Okay... unfortunately, not much good to say about this. For starters, some of the character's colors look like they were taken from the default MS Paint color pallet. Then there's the background - there's no shading to add detail, but this can be excused. However, the line distinguishing the floor from the wall is too thick, and it looks odd. The couch looks decent, however, with no shading, it also seems to ruin that fact. Also, the speech bubble looks too smooth to match with the rest of the comic, thus making it seem... well, a little strange on the eyes. Other than that, i commend you for choosing Razor - i don't think there are any on-going comic strips at the moment that use the Razor sheet, so, nice choice on that. Also, i suggest that you should quickly get two more strips up - the best way to start a comic is to have at least three strips, so as people can get a good idea about what the comic is like/is about/how it looks in general. Unfortunately, at the current moment, this says nothing about the comic other than the fact that a couch is miscolored. Good luck, though, an aspiring comic maker is always welcome.
Edited by Leraku, Jul 09 2012 - 05:50 AM.
Everyone makes stupid decisions at some time. Don't pretend that you haven't. Even I have said some things that, now that i think about it, are extremely stupid.
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