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#121 Online Hurricane iBrow

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Posted Jun 27 2012 - 05:50 PM

I would like to get "professional" advice on my first comedy. :P

Lord Vakama Strikes Back
Author: Cinnamon Grochi (thebeggerpie)
Status: Completed.
Chapters to be reviewed: The first and only chapter.


Alright Rarity, this review is yours.

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#122 Offline Meta Nuva

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Posted Jun 27 2012 - 09:28 PM

The Adventures of Tahu

Author: Tahu Nuva: Toa of Silver

Status: In Progress

Chapters to be Reviewed: Chapters 2.5, 2.6

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"The Nintendo characters I allowed entry in the beginning of the comedy will be able to get them back…note that I said Nintendo, not Bubsy."

Tahu: Toa of Platinum, S3 Prologue.

 

"Yeah, even Sonic isn’t a pain anymore. Personally, I think Bubsy killed him with that Sonic ’06 comment. It was bad.”

Gelu, S3 Ch.1: Perceptions.

 

 

 

 


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Posted Jun 27 2012 - 10:13 PM

The Adventures of Tahu

Author: Tahu Nuva: Toa of Silver

Status: In Progress

Chapters to be Reviewed: Chapters 2.5, 2.6

~TN:TS~


Hey iBrow, want me to take this one?


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Posted Jun 28 2012 - 08:02 AM

Sure, you can have it.

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Posted Jun 28 2012 - 04:55 PM

Yay, my first chance to review some stuff! I'll get to it this weekend or maybe tonight!
Also iBrow... your name. XD

Edited by Rarity, Jun 28 2012 - 04:55 PM.


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Posted Jun 28 2012 - 08:32 PM

It's happened both times before I remembered that members had those names. I'm sorry. :P I'm referring to the pony, not you.

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Posted Jun 29 2012 - 02:06 AM

I exist, ya know. Maybe I can take the next one?

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Posted Jun 29 2012 - 08:25 AM

Yes, I realize you exist, lol. However, you've reviewed the most comedies so far, hence why neither of these is yours. xD

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Posted Jul 01 2012 - 10:27 PM

Bionicle: Mission Space
Author: Toarobot18
Status of your comedy: In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: Either 1-5 or 5-9, critic discretion.

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Posted Jul 02 2012 - 09:24 AM

Alright fishers, all yours.

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Posted Jul 02 2012 - 05:36 PM

I would like to get "professional" advice on my first comedy. :P

Lord Vakama Strikes Back
Author: Cinnamon Grochi (thebeggerpie)
Status: Completed.
Chapters to be reviewed: The first and only chapter.

I reviewed it!

Edited by Rarity, Jul 02 2012 - 05:36 PM.


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Posted Jul 02 2012 - 09:55 PM

Question: when a comedy is reviewed a second time (say for new chapters), and the score is different than the previous time, how is the rating on the first page adjusted? Just set to the second score?

For example, The Bionicle Entrepreneur got 85% on its first review, but that was used for screening so it didn't count. On its second review, it got 83%. If it was reviewed a third time for new chapters, and say got 82%, would that be the new score for the comedy? Or would you average the two and make it 82.5%?

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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 09:30 AM

None of the scores will be replaced- it'll simply be added onto the list, as it could be a different reviewer (with different opinions on what makes a good comedy), or the score could show you've improved/declined if it's the same reviewer.

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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 09:33 AM

In that case, is the latest score used to determine the "Must-See Comedies"? And if the newer score is below the cut off, can a comedy lose that designation?
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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 10:39 AM

Yes, the latest score would be used to determine the "Must-See Comedies"- if the score is lower, perhaps I could add in a symbol that says it made the 85% cutoff in the past.

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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 12:05 PM

Bionicle: Mission Space
Author: Toarobot18
Chapters reviewed: 1-5, as ordered.

Review Post

Reviewer's Rating: 4/10 (40%) for lack of plot and poor characterization.

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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 05:20 PM

Thanks Fishers! I don't mean to hog the CCC, so feel free to shove this down the list if someone else requests, but since Fishers finished my previous request and no others are outstanding, here is new request:

Toy Wars
Author: Toarobot18
Status of your comedy: In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1 - 4 5

Author's Note: this comedy is based in the "real world" except with enchanted living toys. The main toys are Bionicle sets, but the sets are not assumed to have the same personalities as their Bionicle story-line partners. (In fact, there are even duplicate sets and M.O.Cs.)

Edited by Toarobot18, Jul 04 2012 - 12:28 AM.

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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 06:10 PM

Thanks Fishers! I don't mean to hog the CCC, so feel free to shove this down the list if someone else requests, but since Fishers finished my previous request and no others are outstanding, here is new request:

Toy Wars
Author: Toarobot18
Status of your comedy: In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-4

Author's Note: this comedy is based in the "real world" except with enchanted living toys. The main toys are Bionicle sets, but the sets are not assumed to have the same personalities as their Bionicle story-line partners. (In fact, there are even duplicate sets and M.O.Cs.)


Rarity, this one is yours.

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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 11:32 PM

Sorry about the delay on reviewing Toa of Silver's, but I've been a bit busy. Should get it done soon.

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Posted Jul 04 2012 - 12:31 AM

Rarity, if you haven't already started your review, I edited my post to read chapters "1 - 5" instead of "1 - 4," since I just posted another chapter. If you could review the new one as well, I'd appreciate that. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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Posted Jul 04 2012 - 04:40 PM

Rarity, if you haven't already started your review, I edited my post to read chapters "1 - 5" instead of "1 - 4," since I just posted another chapter. If you could review the new one as well, I'd appreciate that. Sorry for the inconvenience.

One... MORE??? I JUST FINISHED YOUR FOUR!

jk :P I didn't even know I was supposed to review it. I'll get to it. :P


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Posted Jul 05 2012 - 11:05 PM

The Three Matoran and Hakann
Author: The Smoke Monster
Status of your Comedy: Finished.

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Posted Jul 06 2012 - 05:25 AM

The Three Matoran and Hakann
Author: The Smoke Monster
Status of your Comedy: Finished.


I'll try and get this one done for you by tomorrow evening. If I can't, you'll be notified within this topic.

To the critics: We might be moving to our own topic soon, but if we do, please let me take fifteen minutes to get three posts in first. =P That way all the information will be stored nice and neatly. However, I'm hoping to have some banners done so it looks better to that end, so it might end up waiting until after next week when I return.

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Posted Jul 07 2012 - 01:37 AM

The Adventures of Tahu
Author: Tahu Nuva: Toa of Silver
Status: In Progress
Chapters to be Reviewed: Chapters 2.5, 2.6


Finished review.

Rating is 75.3 ...%


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Posted Jul 07 2012 - 09:54 AM

I will round that down because I hate decimals. =P Unless it's .5.

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Posted Jul 07 2012 - 08:46 PM

It's 75 and a third percent man! The extra third gives it the feeling of ... 'Hubert-ness'.

Without the decimal, it is not an accurate average!


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Posted Jul 07 2012 - 11:42 PM

Oh well. 75 or 75.5? :P
By the way guys, I am posting the new topic NOW. Nobody post until I've got all the information in though.

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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 01:30 AM

75.5 might be better then.

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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 01:31 AM

Editing it then.
By the way guys, for the next week while I'm gone, I've put fishers temporarily in charge of the CCC.

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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 01:44 AM

I, for one, welcome our new comedic overlord.

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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 07:15 AM

I, for one, welcome our new comedic overlord.


More like regent while the true comedic overlord is away.

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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 07:32 AM

Alright- fishers, Rarity, Hubert, you guys can all move over to the official Comedies Critics Club topic now. :) See you all in a week.

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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 07:59 AM

Got it your highness.

Well guys, this topic is now for random Comedic Federation shenanigans. We're off to migrate over towards the CCC Topic.

*Packs luggage.*


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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 12:17 PM

I'm gonna miss this old place...not really. :P

So, is the CCC topic gonna get pinned?


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Posted Jul 09 2012 - 01:33 AM

It already has my dear. It already has.

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Posted Jul 09 2012 - 05:23 PM

It already has my dear. It already has.

Please don't refer to me as your dear. Ever. It's creepy. :P

That was posted before it was pinned xD


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Posted Jul 15 2012 - 08:08 AM

Please move all CCC stuff over to the new topic completely. I've returned! =D

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Posted Jul 16 2012 - 03:07 AM

So what exactly will this topic be for now? Because we sort of took over everything with the CCC and I've forgotten the true purpose of the thread.

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Posted Jul 16 2012 - 07:08 AM

To be honest, I'm not sure. I think the original pan was to host unofficial competitions and the likeand also include major crossover comedies, but it seems to have partially collapsed. It doesn't help that one of the four leader guys (Maniac) has vanished as well.

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Posted Jul 16 2012 - 07:57 PM

Well, I have an idea.

Give challenges to writers so they can write a comedy to fulfil the requirements of the challenge?





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