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#41 Offline MT Zehvor

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Posted Mar 29 2012 - 04:18 PM

We should probably start advertising the CF on it's own.

Specifically the CCC part. To get more review requests.

I'll link in sig when I'm not lazy.

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Posted Mar 29 2012 - 07:06 PM


Who wants to review M.O.D.S.?


Please use the request form that is within the CCC post.

-ibrow

I didn't see it at first. Probably should of been in the first post.

Name of the comedy:M.O.D.S.
Author: Rarity (Shadrahk)
Status of your comedy: In progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1 and 2

Edited by Rarity, Mar 29 2012 - 07:07 PM.


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Posted Mar 29 2012 - 08:07 PM



Who wants to review M.O.D.S.?


Please use the request form that is within the CCC post.

-ibrow

I didn't see it at first. Probably should of been in the first post.

Name of the comedy:M.O.D.S.
Author: Rarity (Shadrahk)
Status of your comedy: In progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1 and 2


Well, I asked somebody to link it (MT), but that has not been done yet.

fishers64, you have two weeks to get this review done. I'll pm you later in case you don't see this.

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Posted Mar 30 2012 - 08:10 AM




Who wants to review M.O.D.S.?


Please use the request form that is within the CCC post.

-ibrow

I didn't see it at first. Probably should of been in the first post.

Name of the comedy:M.O.D.S.
Author: Rarity (Shadrahk)
Status of your comedy: In progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1 and 2


Well, I asked somebody to link it (MT), but that has not been done yet.

fishers64, you have two weeks to get this review done. I'll pm you later in case you don't see this.

-ibrow


Done.

Name of the comedy:M.O.D.S.
Author: Rarity (Shadrahk)
Chapters Reviewed: ALL

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Posted Mar 31 2012 - 08:18 PM

That was fast! Adding to the list- Comedy number one!

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Posted Apr 01 2012 - 07:03 PM

That was fast! Adding to the list- Comedy number one!

-ibrow


What list? I seem to be missing it.

Also, I note that the first post of this topic needs help. I have been approved, (other members are out of the "pending list") and we are missing a CCC link.

And I'm the only reviewer as of yet - while I appreciate the chance to boost my post count, it's hard to have a "club" of one. :)

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Posted Apr 01 2012 - 07:56 PM

I actually need to remove all that. iBrow's keeping track of all critic stuff now.

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Posted Apr 01 2012 - 08:21 PM


That was fast! Adding to the list- Comedy number one!

-ibrow


What list? I seem to be missing it.

Also, I note that the first post of this topic needs help. I have been approved, (other members are out of the "pending list") and we are missing a CCC link.

And I'm the only reviewer as of yet - while I appreciate the chance to boost my post count, it's hard to have a "club" of one. :)


Hubert/Inspiration should be approved soon, once he gets the hang of reviewing. Plus, there's also me. I might pm HH about making a topic specifically for the CCC though, so that people will actually look for it and see it.

I actually need to remove all that. iBrow's keeping track of all critic stuff now.

-MT


Links to both CCC posts would be appreciated, however.

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Posted Apr 01 2012 - 08:33 PM



That was fast! Adding to the list- Comedy number one!

-ibrow


What list? I seem to be missing it.

Also, I note that the first post of this topic needs help. I have been approved, (other members are out of the "pending list") and we are missing a CCC link.

And I'm the only reviewer as of yet - while I appreciate the chance to boost my post count, it's hard to have a "club" of one. :)


Hubert/Inspiration should be approved soon, once he gets the hang of reviewing. Plus, there's also me. I might pm HH about making a topic specifically for the CCC though, so that people will actually look for it and see it.

I actually need to remove all that. iBrow's keeping track of all critic stuff now.

-MT


Links to both CCC posts would be appreciated, however.

-ibrow


There's two CCC posts? One seems to be invisible, along with the "comedies list", which you supposedly added something to. I am one confused individual.

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Posted Apr 01 2012 - 08:46 PM

By 'getting the hang of reviewing' he means that I shouldn't crawl so deeply into the comedy chapters in my attempt to correct everything.

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Posted Apr 01 2012 - 08:51 PM

@fishers: Well, one is a massive wall of text with like ten banners at the bottom. That's the main post. The comedies list is a few posts below that and is tiny.

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Posted Apr 01 2012 - 08:56 PM

@fishers: Well, one is a massive wall of text with like ten banners at the bottom. That's the main post. The comedies list is a few posts below that and is tiny.

-ibrow


And hard to find.

We also reviewed Toarobot's comedy also - doesn't that go on the list? :shrugs:

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Posted Apr 04 2012 - 01:54 PM

World Domination 101
Author:Zoma(Also Known as: The Dark Chronicler) and ‘Da Boss BioBeast
Status of your comedy: In progress, on hold.
Chapters to be reviewed: All Please.

Wow, can't believe I haven't noticed this before.

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Posted Apr 04 2012 - 02:31 PM


@fishers: Well, one is a massive wall of text with like ten banners at the bottom. That's the main post. The comedies list is a few posts below that and is tiny.

-ibrow


And hard to find.

We also reviewed Toarobot's comedy also - doesn't that go on the list? :shrugs:


Comedies used for screening process aren't put into the list.

World Domination 101
Author:Zoma(Also Known as: The Dark Chronicler) and ‘Da Boss BioBeast
Status of your comedy: In progress, on hold.
Chapters to be reviewed: All Please.

Wow, can't believe I haven't noticed this before.


Guess I'll take this request. Expect it done by the end of Easter Weekend.

Edited by Kermit the Pyro, Apr 04 2012 - 02:33 PM.

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#55 Offline Toarobot18

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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 07:26 PM

Comedies used for screening process aren't put into the list.

What does this mean? If the review I got didn't count, may I request another one?

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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 07:32 PM


Comedies used for screening process aren't put into the list.

What does this mean? If the review I got didn't count, may I request another one?


It means that your comedy was used to screen me for my reviewing position, which means that your comedy isn't put into the official reviewed comedies list on the hard-to-find post in here. I don't think that is fair, however - you can't help the fact that iBrow decided to use it for that purpose. :(

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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 07:40 PM

Still haven't finished screening process. Just. Three. More. Chapters. Left. And I have a day or two to finish them.

Well, time to get to work.

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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 08:03 PM

Still haven't finished screening process. Just. Three. More. Chapters. Left. And I have a day or two to finish them.

Well, time to get to work.


Remember though, one review. :P

@fishers: that's how it was done in the past.

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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 11:33 PM

Assuming he got the reviewing position, that would mean that his review was on par with your standards, right? Thus it could be used for ratings purposes? I understand why you might be inclined to not count a review used for screening if the person being screened didn't pass, but I'm not sure of the policy otherwise. Nevertheless, since that's the way you've decided to do it I would like to request another review (same comedy).
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Posted Apr 06 2012 - 03:41 AM

Undivine Comedy
Author:Trad
Status of your comedy:
In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: Chapters 12&13


This was my first attempt at writing and they were typed out a few months ago, so it may be a bit simple and repetitive.

Edited by TradTheMentalist, Apr 06 2012 - 03:42 AM.


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Posted Apr 06 2012 - 03:34 PM

Assuming he got the reviewing position, that would mean that his review was on par with your standards, right? Thus it could be used for ratings purposes? I understand why you might be inclined to not count a review used for screening if the person being screened didn't pass, but I'm not sure of the policy otherwise. Nevertheless, since that's the way you've decided to do it I would like to request another review (same comedy).


I'll let it slide this time, but in the future all requests must be made using the request form. Inspiration, this one is for you.

Undivine Comedy
Author:Trad
Status of your comedy:
In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: Chapters 12&13


This was my first attempt at writing and they were typed out a few months ago, so it may be a bit simple and repetitive.


fishers, this one is all yours.

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Posted Apr 06 2012 - 06:18 PM

Which chapters am I to review exactly?

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Posted Apr 06 2012 - 06:23 PM

The last five. And that, Toarobot, is why you use the request form.

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Posted Apr 06 2012 - 09:30 PM


Assuming he got the reviewing position, that would mean that his review was on par with your standards, right? Thus it could be used for ratings purposes? I understand why you might be inclined to not count a review used for screening if the person being screened didn't pass, but I'm not sure of the policy otherwise. Nevertheless, since that's the way you've decided to do it I would like to request another review (same comedy).


I'll let it slide this time, but in the future all requests must be made using the request form. Inspiration, this one is for you.

Undivine Comedy
Author:Trad
Status of your comedy: In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: Chapters 12&13


This was my first attempt at writing and they were typed out a few months ago, so it may be a bit simple and repetitive.


fishers, this one is all yours.

-ibrow


Got it.

Undivine Comedy
Author: Trad
Chapters reviewed: Chapters 12&13 (as ordered)

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Posted Apr 08 2012 - 03:32 AM

Say, why am I not considered a full critic on the post?

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Posted Apr 09 2012 - 05:15 PM

Takua's Brainy Adventures
Author: Rarity/Shadrahk
Status: In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: First chapter.


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Posted Apr 09 2012 - 07:58 PM

fishers, you can get Rarity's.

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Posted Apr 11 2012 - 10:39 PM

fishers, you can get Rarity's.

-ibrow


Thank You, most gracious one.


Takua's Brainy Adventures
Author: Rarity/Shadrahk
Status: In Progress
Chapters Reviewed: All.

Mortal insanity.

Edited by fishers64, Apr 12 2012 - 08:23 PM.

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Posted Apr 12 2012 - 08:20 PM

fishers, when you complete a review, please link the actual review to here please, not just the comedy.

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Posted Apr 12 2012 - 08:24 PM

fishers, when you complete a review, please link the actual review to here please, not just the comedy.

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*cough* Sorry.

Fixed.

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Posted Apr 12 2012 - 08:28 PM


fishers, when you complete a review, please link the actual review to here please, not just the comedy.

-ibrow


*cough* Sorry.

Fixed.


It's no problem yet; however, I'm not sure when it would turn into me having to swim through some comedy like Aftermath 2 to find your review. :P

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Posted Apr 14 2012 - 02:36 AM

The Bionicle Entrepreneur
Author: Toarobot18
Status: In Progress
Chapters Reviewed: All of them. Because I don't know how many chapters there are, and I don't know which ones are the 'last five chapters', so yeah, all of them.


Completed the review.

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Posted Apr 14 2012 - 12:25 PM

Wow...the CCC's back, maybe I'll ask for a review in a little while...anyways, any CF stuff coming up MT?

Also...

Who is Togariku?



Togariku is only the author of the legendary My Life with the Bionicles, with started the sub-genre of comedy where a human has to deal with living Bionicles, which Mad House semi-falls into. I read MLWTB for years before I joined (though it's good I didn't join back then, as Mad House, or at least the MH I was writing back then, was terrible) and was saddened when it ended and I never got to meet Togariku, who is the writer I look up to most. Sob.

He's pretty famous. MLWTB was around during the original TBTTRAH (actually it started in 2005) and ended shortly after Aftermath began.

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Posted Apr 14 2012 - 08:03 PM

Thank you Inspiration.

@PurpleBouncy: Oops, I forgot to answer that Q. :P MT, you might've known him as "Dominus Temporus".

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Posted Apr 15 2012 - 06:26 PM

Tales of the Hubertverse
Author: Inspiration
Status of your comedy: Beginning?
Chapters to be reviewed: Prologue and Chapter 1

Despite this comedy having been inactive for a while, and that I still haven't written the next chapter, I'm still planning on continuing it. So I'd like some in-depth feedback to help me kick-start it once more.

Edited by Inspiration, Apr 15 2012 - 06:27 PM.

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Posted Apr 15 2012 - 07:53 PM

Fishers can get that one, next request will be mine.

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Posted Apr 15 2012 - 09:13 PM

Sounds interesting. Sign me up! (only accept my comedy "Ask Hapori Tohu")
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Posted Apr 15 2012 - 09:48 PM

What exactly do you mean 'Sign me up'? Please elaborate.

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Posted Apr 15 2012 - 10:38 PM

Tales of the Hubertverse
Author: Inspiration
Status of your comedy: Beginning?
Chapters reviewed:All

Hope I could help.

Edit: All right, I have a review request for my comedy.

Spinning Doctor Drake
Author: fishers64
Status: Completed
Chapters to be reviewed: All - it's about six chapters long.

Edited by fishers64, Apr 15 2012 - 10:52 PM.

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Posted Apr 16 2012 - 02:41 PM

Sounds interesting. Sign me up! (only accept my comedy "Ask Hapori Tohu")


Yeah, I have no idea what you're signing up for. :P

@Fishers: Expect the review by the end of the week.

-ibrow

EDIT: Actually Fishers, what score would you give the comedy? Judging by your review alone I'm going to temporarily give it an 85%, but just tell me if you want it changed or if it's fine.

Edited by ibrow, Apr 16 2012 - 02:45 PM.

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