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#41 Offline Cederak

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Posted Jun 21 2012 - 11:57 PM

See here.

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#42 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 22 2012 - 07:30 PM

What Lies Behind the Wall? reviewed.

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#43 Offline Iron Voltex

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Posted Jun 22 2012 - 07:44 PM

Hello. Just wondering if you guys would be willing to accept another review request.

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#44 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 22 2012 - 07:52 PM

Hello. Just wondering if you guys would be willing to accept another review request.

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Yep! We are pretty much always accepting requests, thanks to this new system we have in place. We'd be happy to accept your request. =]

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#45 Offline Iron Voltex

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Posted Jun 22 2012 - 08:10 PM

A Story - by ibrow for a review then please. It's not really the title, but then, it has no title, so yeah.

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#46 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 22 2012 - 08:29 PM

A Story - by ibrow for a review then please. It's not really the title, but then, it has no title, so yeah.


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Posted Jun 23 2012 - 02:38 AM

I Walk, by Kal Grochi.

I honestly have no idea why I wrote this-I just felt inspired to write something. I hope whoever reviews it likes it, and thanks in advance.


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Posted Jun 23 2012 - 03:28 AM

I Walk, by Kal Grochi.

I honestly have no idea why I wrote this-I just felt inspired to write something. I hope whoever reviews it likes it, and thanks in advance.


Assigned to Nuile. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =]

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#49 Offline Tolkien

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Posted Jun 23 2012 - 07:50 PM

A Story, by iBrow Hearts Rarity, reviewed.

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Posted Jun 23 2012 - 08:59 PM

The Tormenter, by Temporphilic.

Just something I wrote ages ago and found again recently in one of my numerous journals. It's a bit short...
If it's OK, can I get it reviewed?
Thanks. =3

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Posted Jun 23 2012 - 09:40 PM

Turning Point by Knock Out has been reviewed.

The Tormenter, by Temporphilic.

Just something I wrote ages ago and found again recently in one of my numerous journals. It's a bit short...
If it's OK, can I get it reviewed?
Thanks. =3


You're right, it is a bit short. But it's certainly OK to get reviewed. I'll have Yukiko handle this one. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. :)

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We will be amending the rules soon to include a notice regarding an extension.

Extension Requests: A critic may request an extension on an assignment no later than 96 hours (4 days to the hour) from the initial assigning. A critic may not request an extension two assignments in a row. If you are going to be late on an assignment, it is your responsibility to contact one of the curators. Failure to notify one of the curators and request an extension within the 96 hour period will result in receiving a strike.

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#52 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 24 2012 - 02:28 AM

Notice to all SSCC Critics


We will be amending the rules soon to include a notice regarding an extension.

Extension Requests: A critic may request an extension on an assignment no later than 96 hours (4 days to the hour) from the initial assigning. A critic may not request an extension two assignments in a row. If you are going to be late on an assignment, it is your responsibility to contact one of the curators. Failure to notify one of the curators and request an extension within the 96 hour period will result in receiving a strike.


And this has been added to the main post. However, this isn't anything new -- if anything, it's even less strict than what I had before. Four days should be ample time to either get a review done or let me know if you cannot complete it. Somehow this was forgotten in the transition into the new topic, but I used to say that you must let me know immediately. Again, I think four days is a fair amount of time, but I would rather have a good review with an extension than a lower-quality review if it comes to that. I urge critics to complete their reviews before those four days are up in case something does come up at the last minute, but the one-week policy is still in effect.

Thank you. =]

If you'll notice, I have also added one other part to the main post -- that is, our reviewing agenda. Cederak has kindly offered to keep an updated list of the current agenda which will serve as an easy resource for requesters and critics alike to see when reviews should be done. Look at Cederak's post here, the first post on the second page, to see that agenda.

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Posted Jun 26 2012 - 02:15 PM


I Walk, by Kal Grochi.

I honestly have no idea why I wrote this-I just felt inspired to write something. I hope whoever reviews it likes it, and thanks in advance.


Assigned to Nuile. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =]

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I apologize for the delay, but I Walk has been reviewed.

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Posted Jun 26 2012 - 09:21 PM

The delay is not a problem for me, nor is my lack of a plot. What is important, rather, is that you reviewed my story; for that I am thankful.

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Posted Jun 26 2012 - 09:31 PM

Dreams of Darkness by Nick Silverpen.

Just as a note, Zarayna, the Quiet Light, already reviewed this on his own, so if I could get a different critic... Thanks!


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Posted Jun 26 2012 - 09:38 PM

Dreams of Darkness by Nick Silverpen.

Just as a note, Zarayna, the Quiet Light, already reviewed this on his own, so if I could get a different critic... Thanks!


Assigned to Jedi Master J. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =]

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#57 Offline Iron Voltex

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Posted Jun 27 2012 - 09:18 AM

A Continuation by ibrow please.

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#58 Offline Cederak

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Posted Jun 27 2012 - 12:35 PM

A Continuation by ibrow please.

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A Review by Zaxvo, welcome. :)

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Posted Jun 30 2012 - 02:21 PM

And "The Tormenter" has been reviewed! Sorry for the lateness.

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Posted Jul 02 2012 - 07:15 PM

Them by Cinnamon Grochi (thebeggerpie)


It's a dark, disturbing story. Hope y'all don't mind.

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#61 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 02 2012 - 10:45 PM

Them by Cinnamon Grochi (thebeggerpie)


Assigned to Tyler Durden.

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Posted Jul 02 2012 - 11:21 PM

Them has been reviewed.

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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 08:11 AM

River, Oh River, Flow Gently For Me by Aderia, s'il vous plaît. (COT, but I'm pretty sure you guys take those)

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#64 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 11:35 AM

River, Oh River, Flow Gently For Me by Aderia, s'il vous plaît. (COT, but I'm pretty sure you guys take those)


Assigned to Zarayna.

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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 10:07 PM

A Continuation: reviewed

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Posted Jul 03 2012 - 10:32 PM

As requested, I have reviewed "Dreams Of Darkness". Thank you for choosing the SSCC.

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Posted Jul 07 2012 - 01:07 PM

I Am the Jungle, by Nuile, if you please.

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Posted Jul 07 2012 - 08:48 PM

Reviewed River oh river, flow gently over me.

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Posted Jul 07 2012 - 09:02 PM

I Am the Jungle, by Nuile, if you please.

From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith :smilemirunu:


Assigned to Proud Stigma. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =]

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Posted Jul 07 2012 - 10:30 PM

Guess I'll jump in here:

The End, by Tolkien.

Much obliged.

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Posted Jul 09 2012 - 03:03 AM

Guess I'll jump in here:

The End, by Tolkien.

Much obliged.

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Assigned to myself, as I'm next on the list. Actually, Ced's gonna take this one, as he'll be gone and unable to complete a request later -- he'll have it done by tomorrow. =]

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Posted Jul 10 2012 - 07:59 PM

The End by Tolkien has been reviewed. Thank you for choosing to mix business with pleasure and coming to the SSCC. :)

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Posted Jul 15 2012 - 08:56 PM

The Conclusion, by ibrow.

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#74 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 15 2012 - 09:34 PM

The Conclusion, by ibrow.

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I'll take this one. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =] And reviewed. Once again, apologies for the delay.

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Posted Jul 26 2012 - 09:37 AM

...So, uh, about that review... If the assigned critic can't do it, I'd take another one. =P

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Posted Jul 26 2012 - 10:30 AM

...So, uh, about that review... If the assigned critic can't do it, I'd take another one. =P


I believe your review was completed a while ago. Apologies for the miscommunication.

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Posted Jul 31 2012 - 08:00 AM

Oh, thank you. I didn't see that. Sorry for the inconvenience. XD

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Posted Jul 31 2012 - 10:42 PM

Haha, no worries. Anyway, since we aren't getting any new requests, I'll request one of my own stories to be reviewed: Souvenirs. Assigned to Tolkien.

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Posted Aug 05 2012 - 04:03 PM

Might as well start a trend then: Surrounded, Alone by Valixia. Assigned to Nuile.

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Posted Aug 05 2012 - 04:49 PM

Souvenirs, by Velox. Re-viewed.

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