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[Jack Flamestreak]

Greetings. Long has it been my dream to share my (somewhat) talent at the art of drawing, and now I finally find it an opportune time to do so. Any art I have made and will make in the future that falls under the genre of "drawing" will be posted here, on this very topic, so stay tuned for more...

Drawings:
Toa of Fire- 3. April 2012
Battle_ Energy blast- 5. April 2012


I hope you like what you've seen so far, you are welcome to comment, criticise and the other usual things. Have a wonderful day.

Edited by The Firewalker, Apr 05 2012 - 03:43 PM.

[Taka Nuvia]

The first drawing looks very raw, and kind of roughly done - but that's great. It gives it a certain atmosphere, and a unique appearance.
The lightning is very well done, although there should have been a few harsh highlights on the armour parts closest to the flame, if you want a more metallic look.

Now onto the second one - I am astounded.
The perspective you chose is not a simple one, yet the Toa in the distance is well-proportioned from what I can see. The ball of energy is really eye-catching, and perfectly done. Which brings me to the next point: composition (something I'm quite bad at xD). It's great. The viewer's gaze is directed over the whole picture quite easily, it's flowing and energetic.
But seeing the detail and well-executed characters, the background seems a bit, just a bit bland. Maybe some more detail would balance it a bit.

Just a small overall tip: although it's great that you work on your art on a big scale, I'd recommend resizing the pictures a bit before uploading them. Because when zoomed in, it's really really big, which makes it a bit hard.

I would love to see more from you in the future, keep up the amazing work!