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[Brickeens]

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This is my entry to Comics Contest #1. I think this is the first time I've ever posted a serious comic on BZP, so comments are very much appreciated.

[Paleo]

As I've said multiple times now , I really love this. Something I haven't said is that the Toa is a great character. His body language communicated is like the Bionicle Sherlock Holmes. The way he traces the claw marks also adds a touch, somewhat like he's thinking and absent-mindedly tracing them. His armor is great too, and the use of the Mahiki on a detective character is a perfect choice. It gives him the ability to go under-cover .

Make more, Brickeens, make more.

Edited by Paleo, Feb 28 2012 - 07:36 PM.

[nuhvok campaign manager]

The artwork, shading, and tone is simply flawless. My only complaint is how short it was. I think you could have expanded the story a little bit more while still keeping an air of mystery. I also think that leaving it monochromatic helped emphasize the mood. As Paleo put it, like a Bionicle Sherlock Holmes story.

All in all, I think you did a stunning job here, and I wish you luck in the contest.