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[Kazi the Matoran]

More towards the end is where it gets hard to read. If you fix that up, it'll be much easier to understand.

[Exon]

that text style is called my handwriting XD thanks Exon

Ur welcome.

More towards the end is where it gets hard to read. If you fix that up, it'll be much easier to understand.

I thought that the inability to read the text at the end was caused by the fact "that-person-whos-name-I-seem-too-forget" slipped back into unconsciousnes, causeing them to be unable to understand Navin.

~Exon

Edited by Exon, Dec 27 2011 - 12:12 AM.

[Kazi the Matoran]

that text style is called my handwriting XD thanks Exon

Ur welcome.

More towards the end is where it gets hard to read. If you fix that up, it'll be much easier to understand.

I thought that the inability to read the text at the end was caused by the fact "that-person-whos-name-I-seem-too-forget" slipped back into unconsciousnes, causeing them to be unable to understand Navin. ~Exon

I see. Well, either way, it'd be nice to be able to read it. That is, however, and interesting theory.

[Nav3taX]

Thanks! Ill have the next comic out soon 8)

[InnerRayg]

I don't know if you guys are aware, but this Comic seems to be broken.

Edited by InnerRayg, Dec 29 2011 - 07:26 AM.

[Exon]

I don't know if you guys are aware, but this Comic seems to be broken.

Hm, that's odd. It seems that the links to Depar's first two comics are broken.

~Exon

[Knave]

Welp. I didn't like them anyway.

If you have any idea what they were about, feel free to tell me. I'll redo them, if you want.

[Kazi the Matoran]

To be honest, I have no clue. You can redo the if you like, but it doesn't really matter to me.

[Nav3taX]

*burts through door panting*

DONT WORRY! IM MAKING ANOTHER COMIC! AND IT WILL BE AWESOME!

*collapses*

[Exon]

Welp. I didn't like them anyway.

If you have any idea what they were about, feel free to tell me. I'll redo them, if you want.

Well, after looking through the comics, I have deduced this:

The first comic involves you guys being attacked or something, and the second involves you guys finding the planet and stuffz.

It's not much, but It's all I got.

~Exon

[Nav3taX]

I'VE DONT IT, BY GEORGE I'VE DONE IT! OMG

[Comic]

[Exon]

I'VE DONT IT, BY GEORGE I'VE DONE IT! OMG

[Comic]

It might've been cooler if it had a "what just happened?" panel at the end, but it's fine.

I think there should be like something symbolizing you got shot. In the panel where the gun was pulled, I thought you said "gah" coz yehnoh, people say "gah" when they see guns, but in the next panel, it turns out you got shot. A simple bang goes long ways my friend. Also, I kinda don't get those white flashes in those two panels ( I think it's the eighth and 18th).

Other than that, the story flowed purty well.

~Exon

[Nav3taX]

white flashes - well im stuck between a Tolan Phase device kinda thing or teleportation, (tolan phases device allows you to walk through walls and such by vibrating them and yourself at a different frequency)

I know I forgot the gun flash.. I might edit it and add in a flash... but... that took me three days. so I think Ill let it sit there
for a while

[Exon]

white flashes - well im stuck between a Tolan Phase device kinda thing or teleportation, (tolan phases device allows you to walk through walls and such by vibrating them and yourself at a different frequency)

I know I forgot the gun flash.. I might edit it and add in a flash... but... that took me three days. so I think Ill let it sit there
for a while

Ah, that makes sense. I think teleportation (<-lolitsnotaword) would fit better, judging by the flash. If it were a "walkthrough walls thing" You'd have to put in a part where Sorallo is in between the walls, or at least phase shifted (Like maybe opaque or something).

Also, I know how you feel. I felt the exact same way when I was a full time comic-maker. I can deal with it just sitting there.

~Exon

[Kazi the Matoran]

Well, this has been a long time coming. None of us have gotten anywhere with this, and we've all practically forgotten about this. I'm going to ask that this promissing series die as quietly and uneventfully as it came, though it may be too late for that now. Either way, I think it's time. Seeing as this post is LONG overdue, I'm expecting I'll find this closed next time I come on. Farewell WJH.

[Knave]

I'd just like to say thank you for ending this. We took what may have been a great series and cooked it in a extra virgin olive oil from very iffy sources. It wasn't going anywhere anyway, what with a lack of communication, coordination, and simply a will to keep it taking in shallow breaths.

TL;DR : Thank goodness this is over

[Ziko]

Okay then...topic closed as requested.