Posted Mar 04 2012 - 05:37 PM
Posted Mar 04 2012 - 07:45 PM
Eh... Well, I know you wanted to use LotR stuff, but c'mon... At least use Matoran characters. It's extremely simple. Two ":" with the letter in the middle. Like so:
The light of the shaft fell directly on a table in the middle of the room: a single oblong block, about two feet high, upon which was laid a great slab of white stone."It looks like a tomb," muttered Takua, and bend forwards with a curious sense of foreboding, to look more closely at it. Matau came quickly to his side. On the slab ruins were deeply graven:<insert picture here>
Son of Fhenua?1. Bionicles do not reproduce2. I question the judgement of choosing such a nameDoes Onu-Koro have lords?Also, "Frodo?"Now, I know this is a Short Story contest, but this is unnecessarily short. Also, I believe it is a LotR-themed contest. Not a type-page-and-replace-names contest. It could be considered plagiarism.To be honest, I would not enter this. It is overall a problematic controversy and could be DQ'd for plagiarism. Try writing a new one, longer and of your own writing.
"These are Daeron's runes, such as were used of old in Onu-Koro", said Matau. "Here is written in the tongues of Toa and Onu-Matoran:WHENUA SON OF FHENUALORD OF ONU-KORO.""He is dead then," said Frodo. "I feared it was so." Onepu cast his hood over his face.
Edited by Shadow Guardian, Mar 04 2012 - 07:52 PM.
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