Posted Jun 20 2012 - 11:51 PM
I really like the flames on the spine. It looks like a shell, but instead of being a hard material, it's made of flames, which is pretty cool. I also like the idea of the black on his head representing a place where he has been scorched, and I think you should try implementing the same idea elsewhere in the MOC, for example, making parts of one of his arms black to represent more battle damage.
I feel like the armor on the upper legs is too chunky and mismatched. You have some HF armor, with hard angles, and then round, bulbous Nuva shoulders. I think trying to find a single piece to cover the top would look better.
I like how the flamethrower has a kind of handguard thing going on, but I think it is too short and stubby, which could possibly be fixed by elongating the barrels a bit.