268 replies to this topic

[Malignus]

reminds me of "caput draconis"

what's that from?

Harry Potter and the Sorceror's Stone

[rahkshi guurahk]

Yay! I'm free!

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Hey guys how ya doin'?
new comic is up. http://www.brickshel...TLM/parents.png
giggles, will you be my best man?

[Katniss Everdeen]

Lolz, like the comic says "What did I just get myself into?" lolz, great job, you're getting really good at this, (better then I was in my first season) can't wait to see what happens next!

[Axilus Prime]

LOL. Now they have to raise a kid with that annoying accent I see in those Cartoon Network DC shorts...XD

But just how old is he?

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

He is like... 3 or 4 'yeaws owld'.
And....
NEW COMIC!
http://www.brickshel...LM/zoruk_p1.png

AND GOOD NEWS! ALL THE LINKS ARE FIXED!!

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Aug 26 2012 - 12:46 PM.

[Katniss Everdeen]

Haha, that comic was win. "No, and... DON'T CALL ME HONEY!" Great job!

[Ptolemy]

I agree, I like the slap and how much you rotate parts instead of just keeping them as "bleh".
You have promise, but one thing thats making me groan is the end quality. They just sometimes look fuzzy at parts, especcially the text bubbles. After getting everything in place, I would increase the size so its at x2, then put it in GIMP and rotate the parts and add the text. And if you don't already, I would center the text in the bubbles.Other then the speech bubbles and size issues, I'd say you do good work here. Just make it bigger and you'll solve the main problems. Some things I would add is less random, as I've seen a lot of random over all of the comics as a whole. Where some random is good occasionally, too much in such short intervels is gonna kill the comics. Make things flow smoother into each other, it makes for less random, more comprehendibility without the fans having to think too hard, and it can make for more interesting comics.

So, all in all, you get a B in the American Grading system. Nothing to be ashamed of, just work on those things I've listed and you'll go from a decent comic maker to a pretty darn good one. All in all, I shall return to this, and thats a good thing, I'm a very picky person
Kudos to you my good man, you have much promise.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Wow! a B! I should show my math teacher!

[Ptolemy]

Wow! a B! I should show my math teacher!

AHAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!
Shouldn't we all? See, thats some good stand up punny right there, I told ya you had promise!

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

NEW COMIC!
RG. I told you to watch it on my upstairs TV But No, you had to watch on the flatscreen!

Note: I am practicing bubbles at the moment.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Aug 27 2012 - 02:13 PM.

[Ptolemy]

Hmm, a very familiar cat is on tv... Just not sure where I've seen him

Edit: I got your Q, don't worry

Edited by Facade, Aug 27 2012 - 03:15 PM.

[Malignus]

yes a very familiar cat

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

sorry oneker for using you in my DR WHO TV SHOW. You are now the docter's new compaion! No, JK. I just got it from the cyberman kit.

[Axilus Prime]

How to get people off your TV so you can watch what you want 101.

Unfortunately, I think I failed that class.

[Felinuva]

sorry oneker for using you in my DR WHO TV SHOW. You are now the docter's new compaion! No, JK. I just got it from the cyberman kit.

Its ok Loganto.

But could you also give credit.

[rahkshi guurahk]

NEW COMIC!
RG. I told you to watch it on my upstairs TV But No, you had to watch on the flatscreen!

Note: I am practicing bubbles at the moment.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Aug 27 2012 - 02:13 PM

Rofl.
Now that format worked out odd...
Btw, where'd you get the cyberman sprite from?

Edited by rahkshi guurahk, Sep 02 2012 - 11:41 AM.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

I got it from Oneker.

BTW. Sure thing oneker.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Sep 02 2012 - 01:14 PM.

[Felinuva]

NEW COMIC!
RG. I told you to watch it on my upstairs TV But No, you had to watch on the flatscreen!

Note: I am practicing bubbles at the moment.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Aug 27 2012 - 02:13 PM

Rofl.
Now that format worked out odd...
Btw, where'd you get the cyberman sprite from?

Its in my Blog.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

OK. filler time, no bridge, caps, or X-rays. just a filler.
http://www.brickshel...TLM/her_bit.png
BE ENTERTAINED NOWZ!

By the way, go read my biography/epic thing. it is in my sig!

I know how to knit. I do it when Im extreemely bored.

Edited by Nikolai Medtner, Sep 04 2012 - 10:30 AM.

[Axilus Prime]

Looks like a sitcom or commercial. XD

I like how she's getting mad about not getting to be the stereotype sweater-knitting girl. It's ironic.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Actually... she has a filler in her comics called shirt.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

I NEED VOICE SAMPLES! NAO! ALL PGS's! I NEED TO MIMIC YOUR VOICE BEFORE THE NEW STUFF COMES IN!

HERE IS ENTERTAINMENT WHYLE PGS's HOLD STUFF UP: FILLER:FRYZ



Edit: Whoa whoa whoa watch the caps, bro :0
-Wind-

Edited by -Windrider-, Sep 17 2012 - 06:32 PM.

[Malignus]

I NEED VOICE SAMPLES! NAO! ALL PGS's! I NEED TO MIMIC YOUR VOICE BEFORE THE NEW STUFF COMES IN!
...

Might I inquire as to what purpose they serve and how I am to sate such a request? Also, you needn't conduct your speech in such an impatient and impolite manner. This is a BZPower forum, not a LEGO Message board.

Edited by Malignus, Sep 17 2012 - 04:54 PM.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Ok, well... fine. sorry for all caps. (by the way, funny comparison)
I need the voice for The animated comics!

ANYWAY.

Here is an announcement to all my Peeps in my comics.
https://vimeo.com/49637232
AND IT'S ANIMATED!
*you may clap now*

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Sep 17 2012 - 05:10 PM.

[Malignus]

the link is dead.

it is a cool animation. I repeatedly forget that not everyone's age is like mine, despite lego being a kid's toy.

Edited by Malignus, Sep 17 2012 - 08:57 PM.

[Leraku]

Hm. Interesting animation - Might I ask what you used to animate it?
Also - I do peek at your comics now and then, and they are definitely improving over time. I'm personally going to be keeping an eye on this series.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Well leraku, I use this program called Stickman 5.6... it is really easy to use. and I like it... so yea.

Try it now Malignus.

[Axilus Prime]

Whoa! I gotta use that software, great animation. Anyway, I commented on the status with instructions since I have no mic. The voice is difficult, but not impossible. I can do it.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Sorry for non-comicatizing. I hate to clean. my life is all about tech. (they put it all in song for me. Technologic by daft punk.) Anyhoo I am making a couple new things.
(SPOILER ALERT!)
I am working on an actual bionicle manga, about the soul stealers, a group of makuta that eat souls.
A funny comedy TV show of the classic toa mata and me. so awesome scause that is.
and I am making really cool MOCs.
ASK ME ABOUT THESE THINGS!

Hey guys. Im actually going to NOT animate anything. yet once I clean my room, I will make classic comics again. along with a new series, too! The name of this will be... BIONICLE the show! a funny side of the legend. these comics shall be drawn by hand until I make my new kit. the loga kit. this kit will have cute little chibi characters. totes started from scratch. except for flipnote hatana. I got the chibi Idea from that.

WELL, see ya guys. I hope. if my room doesn't swallow me first! >_<

ZOMG! MY ROOM IS DONE! MATA NUI! IM HOME!


Check out the new
BIONICLE the show! the funny side of the legend.

from my sig.
Will be updating soon!

Edited by -Windrider-, Oct 21 2012 - 03:30 AM.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

New comic, no story arc. sorry guys. just stretchin' for the moment. need to feel it again. Shake it out.

hello? guys? you there?

Edited by Hahli Husky, Nov 02 2012 - 05:03 PM.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

NEW COMIC!

Give it back!

A little prized posetion of mine got stolen by a cirtian PGS.

[Malignus]

Matoran who cross Malignus seldom live to tell the tale

[Axilus Prime]

Now that was some good comedy. Not the "look, a title" one, that was terrible.

But this one was good. Your comic skills are definitely improving. Better grammar than last time I came here, too.

That was also some good perspective and rotation.

Pulling lethal weapons over a peanut butter stash key...classic. But if Malignus had that, why was he running in the first place? XD

[Calvirick]

HAHA, the grey dude can't hold the gun right. XD

And yes I guess peanut butters that important.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Ha ha. thanks guys. the title one was actually supposed to be an effortless filler. sorry for it being dumb. but guess what?


IM 14!

[Malignus]

the barrel is definitely resting on his thumb.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

thats how awesome you are malignus

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

This is a, how you say "birthday" comic.
Kalarezka, STEALER OF SOULS!
Not all birthdays are good.

[Ptolemy]

Sorry creepy long named guy, but I already have dibs on most souls, his happens to one of them.