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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 02:06 PM

True Story

 

Raiden can turn his head backwards.  You didn't know that?  Anyway,I really did do this one time.

 

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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 03:07 PM

Lesson one on physics right there.


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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 03:11 PM

It's the purple guy again!


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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 03:41 PM

Lesson one on physics right there.

Yep.

It's the purple guy again!

He's a PGS from Mal.

 

 

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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 04:32 PM

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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 04:47 PM

I think that was Damaracx with the white text. Magnesius uses grey or black


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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 06:33 PM

Mal spoke some really wise words today. But you won't live for long while on fire.

 

And what was I doing to the wall!?

That was me.  I can live long on fire.

 

Not entirely sure.

 

I think that was Damaracx with the white text. Magnesius uses grey or black

Yup.

 

 

 

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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 07:17 PM

BTW, I think the Mysterious Purple Matoran won the staring contest against Raiden.


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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 07:44 PM

BTW, I think the Mysterious Purple Matoran won the staring contest against Raiden.

XD.  I don't know, Raiden turned his head 360 degrees.  It's tough to win a staring contest with your head turned like that.



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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 07:53 PM

BTW, I think the Mysterious Purple Matoran won the staring contest against Raiden.

XD.  I don't know, Raiden turned his head 360 degrees.  It's tough to win a staring contest with your head turned like that.

He put up a good effort though.


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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 08:07 PM

 

BTW, I think the Mysterious Purple Matoran won the staring contest against Raiden.

XD.  I don't know, Raiden turned his head 360 degrees.  It's tough to win a staring contest with your head turned like that.

He put up a good effort though.

XD.  True.



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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 09:55 PM

Coming in as sort of a "comic outsider" (though I assist in this forum), I would suggest you make your text more easily readable. If you can't put a border around the text, find a combination of background and color that won't clash. I had a hard time making out what was said in the first panel.


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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 10:21 PM

Coming in as sort of a "comic outsider" (though I assist in this forum), I would suggest you make your text more easily readable. If you can't put a border around the text, find a combination of background and color that won't clash. I had a hard time making out what was said in the first panel.

Yeah, I need to download GIMP.  Then I won't need to use secondary colors because, well, they get confusing from time to time.  That, and it will make text more readable in backgrounds like that.



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Posted Apr 18 2013 - 10:30 PM

Well, I decided to start a new comic series based on my RPG character, Morok.

 

Morok's Origins:  Comic 1:  How It All Began



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Posted Apr 19 2013 - 08:54 AM

Well, I decided to start a new comic series based on my RPG character, Morok.

 

Morok's Origins:  Comic 1:  How It All Began

 

"You wouldn't know tough even if it kicked you in the face"

 

Squidward style. xD


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Posted Apr 19 2013 - 02:52 PM

Well, I decided to start a new comic series based on my RPG character, Morok.

 

Morok's Origins:  Comic 1:  How It All Began

 

"You wouldn't know tough even if it kicked you in the face"

 

Squidward style. xD

XD

 

That was hilarious.

 

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Posted Apr 20 2013 - 11:49 PM

That background looks strangely familiar...

 

But the story seems promising. I think you should just use his normal speech for his narration and thoughts, but lower the opacity to indicate he isn't talking out loud.

 

Rayg really doesn't look right when it's enlarged, though.

 

Good start, I guess.


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Posted Apr 21 2013 - 09:59 AM

That background looks strangely familiar...

 

But the story seems promising. I think you should just use his normal speech for his narration and thoughts, but lower the opacity to indicate he isn't talking out loud.

 

Rayg really doesn't look right when it's enlarged, though.

 

Good start, I guess.

Karz, did I take your background again?  I'll check....Karz, I guess I did.

 

Thanks!  I'll be sure to use that instead.

 

I was worried about that.  I think I'll just try to resize the backgrounds and only change them to double their original size, only when truly needed.

 

Thanks.  Thought it looked good.



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Posted Apr 21 2013 - 09:51 PM

Morok's Origin's:  Comic 2:  Toa Transformation                 New Comic!

 

Well, I took your advise Axilus.  Worked quite well.



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Posted Apr 21 2013 - 09:57 PM

I like glowing text, but had a hard time making out what it said when it was red and the glow was orange. Stick to contrasting colors for the glow.


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Posted Apr 21 2013 - 10:02 PM

I like glowing text, but had a hard time making out what it said when it was red and the glow was orange. Stick to contrasting colors for the glow.

Yeah, that bothered me too.  Next time, I think I'll just go with his eye color as the glow part of the text.



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Posted Apr 22 2013 - 07:18 PM

Comic 24:  Spherus Magna Day Earth Day         New Comic!

 

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Posted Apr 22 2013 - 08:25 PM

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Posted Apr 22 2013 - 10:38 PM

Treeeeeeeeeeeeesssssss

Let's burn 'em down.

 

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Posted Apr 22 2013 - 10:52 PM

Morok Comic: I had to put my laptop close to my face just to see the text and sprite work. Overall Nice story.

 

Earth Day Comic: Really nice and funny with burning trees down.


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Posted Apr 22 2013 - 10:58 PM

Morok Comic: I had to put my laptop close to my face just to see the text and sprite work. Overall Nice story.

 

Earth Day Comic: Really nice and funny with burning trees down.

I thought that text seemed to small.  Maybe next time I'll go with 12 or 13.  Sprites I can't help.  Rayg sprites don't look good if enlarged,  I only do that when it is absolutely necessary. 

 

Heh, best Earth Day joke ever.

 

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Posted Apr 24 2013 - 09:05 PM

Comic 25:  Third Place             New comic!

 

Big thanks to Axilus for showing me how to rotate properly!

 

Also, sorry for postponing what was supposed to be yesterday's comic.


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Posted Apr 25 2013 - 09:08 AM

Comic 25:  Third Place             New comic!

 

Big thanks to Axilus for showing me how to rotate properly!

 

Also, sorry for postponing what was supposed to be yesterday's comic.

 

"Great! Out of how many?" "Three."

 

That was just awesome. Made up my morning. xD


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Posted Apr 25 2013 - 05:00 PM

Comic 25:  Third Place             New comic!

 

Big thanks to Axilus for showing me how to rotate properly!

 

Also, sorry for postponing what was supposed to be yesterday's comic.

 

"Great! Out of how many?" "Three."

 

That was just awesome. Made up my morning. xD

XD.  That was based off something that actually happened.  Yeah, don't ask.



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Posted Apr 26 2013 - 09:10 AM

May I ask wh-

 

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Whatever. xD


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Posted Apr 26 2013 - 06:28 PM

May I ask wh-

 

Yeah, don't ask.

 

Whatever. xD

XD.

 

Sorry I haven't been posting comics lately.  So, to make up for it.  Expect three today.



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Posted Apr 27 2013 - 10:11 AM

May I ask wh-

 

Yeah, don't ask.

 

Whatever. xD

XD.

 

Sorry I haven't been posting comics lately.  So, to make up for it.  Expect three today.

 

Expect me to laugh harder than ever. xD


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Posted Apr 27 2013 - 12:39 PM

 

May I ask wh-

 

Yeah, don't ask.

 

Whatever. xD

XD.

 

Sorry I haven't been posting comics lately.  So, to make up for it.  Expect three today.

 

Expect me to laugh harder than ever. xD

Well, there is an update, but it's not a comedy.  Speaking of which...

 

Morok's Origins:  Comic 3:  The Rescue      New Comic!

 

Also, new post milestone reached!


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Posted Apr 29 2013 - 09:58 PM

It seems he is now a Super Saiyan extremely powerful Toa.

 

But I don't know where the plot can or will go from there...


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Posted Apr 29 2013 - 10:25 PM

It seems he is now a Super Saiyan extremely powerful Toa.

 

But I don't know where the plot can or will go from there...

XD.

 

Good.  I'll keep ya guessing.

 

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Posted May 07 2013 - 08:23 PM

Comic 5:  Release                                    New comic!

 

Well, after millions of delays (such as the flash-drive I had got stolen and I had to remake all my sprites)  I now give you a new comic!  Also, as promised this series has not been stopped.  A few things you may notice though is that the toa of water's color-scheme has changed slightly.  I prefer the newer version.  What do you think?

 

Edit:  I'm sure you've all realized that I can't keep up with my "regularly" schedule (just as our friend, Sybre predicted)  ,However, maybe weekly.


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Posted May 16 2013 - 01:47 PM

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Posted May 16 2013 - 03:24 PM

WOAH! I saw a green dude in the sand in the desert!

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Posted May 16 2013 - 04:57 PM

I just realized that after seeing this again.


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