Welcome everyone, to the NEW AND IMPROVED review topic for my epic:
This is the first epic I have ever written, and to be quite frank, will probably be my last. I have worked a very long time on this story, and while it is not by any means perfect, I am happy with it, and I hope you will enjoy it. I plan on releasing a new chapter once a week (plus any other day that I'm feeling productive), but don't get your panties in a knot if I miss a day. Actually, on second thought, do get your panties in a knot, because it'll show me you care, thus giving me a warm and fuzzy feeling inside, thus reinforcing my will to post every week.
As for background information, this story takes place on the island of Mata Nui, many years after the events of the the mask of light saga. I somewhat stopped following the bionicle saga after 2003, and so this story will be true the common beliefs of that time (Mata Nui is a great spirit, not a giant robot, Makuta is his brother, not a cloud of antidermis). It focuses about an artifact known as the Atouri, a war between the Matoran and a bug-like race of creatures known as the kryll, and a group of Matoran as they travel across the land. I tried to capture the smallness of the 2001 saga, as well as put in my own style. There will be some familiar characters, but most of the main ones will be of my own creation.
As with any epic, any type of feedback is welcome, so let me know what you think! You can find the epic here and I hope you enjoy it!
TABLE OF CONTENTS:
Chapter 1 - The Spring Solstice
Chapter 2 - The Tale of Atouri
Chapter 3 - Learning of the Stars
Chapter 4 - Approaching Shadows
Chapter 5 - Unanswered Questions
Chapter 6 - Visions
Chapter 7 - Just In Case
Chapter 8 - Blood on the Leaves
Chapter 9 - The Burning Tree
Chapter 10 - Air and Shadow
Chapter 11 - Tears
Chapter 1 - The Cold, Hard World
Chapter 2 - A New Beginning
Chapter 3 - Brutality and Guilt
Chapter 4 - The Wastes
Chapter 5 - Into the Abyss
Chapter 6 - Lost
Chapter 7 - Hope From Shadow
Chapter 8 - Duty
Chapter 9 - Reunion
Chapter 10 - Council and Uncertainty
Chapter 1 - Misfits
Chapter 2 - The Great Takea
Chapter 3 - Decisions and Distrust
Chapter 4 - A Terrible Discovery
Chapter 5 - Descent Into Madness
Chapter 6 - Echos of Home
Edited by ZOMBI3S, Mar 19 2013 - 07:06 PM.