Please post any comments on my old stories here. I've re-posted the damaged stories in the new forum, and all the links are operational now (let me know if you find otherwise -- you may have to log in again after you return to the new forum from the old one).
I'm currently writing new chapters of Journey into the Light, and I will start a new discussion topic when I post them.
Gali, Toa of Water
Onua & Lewa
Tahu, Toa of Fire
Lewa, Toa of Air (again)
Onua, Toa of Earth (again)
Kopaka, Toa of Ice
Pohatu, Toa of Stone
All the Toa
Wairuha Nuva, Toa Kaita of Wisdom
Akamai Nuva, Toa Kaita of Valor
Takanuva, Toa of Light, and Jaller
Yotanua, Toa of Time
Fatoro the Hoi Trainer
Kimi the Photographer
Takua the Chronicler
Hafu the Stone-Carver
Huki and Maku
Nuparu and Taipu
Kongu and Tamaru
Jala and Takua
The Bahrag (interview by FallenTurtles, because I was chicken)
Gali interviews GaliGee
The Powerless Toa Nuva (ghost-written for MataNuiHero)
"Cockroaches the size of Great Danes! Eeeew!" --Sugar Plum Fairy Barbie
Barbies Invade Mata Nui, Looking for Eligible Bachelors
After the only Ken is married off, the Barbies come to Mata Nui looking for husbands. The Toa are looking for a weapons technology transfer. What will they learn from each other? (screenplay-style comedy, five chapters)
Lewa, wearing his Huna and leaning on a palm tree, laughed to himself. "This is gonna be good," he thought.
Gali Loses Her Head, Lewa switches it with Pohatu's
After the victory party for Makuta's defeat, Lewa plays a little prank. How will the other Toa react? (epic-style comedy, seven chapters)
“San Diego, CALIFORNIA?" I asked incredulously. "But that's fifteen hundred miles away!"
Onua grinned. "I live to ride, baby."
Road Trip with Onua, Three Thousand Miles on Cajun’s Harley
A grocery trip turns into a cross-country adventure, especially when we run into a gang of Nuhvok with a bad attitude. (epic, eight chapters)
"Someone might get hurt," I said to Onua and Pohatu. "Aren't you going to do something?"
"Ten bars of protodermis says she'll take him," said Pohatu.
The Toa Nuva at Kennedy International Airport, ... there's gonna be a rumble!
The Toa Nuva are on their way back to Mata Nui after their vacation. But they don't seem very rested and relaxed... someone is spoiling for a fight! (comedy, three parts)
Kotu laughed. "When have I ever passed up a chance to play a joke on Huki?" But as she followed Maku out of the hut, she glanced nervously at her friend.
The Greening Of Po- Koro, Featuring MakuTa
What's gotten into Maku? When she thinks Huki has forgotten their anniversary, she decides to get revenge. (comedy, eight chapters)
Interview with Makuta, Spirit of Evil
Interview with Makuta, Spirit of Evil, again
I watched the door being wrenched off its hinges and slammed to the ground. The Spirit of Evil ducked through the doorway and walked over the door. “Don’t be shy, my love!” he said cheerfully. “I’m here to take you for a little ride!”
Road Trip with Makuta, in his black Coupe de Ville convertible
Makuta, in his relentless effort to recruit me to the dark side, takes me to Mata Nui in his Cadillac, with the Rahkshi jumping around in the back seat. (dark comedy, posted in Epics, five chapters)
Smiling, Makuta approached his seat. “GaliGee! It’s so good to see you.” He reached across the table and took my hand. “How are you, my cupcake?”
I yanked my hand away. “Fine, except that I’m the size of a human three-year-old.”
Makuta Makes Me Mini
Never mouth off at an evil megalomaniac. (short story)
"Oh, that reminds me. I have to think of a new name for the island. Do you have any ideas?”
“This is LEGO, Makuta. You’re not going to win.”
“Then you’ll die with me,” he said with a sinister grin.
Makuta's Last Try
My supernatural stalker returned, but he'll never darken my doorway again--because I stumbled onto what turned out to be his deepest fear. (short story)
That Annoying Gali Gee Mask Of Light Sig Countdown
Just a wacky little list to kill time while I looked forward to watching Makuta's demise.
“Yes, it’s me, darling,” he smiled weakly. “Say, those blue eyes do look good on you, if I might say so myself. Why don’t we go somewhere we can talk?”
As much as I dreaded another encounter with Makuta, I was curious about some things that he had done in the Mask of Light. Naturally, he had a few surprises in store for me. (short story)
Makuta's Business Card
Makuta used my account to post his card on BZPower in hopes of getting some work, just in case LEGO decided not to renew his contract.
Makuta started the motor and pulled into the street. “Remember how I promised you that one day we would rule Mata Nui together?”
“Uh, yeah,” I muttered uneasily.
“Well, now that everyone has left for Metru Nui, we will!” he smiled.
Just when I thought it was safe to order a pizza again, Makuta showed up holding the box. The Master of Shadows recruited me to supervise the Rahkshi while they rebuilt the Matoran villages, on the newly vacated island he’d been trying to take over for years. It was a job offer I couldn’t refuse. (Dark comedy, posted in epics, 30 chapters.)
Happy Mother's Day, GaliGee gets a weird e-mail from Mangaia
A bizarre yet heartfelt message from Makuta's sons.
The maître-d’ scanned the reservation page on his podium. “Sir, I’m afraid you’re not on the list,” he replied curtly. He glanced at Makuta’s staff and added, “And we don’t allow weapons in here.”
Makuta leaned over him and grabbed his pen. He scrawled a large in the middle of the page. His Mask of Shadow glowing darkly, he snarled, “Check again.”
Makuta Gets a Blast from the Past
Wondering if Makuta has a heart? Read the story of my dinner with Makuta, and judge for yourself. (Dark comedy, posted in epics, 5 chapters plus brief epilogue.)
“You didn’t think I was just looking for a traveling companion, did you?” sneered the shapeshifter. “I’ve seen road kill on this trip I’d rather spend time with.”
I wondered what kind of sinister plan I was to be involved in this time as I fumbled with the complicated seat belt. “I suppose you’re going to use me as bait?”
“Bingo,” she replied.
Road Trip With Krahka
Krahka is on the warpath to get revenge against Makuta, her former sweetheart. And naturally I get caught in the web of intrigue. (Dark comedy, posted in epics, 18 chapters)
Makuta looked at me for thoughtfully for a moment. “My poor little sweetheart. Fear is rising off you like heat waves off the Great Furnace right now.” A gentle smile crossed his Kraahkan. “If it makes you feel better, my beauty, we’ll keep our love secret until Roodaka goes back to Metru Nui. I’m certainly not averse to participating in the occasional conspiracy.”
“Makuta, our ‘love’ is a figment of your twisted imagination,” I scowled, making quotation marks in the air with my fingers.
The filming of Web of Shadows has begun, and everything should go smoothly. After all, it's a flashback. But some of the characters have plans to make it end differently this time. (Dark comedy, posted in epics, 51 chapters)
Onua gasped. "No wonder you sensed power, Whenua. There are four Pakari in there!”
Onua's Golden Kanohi
Onua puts own his quest for the masks on hold to help the other Toa. But will Makuta get to him before he gets his Golden Kanohi? (epic, ten chapters)
"Wait!" Gali heard a voice call out. "Hold your discs! This is the one we have been expecting!"
Gali recalls how each of the other Toa, and Turaga Nokama, came to have a special place in her heart. (epic, seven chapters)
Tahu yelled in pain and leaped out, flinging molten rock everywhere. His whole body writhed with the searing heat. As he stood on the bank gasping, the lava hardened into a solid casing of stone.
Tahu, Master of Fire
From the moment Tahu arrives on Mata Nui, he wields the power of fire. Can he learn to harness it for the good of all? (epic, six chapters plus epilogue)
"You're going a little too fast for me, Huki," grinned Pohatu. "So I'm I one of these 'Toa'?"
Pohatu, Solid as Stone
Even though he is constantly using his incredible stone powers to defend his people, Pohatu is never too busy to encourage a friend. (epic, five chapters)
The tall green being held the mask at arm’s length and studied its smooth curves. “I’m going to be wearing a big metal grin, all the time,” he laughed.
Lewa Defies Gravity
Light-hearted and light-footed, Lewa enters a world weighed down by evil. But he is determined not to let it get him down. (epic, seven chapters)
Kopaka had had high hopes for the Rau, but so far Nuju had told him nothing. "I guess I'll have to go read the answers for myself." He took a lightstone from one of the sconces on the wall, walked behind the statue, and descended the stairs to the Wall of Destiny.
Kopaka: Icy Visionary
With his amazingly sharp eyes and mind, Kopaka sees things on Mata Nui in a very different way than everyone else--he even has visions of the future. But as he uses his increasing knowledge and skill to win peace for his people, will he ever find inner peace for himself? (epic, six chapters)
Turaga Vakama said to fill my journal with lots of detail, since I can always shorten it later when I transcribe it. Besides, it’s easier to write in a paper book than to carve into stone. So I’m going to write about everything, even the things I’m not going to tell Turaga Vakama. I’m going to be the only one reading it, anyway.
Journey Into The Light, Part I: The Bohrok-Kal (completed epic, re-posted in the new forum)
Journey Into The Light, Part II: Peacetime (epic in progress, re-posted in the new forum)
Takua fills his journal with the adventures of his heroes, the Toa, while they track down the Bohrok-Kal and oversee the newfound peace. Neither he nor his his loyal friend Jaller have a glimmer that his own story will become so important.
Kopaka woke with a start, panting. He was lying face down on a large rock at the bottom of a deep, icy canyon. Gali's last cry was still echoing in his head.
After Kopaka loses his ice powers, he is tormented by a strange dream. (short story, one post)
The Toa all had a similar dream -- but each saw things a little differently. (comedy interviews, one post each)
It's only fair, after prying into the Toa's dreams, to let you read about one of mine. (comedy story, one post)
Seven Heroes, One Destiny by Israeli Toa
"As they jump this trench, I'll knock the krana out. My Hau will protect me from -- AAAAH!"
Tahu Enslaved, a 2-page comic LEGO would never do
When Tahu gets kranaed, what will Gali do to save him?
Onua's Lucky Day
Onua's looking out for his friends, as usual... and this time, he gets a nice surprise.
Snow Day: A Dream of Kopaka
Kopaka's recurring dream about playing in the snow with Gali never ends the way he would like, but at least they have fun.
Makuta's Makeshift New Form
After getting smashed by the big door, Makuta scraped this scrap heap of a form together.
Makuta finally indulged his creepy fantasy and rebuilt me so I wouldn't look like a Toa.
Written by GaliGee, unless otherwise noted. With massive amounts of help and ideas from the following friends:
AlexanderRM, artemisfowl, Baihumon, Binkmeister, Blue Cajun, chip-e, CISCAS V of the Gamemasters, coldanddeadly, Comet Ball Traitor, Compka Toa of Electricity, Creator of Lava Lord of Vahi, CrypticIdentity, Deadly Kanohi Master, dhik nuva, dragalcat, Elf Toa, FallenTurtles, Galikat, Gali Nuva 91, GregF, Groucho Marx, Goeyoshi, Haine, C.A. Hapka, Huriko, Huta, Israeli Toa, Jaraki, Jasaga, Kaiapu, kairos (Xirahk), Kikua, Kitty-Chan, Kopaka's Ice Engineering, Kopaka Toa of Ice, Kopaka_Toa_of_Ice, Kopaka and Gali's Child, KopakaX, Lewa Nuva, Lewa The Jester, Lewa_The_Punk! Lewaswingin, Maslego, Master of Purity, MataNuiHero, Matthias the Warrior, Natha, Noremac, Nova Nuhvok, nuhvok11, Nuva Kaita, NuvaWarrior, Of Doom, pocamu, pohatu jr, Prohatu910, pucateamskater, Purple Pohatu, Rahi Zaku, real small guy, Shioi, silentlunchbag34, tahu3220, Toa Nuva vs Makuta, Toa of Plastic, Toomai, Torhu, Tovnu, TheBlindMan2, The Eighth Horse, TuragaVakama, Vashi, wairuhaNuva, xccj, Yotanua, Toa of Time, Zerpeth
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Edited by GaliGee, Feb 10 2012 - 02:27 PM.