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[Quote (Mr. Traveler)]

The Artist

Can I get this reviewed if that's fine? Kinda short. :B

[Velox]

The Artist

Can I get this reviewed if that's fine? Kinda short. :B

Of course! I'll assign it to Jedi Master J. Thank you for choosing the SSCC!

[The Novelist Called Nuile]

Might as well start a trend then: Surrounded, Alone by Valixia. Assigned to Nuile.

Yes, sir, ma'am, sir! *salutes* Reviewed, as per request and assignment, thank you for choosing the SSCC.

I think I'll further this trend. I would like to request reviews, please, for three individual pieces of flash fiction, found in this compilation: The Chimera, The Right Path, and Feel Good. Assigned to--oh, wait, I can't continue that part of the trend. Oh, well, my gratitude, then.

From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

[Cederak]

Might as well start a trend then: Surrounded, Alone by Valixia. Assigned to Nuile.

Yes, sir, ma'am, sir! *salutes* Reviewed, as per request and assignment, thank you for choosing the SSCC.

I think I'll further this trend. I would like to request reviews, please, for three individual pieces of flash fiction, found in this compilation: The Chimera, The Right Path, and Feel Good. Assigned to--oh, wait, I can't continue that part of the trend. Oh, well, my gratitude, then.

From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

I passed my appreciation of your wonderful review on to Cederak - he informed me what a welcome part of the SSCC you are. He also said something about your request being assigned to Zaxvo and that he thanks you for choosing the SSCC. I'm not really too big on trying to figure out all the critic jargon, but I'm sure you can decipher Ced's code words for yourself.

[Zaxvo]

So for flash fiction, I do a review of the three pieces? Just checking.

[Velox]

Yep. A review for the three ones he requested, since, being FF, the reviews shouldn't take as long. =]

[Zaxvo]

Right. Well, those reviews are done.

[Jedi Master J.]

As requested, I have reviewed "The Artist". Thank you for choosing the SSCC.

- JMJ 2012

[Quote (Mr. Traveler)]

Jedi Master J said if I had any complaints with his review, that I should let you guys know immediately.

Okay I'm done. He did a great job and was able to put a good amount of detail into a short story so short. lol Thanks a ton guys!

Edited by Grant-Sud Rises, Aug 14 2012 - 07:49 AM.

[Riisiing Moon]

A Tale of Makuta--Riisiing Moon.

My entry for the LSO SSC LOL ABBREVIATIONS. Thanks in advance!

[Cederak]

A Tale of Makuta--Riisiing Moon.

My entry for the LSO SSC LOL ABBREVIATIONS. Thanks in advance!

Assigned to Tyler Durden. Thank you for choosing the SSCC.

[Replicant]

The Descent - Lord Darkon

Haven't written a short story in a while, and I would love your very useful advice on this venture.

[Velox]

The Descent- Lord Darkon

Haven't written a short story in a while, and I would love your very useful advice on this venture.

Assigned to Proud Stigma. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! =]

[Cederak]

Visitor by Valixia


Assigned to Velox.

[The Lord Of Wednesday]

The Descent- Lord Darkon

Haven't written a short story in a while, and I would love your very useful advice on this venture.

Assigned to Proud Stigma. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! =]

Review complete.

Thanks again for choosing the SSCC.

Edited by Proud Stigma, Aug 20 2012 - 08:05 PM.

[The Renegade Emperor]

Uh, if possible, I'd take a request. I'd like some advice of my newest work:

Letter from a prey - The Renegade Emperor

Something different from my usual style, so I'd like to see how it affects Short Stories Critics. Thanks in advance!

[Cederak]

Uh, if possible, I'd take a request. I'd like some advice of my newest work:

Letter from a prey - The Renegade Emperor

Something different from my usual style, so I'd like to see how it affects Short Stories Critics. Thanks in advance!

I'll be handling your request personally. Thank you for choosing the SSCC.

EDIT: Done.

Edited by Valixia, Aug 24 2012 - 09:11 PM.

[Quote (Mr. Traveler)]

Alright I'd like to get The Last Guardian reviewed please. And thank you!

[Cederak]

Alright I'd like to get The Last Guardian reviewed please. And thank you!

Well...since you said please, I'll go ahead and assign this to Tolkien. Thanks for choosing the SSCC!

[Velox]

Visitor by Valixia


Assigned to Velox.

Reviewed.

[The Renegade Emperor]

Uh, if possible, I'd take a request. I'd like some advice of my newest work:

Letter from a prey - The Renegade Emperor

Something different from my usual style, so I'd like to see how it affects Short Stories Critics. Thanks in advance!

I'll be handling your request personally. Thank you for choosing the SSCC.

EDIT: Done.

Even if you didn't like it that much as I intended, thank you so much! Your words have been precious and I'll surely keep at it. Thanks again!

[X-Ray]

I would humbly request this new story of mine to be reviewed:

The Golden Age - by X-Ray

X-Ray

[Velox]

I would humbly request this new story of mine to be reviewed:

The Golden Age - by X-Ray

X-Ray

Assigned to Nuile. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =]

[Yukiko]

What We Create-Yukiko

Yay, formatting. I just loved going through this and replacing all my quotation marks and apostrophes and ellipses and em dashes since the BBcode turned them in to garbled messes. <<

Well anyway, it's a large chunk of text and I really appreciate if someone would tear it apart. ^^

Edited by Yukiko, Sep 04 2012 - 04:18 PM.

[Velox]

What We Destroy-Yukiko

Yay, formatting. I just loved going through this and replacing all my quotation marks and apostrophes and ellipses and em dashes since the BBcode turned them in to garbled messes. <<

Well anyway, it's a large chunk of text and I really appreciate if someone would tear it apart. ^^

Assigned to...well, you're next in the list, so I'll assign it to the next critic: Jedi Master J. haha. Thank you for choosing the SSCC!

[Yukiko]

What We Destroy-Yukiko

Yay, formatting. I just loved going through this and replacing all my quotation marks and apostrophes and ellipses and em dashes since the BBcode turned them in to garbled messes. <<

Well anyway, it's a large chunk of text and I really appreciate if someone would tear it apart. ^^

Assigned to...well, you're next in the list, so I'll assign it to the next critic: Jedi Master J. haha. Thank you for choosing the SSCC!

He reviewed my last story...but I suppose I'm not allowed to request someone else. ._. Oh well, thanks anyway. ^^

[The Novelist Called Nuile]

I would humbly request this new story of mine to be reviewed:

The Golden Age - by X-Ray

X-Ray

Assigned to Nuile. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =]

Reviewed, and please come again, Mr. X-Ray, sir.

From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

[Tolkien]

The Last Guardian, by Grant-Sud Rises...reviewed.

JRRT

[Grantaire]

Two things:

First, requesting a review of

Safe and Sound - Zarayna

Also, I expect to be back from my hiatus sometime in October.

[Cederak]

Two things:

First, requesting a review of

Safe and Sound - Zarayna

Also, I expect to be back from my hiatus sometime in October.

Sometime in October? Well, good to hear. I'll have Yukiko take care of this request. Thanks for choosing the SSCC.

[Grantaire]

Correction, I'm back.

[Jedi Master J.]

As requested, I have reviewed "What We Create". Thank you for choosing the SSCC.

He reviewed my last story...but I suppose I'm not allowed to request someone else. ._. Oh well, thanks anyway. ^^

Ma'am, I believe you are mistaken. I don't believe I have review any of your works before this point. If my review is not to your liking though, feel free to send me any criticism by PM or here, if you so desired.

- JMJ 2012

Edited by VI. Zexion, Sep 05 2012 - 12:53 AM.

[Yukiko]

Reviewed and recommended! ^^

Edited by Yukiko, Sep 07 2012 - 10:06 PM.

[Reznas]

Curiosity-Reznas

Thanks in advance!

-Rez

[Cederak]

Curiosity-Reznas

Thanks in advance!

-Rez

...You waited five minutes after posting that to bring it to us? Well, okay - call in the specialists early I suppose. Zaxvo will be handling the assignment. Thanks for (making no delay in) choosing the SSCC!

-Ced

[Riisiing Moon]

A Bench--Riisiing Moon

Here so soon after postage 'cause it's for an English assignment, so I'm hoping to get a review semi-soon.

[Velox]

A Bench--Riisiing Moon

Here so soon after postage 'cause it's for an English assignment, so I'm hoping to get a review semi-soon.

Well, I'll assign your review to Tyler Durden. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =]

[Zaxvo]

Curiosity-Reznas

Thanks in advance!

-Rez

...You waited five minutes after posting that to bring it to us? Well, okay - call in the specialists early I suppose. Zaxvo will be handling the assignment. Thanks for (making no delay in) choosing the SSCC!

-Ced

And I've done that one.

[Velox]

Attention fellow critics, authors, BZPower members, requesters, etc.:

The Charity Initiative has begun. What does this mean? The SSCC Critics will now be assigned one charity review per week. These are completely free of charge, and are given simply to help out our fellow authors on BZPower, stimulate activity within the writing presence of BZPower, and sharpen the skills of our critics.

If you have any questions, comments, concerns, etc., please feel free to PM me!

Critics, I have also sent you a PM on the matter. Please reply to it to let me know that you understand ASAP (also feel free to ask any questions/etc.). If you did not receive a PM, please PM me ASAP. Zaxvo, I was not able to PM you, so please either PM me or email me at andrew.page99[at]gmail.com so I can send you the information. =]

Thank you, everyone, and I look forward to starting this initiative with my fellow critics to stimulate activity!

~ Velox

[Velox]

Charity Initiative Assignments! I know it's not technically Wednesday any more, but I haven't gone to bed yet, so I count that as still "today" haha.

Velox: Shadows, by The Shouting God
Nuile: Inside by Jedi Knight Krazy
Yukiko: Within Temptation by Zarayna
Jedi Master J.: Anathain by Ironheart
Zaxvo: Long Way Down by Legolover-361
Tyler Durden: How Could I? by Legolover-361
Proud Stigma: [has already been assigned reviews in order for him to complete his probationary period]

I simply took the oldest 5 short stories posted in COT. Once every COT story has received a review, we will move to the Short Stories forum.

Please remember to state that you are from the SSCC when reviewing. Reviews are due by Wednesday, September 26th.

Edited by Velox, Sep 26 2012 - 07:51 PM.