOLed. Good comic.

-

[Ultimate Sybre]

OH MY DEAD- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! funny



Edit: Please see the Comics Rules and Guidelines about generic comments.
-Wind-

Edited by -Windrider-, Dec 13 2011 - 06:47 PM.

[Dragonfly the Luminescent]

AAGH! My poor eyes! IT BUUURNS!!
SOMEBODY CHISEL THE IMAGES OFF MY RETNAS!!

Did you really expect a nice review? It's an original idea, I admit, but it's so ... weird.

[Zerothemaster]

AAGH! My poor eyes! IT BUUURNS!!
SOMEBODY CHISEL THE IMAGES OFF MY RETNAS!!

Did you really expect a nice review? It's an original idea, I admit, but it's so ... weird.

It's not even an original idea XD

Its just two very bored comic makers ripping off of Zakitano's idea

And it's not for everyone, so I'm not offended at all. Can't speak for Exon, tho

[Zerothemaster]

3) crisms

[Exon]

3) crisms

Lol, How dare you doubt my christmas tree setting up skills.

I was gonna do one, but I got distracted by trivial pursuit.

~Exon

Edited by Exon, Feb 03 2012 - 01:58 AM.

[Zerothemaster]

4)untld sotry prt 1

[-Windrider-]

I would post saying only, "You're awesome," but I would get reported for spam, and rightfully so. Then I would have to delete my own post or maybe leave an edit telling myself to read the rules, which I wrote. You get the picture. My boss wouldn't like it, in any case.

I can't exactly tell if Eggs/Exon is saying, "i m vry cld" or "i m vry old." I think it is a "c" and not an "o," but I guess it makes sense either way. They say wisdom comes with old age, but that is not the case here, for the naïveté is simply astounding. It does, however, lead to the excellent premise of someone's having mistaken "Merry Christmas!" for "Marry Christmas!" which I guess might make for a merry Christmas upon the exchanging of vows. I mean look at that handsome, distorted Exon. Christmas would be happy to marry such a fellow.

Edited by -Windrider-, Feb 02 2012 - 10:41 PM.
Forgot the possessive case preceding a gerund.

[King Joe]

Oy, these always make my brain hurt. But they always make me laugh too.
Good comic, but I can't read the text to save my life.

[Exon]

I wonder who this "Christmas" may be. I don't think I can marry someone I don't know.

Also, that was quite the dilemma you had Mr. Rider. That is so being quoted in my sig.

~Exon