After a week's delay [Thanks Velox], I return, with my review of Nuile's flash fiction Love Conquers All.
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Posted Nov 13 2012 - 03:25 AM
I would like to ask if my Short Story could be reviewed.
It's called Darkness- by me, Tehurye, of course.
Thank you!
Assigned to Zaxvo.
Also, I have two announcements for the SSCC:
The first is that the Charity Reviews will be put on hold for the remainder of November. Things are very busy for me right now (read: NaNoWriMo and school), and I figured I'd give everyone a break. We will be resuming them come December, and I will be PMing you once they start again. If you have not yet, please finis
The second is that, unfortunately, Jerzy has chosen to resign. While his stay at the club was short, we were still glad to have him and are sad to see him leave.
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Posted Nov 13 2012 - 07:53 AM
I would like to ask if my Short Story could be reviewed.
It's called Darkness- by me, Tehurye, of course.
Thank you!
Assigned to Zaxvo.
Thank you, Velox.
And thank you, Zaxvo!
Edited by Tehurye, Nov 13 2012 - 07:56 AM.
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Posted Nov 14 2012 - 03:41 PM
Who Am I? by Zaxvo
Assigned to Zarayna.
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Posted Nov 18 2012 - 10:38 PM
Reviewed Who Am I?.
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Posted Dec 07 2012 - 01:37 PM
I would like to request a review for a short story I posted the other day.
Death by Pride, by Toa Smoke Monster.
Thanks in advance!
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Posted Dec 08 2012 - 09:31 PM
I would like to request a review for a short story I posted the other day.
Death by Pride, by Toa Smoke Monster.
Thanks in advance!
Assigned to Samhain.
Also, re: Critics ~ The Charity Reviews will be starting up again this coming Wednesday. I'll send out PMs when it starts again.
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Posted Dec 09 2012 - 10:31 AM
Anyways, I'm back.
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Posted Dec 11 2012 - 03:27 AM
Hi, please review the following:
Internment, by Karzhani the Utahraptor
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Posted Dec 11 2012 - 01:03 PM
Hi, please review the following:
Internment, by Karzhani the Utahraptor
Assigned to myself. Thank you for choosing the SSCC.
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Posted Dec 11 2012 - 10:16 PM
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Posted Dec 15 2012 - 07:50 PM
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Posted Dec 15 2012 - 07:52 PM
I'm available to do reviews again this week, though I'm not sure about the time after.
All right, awesome, thanks.
Could I possibly get a review on The Walker's Excursion?
If somebody could do one then that'd be excellent. Thank you!
Assigned to Tolkien.
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Posted Dec 18 2012 - 04:58 PM
I'd like to request a review for my short story Special. Thanks (:
Assigned to Nuile. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! =]
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Posted Dec 18 2012 - 05:14 PM
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Posted Dec 18 2012 - 05:19 PM
Hey, former colleagues. I was hoping I could get a review for Anhedonia. Thank you!
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Aaand assigned to Yukiko. =]
Edit: I have reviewed Internment.
Edited by Velox, Dec 19 2012 - 12:21 AM.
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Posted Dec 19 2012 - 09:27 PM
All right, the Charity Reviews are back:
Velox: Gifts, by Yukiko
Nuile: Non-Bionicle Flash Fiction Entries by Danska: Shadow Master
Yukiko: The Cybernaut, by Takuma Nuva
Zaxvo: Gold and Silver Remembrances, by Nuile.
Samhain: Searching, by Nuile
(page 14, Ever Up)
Reviews due by December 26th, unless you are currently assigned a requested story, then they're due January 2nd as usual. =]
Edited by Velox, Dec 19 2012 - 09:28 PM.
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Posted Dec 26 2012 - 11:14 PM
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Posted Dec 27 2012 - 06:20 AM
And I have reviewed Gifts, by Yukiko. As a reminder, Nuile and Yukiko have until next week to complete their charity reviews, as they were assigned reviews when they were given.
And on that note, in lieu of the holidays I am giving you all the week off from Charity Reviews this week. We'll be back January 2nd with a new batch, though. Merry Christmas to all of you, and I hope you have a joyous and blessed New Year! 
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Posted Dec 30 2012 - 10:16 PM
The Settlement - X-Ray
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Posted Dec 31 2012 - 12:43 AM
The Settlement - X-Ray
Assigned to Zaxvo. Thank you for choosing the SSCC!
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Posted Jan 03 2013 - 04:22 AM
Next batch of Charity Reviews:
Velox: The Little Toy Boy Who Opened the Door, by Riisiing Moon
Nuile: Case #2011-1224-5003: Relevant Transcripts, by GSR
Yukiko: Our "great" Adventure, by Jowm
Zaxvo: Zombieland Christmas, by Ezorov
Samhain: Winter Years, by Peach 00
Due January 9th.
Edited by Velox, Jan 05 2013 - 09:43 PM.
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Posted Jan 04 2013 - 11:59 PM
Hi, all! TahuNuvaFan here. The new guy. 
This is a cool concept. Sounds like a good way to get some in-depth reviews from some major readers/writers.
I'd like a review for Dancing With Shadows if you please.
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Posted Jan 05 2013 - 02:17 AM
I'd like a review for Dancing With Shadows if you please.
Assigned to Samhain. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! =]
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Posted Jan 08 2013 - 12:58 AM
Hello, SSCC. Just stopping in to get my latest piece critiqued. Thanks!
The Garden by Cederak
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Posted Jan 08 2013 - 02:00 AM
Our "Great" Adventure is reviewed, and I would also like to request one:
Too Early by Yukiko. Have fun Velox. =P
Yep, assigned to myself. =P
Hello, SSCC. Just stopping in to get my latest piece critiqued. Thanks!
The Garden by Cederak
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And assigned to Tolkien.
Thank you both for choosing the SSCC.
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Posted Jan 08 2013 - 09:44 PM
Non-Bionicle Flash Fiction Entries And Stuff and Case #2011-1224-5003: Relevant Transcripts (you had to give me the long, convoluted names) are reviewed.
Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith 
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