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#1 Offline Soran

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Posted Apr 03 2012 - 02:02 PM

Recently drew a picture that served as an April fools joke for my comic topic, for a "Future Project". I decided that I might post it here and see what you guys think,

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#2 Online Axilus Prime

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Posted Apr 03 2012 - 07:46 PM

Already said this before, but here's more depth: That picture is epic. I can see it's only two-shade, but then again, it has no color. Looks like a very well-drawn newspaper comic.

Only flaws are the lame weapon (Karz, a RAHKSHI staff, as redundant as it is, would have been better.) and the head. What is that, a round dumpster?

Just kidding about the round dumpster thing, but it could have more emotion or at least something about the character in the face. 9/10.

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#3 Offline Soran

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Posted Apr 04 2012 - 01:02 AM

Already said this before, but here's more depth: That picture is epic. I can see it's only two-shade, but then again, it has no color. Looks like a very well-drawn newspaper comic.

Only flaws are the lame weapon (Karz, a RAHKSHI staff, as redundant as it is, would have been better.) and the head. What is that, a round dumpster?

Just kidding about the round dumpster thing, but it could have more emotion or at least something about the character in the face. 9/10.


I tried to make it look like an inked drawing which is why the drawing is black and white. Also I was trying to finish this before April 1st, so there was also time issues involved... I might color it later.

The weapon isn't fully scene, but it is basically a trident of some sort. I could give you a large summary of the storyline I have this character follow but I'd rather not, so a basic way of putting it is that he is very close combat based.

The head is based off of the head of Rocka 2.0 as seen in the comics, I liked the head a bit, but I do agree with the lack of emotion. Its hard to make emotion with hero factory to be honest. If I colored it you would be able to see the details more clearly in the drawing.

Thanks for the C&C,
~Soran


#4 Online Axilus Prime

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Posted Apr 04 2012 - 01:16 AM

Yes, HF has about the emotional range of a teaspoon.

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Posted Apr 10 2012 - 05:22 PM

:kaukau: If this was colored in, this looks like it could be an actual promotional image, which is actualy quite impressive. While I personally enjoy other artistic styles more, someone who can show this level of specificity still turns my head.

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