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[Takanuinuva]

My entry to the your fired contest.

Several Kahu were experimented on by Makuta Mutran to try to make an immortality formula. The result was a Firey Rahi that when killed dissolved into ashes and rebuilt itself. But unfortunately the effect made the Rahi very aggresive and rendered the Rahi totally Blind. Thus Mutran abandoned the formula and released the Kahu to Karzanhi

Here is the pics

Front
http://upload.bricks...nuva/mc/005.jpg

Back
http://upload.bricks...nuva/mc/006.jpg

Side
http://upload.bricks...nuva/mc/007.jpg

Gallery when public
http://upload.bricks...ry.cgi?f=299202


Comments and critisim appriciated

Edited by Oxymoronaphobia, Jun 04 2012 - 06:14 PM.

[Wind Elemental]

I actually like the back story. Anyways, I really like the fiery appearance and the head is nicely designed. By the way, where are the eyes? Also, where did the pieces used to create the feet come from?

[Takanuinuva]

I actually like the back story. Anyways, I really like the fiery appearance and the head is nicely designed. By the way, where are the eyes? Also, where did the pieces used to create the feet come from?

The feet are the claws from the glatorian malum.

There are no eyes. I forgot to add that the Kahu became blind from the formula. I'll add that in

Edited by Oxymoronaphobia, Jun 04 2012 - 06:14 PM.

[Obsessionist]

I like it! It's not overyly complex, but it does look nice. I love your use of the Malum claws for the feet.

[tent163phantoka]

Best of luck, fellow contestant! I like it. Looks kinda like a bug.

[Phantomesque]

The torso is creative, but is lacking the armor it needs to really cover it up. The head however, looks very nice. It looks like a bug/bird which is what you were aiming for. Love the backstory. However those l think those legs are to small to support the whole Moc. The arms are nice, but they just don't go wiht those legs. I wish you luck in the BBC Oxy!

~Gravity

[Dralcax]

You could give him a more birdlike body, because now his torso has Pohatuan proportions, making his wings resemble bizarre arms, which is probably not the look you're going for. Also, the feet should be tiny claws, not huge ones. Try the orange Nui-Rama's orange Onua claws instead of Malum's large claws. Bird feet should only be big enough to support the MOC, and the legs should be minimized as well. As well, you gave him a very humanoid posture. Try making him lean forwards and balance it with a longer, flat tail. Finally, give him a rounder body and a more conical beak somehow, it will make it look more birdlike. Good luck in the contest, though!