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#1 Offline DARKSIDERZ

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Posted Jun 17 2012 - 04:45 AM

My entry for the contest. I spent a lot of time searching for the USB drive that had the photos when they were on the laptop the whole time! Yeah.

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So, C&CC as always, please...

Am I supposed to give any backstory? No? Ok.

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#2 Offline Phantomesque

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Posted Jun 17 2012 - 08:35 AM

K, so here's the thing with me. I don't like Keetongu Orange with Red. That's why I did't use any in my Moc. :/

That aside, I'll comment on your Moc. Personally, I think you put too many colors in this. Black, Metru Red, Tran-Red, HF Red, and some gray sticking out. Your concept of a "Hand" kinda worked so I guess I like that. I like that torso, but it's a little too jumbled for my liking. And then you add the Noble Kiril, it throws me off. Sorry, it didn't really connect to me :/. Good luck in the contest however.

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#3 Offline Wind Elemental

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Posted Jun 17 2012 - 11:43 AM

Like what Gravity said, there are way too many colors and it's not focused on 1 or 2 colors but that weapon on the right hand is nicely done. There's not a whole lot to say about this but you did a good job on this.

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#4 Offline High Voltage

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Posted Jun 18 2012 - 02:54 AM

It's okay. The colours are a tad off, slightly because there are too many but mostly because they are unevenly spread. Don't get me wrong, I love me some keetongu orange, but the use of it is just overpowering and this is especially apparent in the torso where there is barely any red to be seen. Mata red also clashes with the keetongu orange. I also can't remember the short version of keetongu orange. Was it keetorange? That would make sense.

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Posted Jun 18 2012 - 11:17 AM

Like others have said, it has too many colors. However, I do like the arm designs and the weapon.




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