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[Nav3taX]

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Comics that Derp-

1. Characters lineup
2. Bronies
3. FUS RO DAH
4. Fish
5. Stalker Moon
6. arrow to the knee
7. I can smell him
8. Strangely cute!.
10. FOR THE EMPEROR!
11. I was wrong - Tarvitz did die [originaly called GIME DAT BOOK]
12. How did I get here?
13. the fun has been doubled!
14. 3 year Huna!
15. Quaility.
16. Ditto
17. Mute
18. Fish
19. your hearing things.
20. You're still hearing things
21. Get your dang ears checked.
22. TACO
23. Moustache
24. Oh, I'm here.
25. Nice mask.
26. Happy Australia Day!
27. Magikz
28. Le Nothing
29. Not bad.
30. only aussie author [hey im not actuly woo!]
31. year 9
32. Vataki's birthday!
33. Squirtle
34. Finally {removed, track down my DA if you really wanna see it}
35. Authors needed!!
36. Not Gielinor!!

37. ated it

38. Break

39. writing

40. MAKE ME AN ADMIN FOR TOHU'S SAKE

41. Authors block!

42. BOOM

43. Procrastination again.

44. COIFS

45. Upon Expiration. Derp.

46. Martian and Pure

1. Odor
2. not so love and tolerance

3. DERP

1. surprise
2. CHARGE!

1. rejoice!

1. arrow to the

2. Herp

3. You ain't no stewie Griffin

1. Nope.. Lazorz

1. Tooth Fairy

1.

1. VANDAL!

2. AROUND THE WORLD

3. The Spree

4. Who's Dead?

Authors- People who derp with me.
1. Biocryptid
2. Katarno Kuuls
3.Dr Giggles
4.Bjoacx
5.Gelboy
6.Haley786
7.Justax Kal
8. Sybre
9.

10.

Would you like to Derp too?

PM your sprite and some of your work!

[derp kit]

Permantent Guest Characters - other people who also derp with me.
1. Vataki
2. Kazi
3. king Joe
4. Bjoacx
5. LNU
6. Sybre
7. Kyo
8. Chan'e
9.Nuparurocks
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would you like to be on Derp?

PM me your sprite!

Credits -
people who made RZMK
Parkway Drive for being Australian and giving me music to headbang too while I made comics
Breaking Benjamin for the same thing
and Disturbed
and System of a Down
Lego for Bionicles
me for the hats, pannels, weapons, gear & other props
the peeples who made Desktop Ponies for the Pony sprites which I happly take no credit for.
Australia for exsisting
and BZPower for being there for me for 3 years and hopefully many more!

Comic Count at [58] on [13/04/2012]

Edited by Nav3taX, May 15 2012 - 04:40 AM.
"Finally" comic's link broken. Please do not insult other members or use filtered words.

[Justax-Kal]

Cast roll!
Can't really say anything about this series now because I can't rate a comic like that for humor. I like how you gave everyone different backgrounds though. It was a nice touch.

J-K out.

[Vataki “Vahi” Teridax]

Cool, it's here.

The title itself of the series is awesome. Herp de Derp. I love the looks of the backgrounds. Specifically the last few. They looked very different.

That's all I can really say for a series that only has one comic so far. But I will keep my eye on this.

[Nav3taX]

thanks all

new comic out in a week or so

Edited by Nav3taX, Mar 07 2012 - 08:54 PM.

[Nav3taX]

Okay new comic was early

Bronies

see Vataki? just like what we discussed in our skype chat! but alittle if not alot different XD

[Vataki “Vahi” Teridax]

I personally think this is a little funnier than the version you were talking about on Skype. Good work.

[-Absorba-]

Here's my honest opinion about MLP:FIS (congrats, guys who are wondering!)

While it's not as great as Bronies say it is, I personally think it isn't that bad.

See, the main criticism I have is that IT'S SO GROAN-INDUCING! No, seriously, there are a lot of moments where I was wondering when the heck should I laugh uncomfortably, or just sigh in agony. Also, the songs themselves REALLY, REALLY bug me. I don't have anything against any of them, it's just the vocabulary is equally groan-inducing. This,however, I can blame for the target demographic (THAT IS FOR LITTLE GIRLS!)

Now, here's what I DID like. The animation is spectacular. End of story.

Next, the characters are actually taken very seriously, and they do have dimensions, personality, and relations. Unfortunately.... let's look at them for a sec.

Applejack-Ethnic Representative
Rarity-Sophisticated
Twilight Sparkle-Bookworm
Pinkie Pie-Loose Screw/Lovable Kook
Rainbow Dash-Naturo/Sonic/Free spirit
Fluttershy-Shy one

However, they are actually well done takes on these character bases. Cliche, yeah, but well done for what they are. (But seriously, nobody can argue that Pinkie Pie is just hilariously awesome. I have to admit that.)

Also, the show takes itself seriously as well. When I first found out that they called the world Equestria, I almost Carapared myself (it's deprived from Equestrian, which is loose Latin for "man who rides horses"). I don't know why, but it seems so cliche and redundant, but it's also one of the best breaths of fresh air I've seen.

It's not perfect, but I personally think it is enjoyable for what it's worth. I am not a brony, but I find it my "guilty pleasure."


Now, with my rant out of the way, let's go on to the comic.

The comic has really great opportunities, but can you probably add a bit more expression in the characters? Mainly you? You just kind of sit there, not moving a muscle. Or your eyes. Also, why is your text red? If you're yellow, shouldn't it be....

Also, why are the lights in the background cut off? Um...

Ah well. I'll keep an eye on this later.

[Nav3taX]

@absorba - Well, Lights arent cut off XD they're cemi circles! XD I did'nt want round lights :3

this is the conversation me and Vataki had about it last night
[3:47:13 AM] Nav3taX1.2.3.: new comics up on Derp
[3:47:40 AM] (Vataki): yeah i saw it
[3:47:48 AM] Nav3taX1.2.3.: Pony one?
[3:47:56 AM] (Vataki): yus
[3:48:09 AM] (Vataki): the one were vahi "runs like a girl"
[3:48:19 AM] Nav3taX1.2.3.: XD
[3:48:27 AM] Nav3taX1.2.3.: Cause in season 2
[3:48:31 AM] Nav3taX1.2.3.: when luna comes back
[3:48:31 AM] (Vataki): it was even funnier than the original idea, ino
[3:48:34 AM] (Vataki): imo*
[3:48:41 AM] (Vataki): o lol
[3:48:47 AM] Nav3taX1.2.3.: Pinkie pie convinces all the kids that shes going to gobble them up

that might also explain my choice of Nightmare Moon for that comic to non bronies non bronies, I mean, Not-bronies-yet* XD

new comic anyone? - FUS RO DAH

[Vataki “Vahi” Teridax]

I didn't quite get the joke because I don't play Skyrim, but I love the looks of the text in that comic. Great job

[Kazi the Matoran]

Well done! I have a feeling my hearing won't be so good for a bit though.

[Justax-Kal]

I do believe that has become the new Shoop-Da-Woop.
Also, next time, can you cut down on all the extra white space on the bottom of the comic. It makes the file a lot bigger than it needs to be.

J-K out.

[Nav3taX]

Yeah Im gonna XD I just couldent be botherd as I made that at what? 1, 2 am?
But I shall in the future! dont worry XP

HAPPEH NEW YEAR!

[Nav3taX]

NEW COMIC WOO

Something Smells Fishy

[Nav3taX]

new comic!!

LIKE THE PLAGUE

[Blank0000]

I like the comics, although, I get disappointed when I get to the end because of how short they are, witch would be a complaint but short is the style here so, GREAT COMICS!

[Nav3taX]

thanks Bjoacx! Newer comics should become a bit longer i guess, im focusing more on a short comedy style at the moment

[Blank0000]

thanks Bjoacx! Newer comics should become a bit longer i guess, im focusing more on a short comedy style at the moment

I totally agree, before BZP went down I was making like 30-40 panel comics and they are a lot harder to make entertaining therefore are not good, your however are extremely funny and you can post many at a time so it works out perfectly, keep up the good work!

[Nav3taX]

Danke! ( thankyou in German Lol )

I fear my helmet will not fit anymore, for your compliments swell my head - Garviel Loken

Haha, thanks man, I try to make 1 a day, late at night when I have my privacy and ideas brought on by fatigue XD

[Nav3taX]

Arrow to the knee!!

anyone?

[LNU n' Pinkie Pie]

I used to make overused jokes like you...

Then I took a cow to the sternum. (Hee hee. You thought I was gonna say it.)

I have to say, I do like these. A couple of chuckles throughout. I liked your visual representation of the Fus Ro Dah. I think you pulled it off better than I did.

Something about a guy getting hit in the face with a giant minnow makes me smile. Not sure why.

Also, liked the pony cameos (of course). Now if you ever have an issue with non-bronies, just sic Nightmare Moon.

I do have one piece of advice though. Using jokes like the Arrow to the Knee and Fus Ro Dah can be funny at first, but be sure not to use them to often. People tend to just get sick of them. It isn't to that point yet, I'm just warning you so it DOESN'T get there.

All in all though, love the comics. They seem to come out pretty regularly as well. So that's a bonus.

[Nav3taX]

Thanks LNU, I know not to use the Fus Ro Dah and arrow to the knee jokes too much, as I admitt too they can be extremly aggitating XD4
Oh and that "guy" getting hit in the face with a minnow is a girl XD her name is Sorallo one of my new characters, it was a guy, originaly as it was gonna be my new sprite and I was gonna retire the current one, But I decided against it as It is kind of how im known so I also made it a girl XD

And Yeah pretty regularly, as I try to make at least one comic everyday, for example I actuly made two today which puts me one ahead if I continue just posting and making 1-a-day.

And yes I think Im gonna milk the nightmare moon thing some more. XD

and nice A2TK parody XD

[Nav3taX]

3 new comics!! and the first ones by Autodude!!

go check em out!


and welcome the new Author Biocryptid!
[Link to related comic]

[King Joe]

For comic ten, let me remind you that you need to deeplink to DeviantArt, according to the rules. Also, I didn't quite get the joke of comic 8.

[Nav3taX]

Comic 8 is a continuation of Comic 3, when I Fus Ro Dah kazi, Auto and Fluttershy are standing out in a field and he goes flying past as shown..

and DERP I though I did deeplink, well Ill check my links next time -- fixing

[King Joe]

Comic 8 is a continuation of Comic 3, when I Fus Ro Dah kazi, Auto and Fluttershy are standing out in a field and he goes flying past as shown..

I just meant the ding part...

[Nav3taX]

Have you never watched Poke'mon?
gosh.. I mean... You can't not get that part, and have watched Poke'mon..

[King Joe]

That explains it then. Nope. Never watched it.

[Nav3taX]

you have no idea what your missing xD

New PGS!

Welcome LNU!

[Not bad]

[Calvirick]

So many memes.

That last comic was funny. But it would be pretty cool if some of the stuff I was laughing at was originated from you and not the internet.

[LNU n' Pinkie Pie]

Welp. Guess Pinkie and I will be sticking around for a while. And we brought Juice boxes!!!

Aaaand memefaces. I think I've seen that Pinkie/Obama face before. Yeah, it weirded me out a little then, too.

[Nav3taX]

I got it when I searched "not bad" on the internet
Google images - "not bad rage face"

HERP DE DERP

New comic YAY

[King Joe]

A non brony's worst nightmare: finding something about the ponys cute and adorable.

[Nav3taX]

but its a total d'awwww moment XD

[Calvirick]

More like. DOI!!

What a nightmare indeed.

[LNU n' Pinkie Pie]

Getting mauled by zombie bronies?

That'll ruin your hole day.

And then you wake up to Luna, and you know it's all gun be k.

[Vataki “Vahi” Teridax]

Indeed, the ponies are cute, but cute isn't enough to make me watch a TV show.

Funny comic, Nav.

[Takaru 1111]

LOLs. These are pretty funny. I'm gonna have to GS.

I especially like Vahi being chased around by NMM and Luna

I do believe that has become the new Shoop-Da-Woop.

J-K out.

No, the Shoop-Da-Whoop is eternal, as is BURN STUFF!1!!!

Anyway, KUTGW Nav.

[Nav3taX]

Oh my, I think im popular XD

new comic in 2 days or so.... xD or maybe tonight.. or tomorrow... You never know

[Calvirick]

If you're really going to do comics for a long time, keep at it.
If that means keeping us all entertained and making you have no life.
Ask your parents first.

[Akuna Toa of Sonics]

Uh-oh, the brony epidemic is spreading even more...
*raids stores and hides*