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[Axilus Prime]

Credit to Kodrak for teaching me how to make these! And to Akuna Toa of Sonics for his kit! And to weirddisplayname for his kit! And (strange how it was hard to find this) Dark709 and all the contributors for the Chimoru Kit! And to Soran for assistance in graphical improvement for Season 3. as well as the Chimoru R Kit! Too many exclamation points, eh?

Character Sheet


Season 1

Comic 1: In Need of Company

Comic 2: A Strange Visitor

Comic 3: Bohrok Attack

Comic 4: Attack of the Clone...sets

Comic 5: The True Enemy

Comic 6: Stabbington's Henchmen (Featuring PGS Soran!)

Comic 7: Turaga Trouble

Comic 8: Viva La Bohrok-Kal (Credit to Kodrak for the title and repeated phrase)

Comic 9: Stabbington Rising

Comic 10: The Prophecy Fulfilled

Season 2

Comic 11: "Calm" (or as close as it gets to calm in this comic) Before the Storm

Comic 12: The Revenge Begins

Comic 13: The Tables Turn(Inappropriate Content Removed!)

Comic 14: Tight Security (Inappropriate Content Removed!)

Comic 15: Call the Exterminator(Inappropriate Content Removed!)

Comic 16: Mercenaries Attack (Inappropriate Content Removed!)

Comic 17: I Sea You

Comic 18: Alliance

Comic 19: Battle of the Comic Land

Comic 20: The Final Inferno

Season 3 (With Double Size Panels!)

Comic 21: What the Karz?

Comic 22: A Few Surprises

Comic 23: The War Begins

Comic 24: The Many Deaths of Lord Stabbington

Comic 25: Unexpected Help

Comic 26: Soran's True Element

Comic 27: A Bizarre Problem

Comic 28: Into the Darkness

Comic 29: War on Stabbington's Guts

Comic 30: The Sacking of Stabbington: Part 1

Comic 30: The Sacking of Stabbington: Part 2

Origins

Origins 1: Birth of a Hybrid

Origins 2: Path of the Hybrid

Will show PGS origins in order of the signups.

Now accepting GS/PGS! To be one, you need to PM me about it. The details needed in the PM are:

GS or PGS:
Name to be used in comic (it can be your display name):
Gender:
Personality:
Element:
Species:
Spritesheet: (use whatever kit you want, as long as it's roughly the same size as most comic kits, but give me a good amount of poses if you're a PGS.)
Notes (funny quirks, things you want to do in the comic, tendencies, anything else you want me to know):

That's all. And yes, you need to turn in your own sprite sheet. It can be identical to how you look in your comics. (With the exception of LTSL style, no offense Soran but a giant Matoran larger than the comic's panels...bad idea. For the same reason MNOG Kit is also forbidden.)

I will be accepting up to 10 PGS and 10 GS. Note that PGS have a big role, because I'm not willing to make that many characters. (Making spritesheets is living Karz!)

GS
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.

PGS
1. Soran
2. MIY
3. Malignus
4. Gravity
5. Toa Piraka Hakann 4.0
6. Sybre
7. Larx
8. Zyke
9. Loganto
10. Raiden
11. Terra Nuva
12. Pheonix
13.
14.
15.

Awards:

Edited by TNG Prime, Aug 14 2012 - 04:32 PM.

[Soran]

Haha, I like how random the first comic is. Especially the 'Oh so toa can land on me but cant help me?' line. ending was win. Nice going so far, I can't wait till the next comic.

~Soran

[Axilus Prime]

Thanks! I'm working on another character's sprite sheet right now.

[Roger Jacobsen]

So now a topic is made.
Don't I get ANY credit for helping you out?



Edit: Please keep things like this to PM next time.
-Wind-

Edited by -Windrider-, Feb 19 2012 - 10:02 PM.

[Axilus Prime]

Added second chapter and gave credit! (I still can't believe I forgot to do that last part.)

[Roger Jacobsen]

Don't be a bum.

Also, forgiveness! Nice job.

[Soran]

Wow nice job on the second comic, was all around good comedy. Best parts was the beginning, 'Hey wait a minute!' (Roundhouse-kick-to-the-face), DBZ reference, and 2nd last panel. Great job, again. I like the simplicity of the comics. remind me of some of my favorite authors.

Keep up the good work,
~Soran

[Axilus Prime]

Guest Stars and Permanent Guest Stars now open! (read the instructions above to be one)

[Axilus Prime]

Comic 3 posted! Click the link above to view!

[Roger Jacobsen]

Uh oh... somebody's in trouble.

Better run.

Good job.

[Soran]

Haha, "Werent you trying to kill me anyway?" "Oh. Right. Die Die Die Die Die" probably was best line in comic, made me laugh a bit. I also like how it looks like you're using things from Bionicle Storyline and phrases like, "Oh Karzahni". Good job on the comics, I cant wait to see more.

~Soran

(PS: Oh, Darn... No LTSL style? Sad face Emoticon.)

Edited by Soran, Feb 21 2012 - 12:11 PM.

[Axilus Prime]

Oh, well if you can shrink it down to the usual size you can use it. Thanks everyone!

[Axilus Prime]

Comic 4 is up! Oh, and please sign up to PGS or GS! Any of you who make comics shouldn't have a problem with the spritesheet thing!

[Roger Jacobsen]

Bohrok have off switches? It must be in prevention of a VIVA LA BOHROK uprising.

But who would send them after a comic-maker? By gosh, what do all these villains have against us comic-makers?

Theory!

[Axilus Prime]

Actually, there is a comedic reason for a villain attacking. (You can be assured that it's a really stupid one.)

[Axilus Prime]

Comic 5 posted! Also, Comic 6 won't be as funny without a GS/PGS! GS/PGS can also choose whether they're on TNG's side or the (yet to be named) villain's side!

[Roger Jacobsen]

Relax, pie-smothered villain! It's all a misunderstanding.

Good job.

[Soran]

Haha, just caught up with both comics, its surprising how fast you get these comics done by. I loved the ending of comic 4, I never knew they had off switches. comic 5, was funny aswell, 'the meteor was luck'. Nice job on both comics, really good, I shall try to follow this topic harder, as it is actually one of my favorite comic series. Great job again!

~Soran

[Akuna Toa of Sonics]

Lol that villain has fail henchman.
A little off topic, but since you're using my kit, I suggest checking back in my topic for the up-to-date sprites. Today I uploaded a new toa build, and a bohrok sheet is on the way.

[Axilus Prime]

@Atos I already made a sheet for six Bohrok in different poses, using your unfinished Bohrok sheet. As for the Toa build, I'll use it, but could you also make a new Toa Nuva build?
@Kodrak the villain was not covered in pie. Not even close. Something much worse. XD
@Soran thanks, and I make them this fast because I stay focused for like 2 hours a day! (Yesterday's was delayed since I was finishing Villain's spritesheet.)

[Roger Jacobsen]

It's not pie? What is it then?
*looks closely at sprite*
I seriously don't know.

[Axilus Prime]

You don't want to. Hints: Brown...dirty...sticks to armor...

[Axilus Prime]

Character sheet is up, and I started making Comic 6!

[Axilus Prime]

Comic 6 posted, featuring the first PGS: Soran! Also, it's a weekend, so I MIGHT (emphasis on might) be able to post two comics in one day, or post earlier than usual!

Anyone else wanna GS or PGS? The more the crazier merrier!

[Floridian Citrus]

lol, randomness.

Yeah, that and the fact that expoding pies are awesome. :3

So..... You have moar comix den meh noaw? Well, great start! And is that an arc that I see?

[Axilus Prime]

Yup, it's an arc. I made a saga-style comedy, sort of. And the reason I have more comics is I have more free time to make them.
Thanks for the comment, here's a pie as a reward! (However, it may have come from my pie gun, so I would run it through a metal detector first if I were you. We don't want any more Pahraks...)

[Wind Elemental]

I just started reading your comics and I have to say that they're pretty good. It's a bit random but it's still funny. By the way, why is it that every time someone breaks the fourth wall, a bunch of meteors fall down on them?

[Soran]

@Frozenflash: Its a running joke in not only this comic series but also in another comic series that when someone breaks the fourth wall, all these natural disasters happen.

I like my negativity in the comics. Nice comic, and I like the "this scene has been censored due to either excessive awesomeness or the author's laziness. probably both." was probably my favorite part. I also like the meteor running joke. I also like, "You Shall Not Pass!" "Just did". all together another awesome comic. Keep up the good work.

~Soran

[Axilus Prime]

@FrozenFlash yup, I got the idea from his comic, Living the Suburban Life. You should check it out, it's good.

@Soran I kept it true to the form you sent me, and apparently it worked!

Thanks, all of you!

(P.S. Did anyone notice he has .5 a henchman? I need to reference that in one chapter..)

Edited by Tahu Nuva Golden, Feb 24 2012 - 07:17 PM.

[Axilus Prime]

Comic 7 is up!

[Soran]

Curse that mischivous turaga, and that Nui Jaga who actually followed orders and killed everything in sight besides the person riding it like a cowboy yeehah. This totally isnt worth college credit! I like how the random henchman is riding the Nui Jaga, and how the fourth wall meteor appears yet again. I think the meteor is by far my favorite running joke in the series. Nice job again, and keep up the good work.

~Soran

[Axilus Prime]

Lol, the guy on his back wasn't technically in his line of sight. Still, I put the guy riding just for extra insanity. (Wow, you and Stabbington seem to have the worst days ever in this comic.)

And yes, the meteor will continue to appear, but the next time it does, I'll also try to put in something new. I also like that running joke, but I wouldn't want it getting stale...

Thanks!

Edited by Tahu Nuva Golden, Feb 25 2012 - 05:29 PM.

[Axilus Prime]

Comic 8 is up!

[Axilus Prime]

Comic 9 posted.

[Soran]

Woo, Loving the comics. I should check more often on these comics, They get uploaded Fast.

Comic 8. Was pretty random (then again most of your comics are), but in a good way. I like the part about blending in, thought it was pretty funny. I also liked how you made little jokes about each of the bohrok's powers. I like how Soran doesnt get his college credits until after TNG is killed. I also like the ending, Battery powered Bohrok are as epic as sliced bread.

Comic 9. Its hard to describe comic 9, besides using the word, 'amazing'. Comic 9 was probably my favorite comic you've made so far. I love how you tied almost all of the running jokes together in that one comic. My favorite part, by far, was the beginning with all the meteors. I actually laughed. I liked how Dalek was hitting Kaio with a couch. I also like the random Nui-Jaga who uses Soran as a chew toy. I think that Nui-Jaga deserves a name. I also liked when the .5 henchman showed up. The dreaded cliff-hanger strikes again! over all, comic 9 was best comic.

Great job again, keep up the good work,
~Soran

[Axilus Prime]

Lol, I was gonna make a joke about Nuhvok and Tahnok too, but I actually DID run out of jokes at that point. (At least I substituted the pancake joke, right?) Oh. And if Stabbington stays true to his word, you're most likely never getting those college credits.

Comic 9 is the one I finally use ALL the sprites in! Yayz!
Yup, the Nui-Jaga, Bohrok Henchmen, Fourth Wall Meteors, and Kaio's Couch are ALL in there! I might name the Nui-Jaga, since I intend for him to continue to ruin plans by running in and eating people.

Comic 10 will have something that is a first for any main character in a comic to get...if you saw it coming, say so. If not, say so too. It will definitely open up new possibilities for storyline and comedy! Keep an eye out for the final chapter of season 1! (I don't know why it's called season 1 though, because it'll probably continue as if there was no break between seasons anyway.)

Oh, and Comic 10 may be delayed a bit due to homework. I'll certainly try to finish it at the usual time though.

[Roger Jacobsen]

Missed stuff...

There's a lot of things I don't have time to comment on, so I'll stick with the important parts:

@TNG 1: I seriously have - oh crud. Why would his armor be covered in that?!?
@Comics: More meteors, Nui-Jaga, lol.
@Viva la Bohrok: It doesn't come from Mexico, fool! It's Spanish! (Also, Viva la Vida is an album by Coldplay, and a term associated with the French Revolution)

Why is Stabbington called Stabbington?

[Axilus Prime]

His armor is covered in that for a reason I won't explain. (And honestly if I did explain, you'd wish I didn't.)

@Comics yep, I put lots of randomness in this.

@ Viva la bohrok kal, oh. I saw it in an Alamo movie, so..yeah. I thought it was mexican.

@Stabbington cuz it sounds funny. Like a fancy English-German name mixed with "Stab".

Edited by Tahu Nuva Golden, Feb 27 2012 - 09:57 PM.

[Roger Jacobsen]

an Alamo movie has deceived you with false information.

Why not Phil?

[Axilus Prime]

Lol. Stabbington has more of a ring and evil sound to it.