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[Axilus Prime]

Whoa, didn't expect this to show up here too!

So then, every birthday he must battle Kalarezka to live another year, along with other stuff like saving Matoran?

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Actually Alaxus, long before my comics, this guy, kalarezka, was a soul eater back when I was a toa. I had been of two elements, Air and plantlife. The soul eater stole the souls of all Le-koro, so I sacrificed my air elemental abilities for them. stealing the souls back from kalarezka, and returning to matoran form. Yet, a debt must be payed. for eternity, I must dual him every birthday, otherwise, brutico is going to find me soulless on my bedroom floor. No one elce knows about this but me.
and those tho are wondering:
nalhasayit xa fesh hososh eis xa hotafhogh dahie hashea - this is in the ancient words of the great beings.
Open the gates to go to the relam of the soul stealer - what it means

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 11 2012 - 08:10 PM.

[Axilus Prime]

Ah, so a more serious story arc? I'd like to see you try your hand at it. It could be interesting.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Ill try to add some zing, put no promeses. or however you spell it.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

New comic.

A battle, a death, and a truth.

[Axilus Prime]

I didn't know Loganto could fire energy waves...

Your graphics have improved, but there's a glaring flaw in Kalarezka's finishing move.

How do you stab someone in that manner...with a scythe?

I did not see that Snicker bit coming. O_o

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

what are you calling a bit? ummmmmmm.... nevermind.

a circular swing and a push. that is how it got in there.

thankyou for graphics compliment, i'll look at that. aw dangit. forgot about that.

yep he can!

thankyou! goodnight!

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 12 2012 - 01:21 AM.

[Axilus Prime]

I find it funny how you answered everything in the opposite order that I said it...

Anyway, that's a rather awkward move to make. Oh, and since it looks like you're using GIMP, don't use the pencil tool for blood. Use the brushes that look like stains, but in red. It looks more like blood.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

nope, still on paint.net.

[Axilus Prime]

Then use the brush or the airbrush/spray can. Pencil is not good for blood.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Make room for the newest great being in town, 'cuz it's tomorow!

THEREFORE

new comic!

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Nope, ever scence last year, I planed this. so no sewage.

[Axilus Prime]

Well, that's an interesting twist, but there are a few problems with that. I'll give you some critique so you can improve next time around. Basically, too many plot holes, and it came across as random and anticlimactic.

1. Who is that gold guy? Where did he come from? How does he know Loganto? What's their relation? How did he get the power to turn people into great beings, and why did he do it?

2. What about Loganto? Why did he go to him when he died? Why was he worthy or capable of becoming a great being?

3. Great Beings aren't made for fighting, they're made for creating and being really tall.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Alaxus, remember bulita, from the new mask saga? that's him, and he IS a great being, therefore, he has the authority.
He saved me so I could live. I dont die, AND i can do cool stuff.
When a matoran dies, he goes thrue his mask's spirit. most masks dont have a spirit, so streight true the vail they go. I have bulita as my mask spirit. the one who gave me the powers, remember?
the only way to make me live was to become immortal, so I turned into a great being.
I just needed to live to fight kalarezka, and I know, but look at rohalison, he is still a matoran, yet a great being too.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 13 2012 - 06:04 PM.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

NEW COMIC!
excuse me.

[Katniss Everdeen]

Hehe, wow! XD
You fired your lazer... Never seen that before..
Awesome!!
Great job, dude!

Edited by Haldir of Lorien, Nov 13 2012 - 06:20 PM.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

What about the others? you arent, wierded out?
Ummmmm so yeah.

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 13 2012 - 06:23 PM.

[Katniss Everdeen]

OH EM GEEE!!! WHUT!?!?!....... Eeeeeew... No offense..

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

It's for the comics though... I think.
Most likely.

Quack?

LETS GET AWAY FROM THE SUBJECT.

cheese.

[Terra Nuva]

Kinda creepy Loganto. It seems like you have an internet crush lol

[Axilus Prime]

Good enough explanation, Loganto. In that case you're fine.

Well. This is awkward. Have you two even met?

On to the comic, then.

I couldn't really tell who was saying what around the beginning, the dialogue was confusing. Anyway, SHOOP DA WHOOP LAZOR. Instantly solves villain problems instantly.

Looks like he burned him so badly that his blood congealed.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

IT'S FOR THE COMICS! GOODNESS!
I said lets change the subject to cheese!

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Or birthdays!
NEW COMIC

hello? anyone home?

END OF SEASON ONE!
PGS spots open (go for it soran! I dare ya!)
Time for changes.
All my PGS's, can you:
give me your element type and any extras
your personality
any changes you wish to make to your char.
If anyone has comic sugestions, go for it.
Cat names Contest!
poor (to be named later) has no name!
ALL ENTRIES MUST BE IN THE FORM OF A PM.
only one entry per BZPer
no I will not name him oneker. unless that's the best you got.
it is a HE.

Edited by -Windrider-, Nov 15 2012 - 12:32 AM.

[Axilus Prime]

Well, the conclusive happy ending!

Season 2! Fresh start, leaving all the noobish fails from before deep within the bottomless pits of old Brickshelf folders...

You've definitely improved a lot. I guess I'll go PM you now.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

ah ha ha. thanks. but season one will always be on my hard-drive... I mean heart, yea heart.
Also, I found a patch on PDN for object outlines, so glow text comics are coming up! (clap for me will ya!)
I'll give ya a preview in about an hour. im at school right now. last piriod though!
See ya soon!

[Terra Nuva]

He must be in my time zone Loganto. Some suggestions I can give you:

Glow text( which you will be doing anyway) it looks cleaner if your not a pro on speech bubbles.

Grammar: It will be better if you come up with conclusive grammar for the next season. You have obviously improved since the first comics but just keep that in mind. Connect thoughts clearly and put text that comes first above other text so people can read the story downward.

Spelling: Use google and try not to misspell any words. It will make the comics more enjoyable. I know I'm not great at spelling because English is not my language but I try to look up all the words I don't know.

You have improved the asthetics from the beginning so I don't have much more to say other than good luck.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

I am going to use glow text from now on.
I am working on my grammar and spelling.
Also, I am working on getting cash for a virus protection program.
I am trying to get comic Ideas, so feel free to help.
I also only have... two PGS spots left? so hurry up and get some grub!
see ya guys!

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 19 2012 - 02:14 PM.

[Terra Nuva]

Umm, your not in the UCS. I said you will be a cameo

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

make that one PGS spot, and what is all this comotion about chimoru R?

[Terra Nuva]

make that one PGS spot, and what is all this comotion about chimoru R?

Nothing, I suggest you keep with Chimoru r. Contrary to what I have said before.

[Tecnokua]

This is a bit late but its been awile since i've seen one of the huge BLARGH lazers for a while i miss seeing those but nice ending to season 1

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Thanks! back in my roblox days that used to be my favorite thing to do.
 
 
did my comics die? am I all alone in this world? somebody say something! PLEASE!




 
 

Edited by -Windrider-, Dec 25 2012 - 10:35 PM.

[Ptolemy]

Just post a comic man. That's one reason I started Pursuit, Aa lost steam. Just remember to put something new out during holidays (like one panels or psa's) to keep our (short) attention(span)!

[Terra Nuva]

Who cares if people aren't commenting. Just keep posting comics if it's what you enjoy.

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

Thats the thing, all my files are on My computer. but I cant go on mine. only the family computer.

[Terra Nuva]

Atleast your files still exist, unlike mine

[Loganto The Bo-Matoran]

NEW FRIGGAN COMIC UP! WOHOO!

 

I have the power!

 

but don't tell anyone, I'm still grounded.

 

Shhhhh!

[Ptolemy]

I'm telling your mom.


About the cat.

[Axilus Prime]

LOL. 

 

Great Being powers are hilarious.

 

It was a good random short comic, I guess.

[Flaredrick: Forgotten One]

That was one random take there, yet hilarious.