Loganto The Le Matoran.
Posted Nov 11 2012 - 06:50 PM
So then, every birthday he must battle Kalarezka to live another year, along with other stuff like saving Matoran?
Posted Nov 11 2012 - 08:05 PM
and those tho are wondering:
nalhasayit xa fesh hososh eis xa hotafhogh dahie hashea - this is in the ancient words of the great beings.
Open the gates to go to the relam of the soul stealer - what it means
Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 11 2012 - 08:10 PM.
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Posted Nov 12 2012 - 12:57 AM
A battle, a death, and a truth.
Posted Nov 12 2012 - 01:07 AM
Your graphics have improved, but there's a glaring flaw in Kalarezka's finishing move.
How do you stab someone in that manner...with a scythe?
I did not see that Snicker bit coming. O_o
Posted Nov 12 2012 - 01:16 AM
a circular swing and a push. that is how it got in there.
thankyou for graphics compliment, i'll look at that. aw dangit. forgot about that.
yep he can!
Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 12 2012 - 01:21 AM.
Posted Nov 12 2012 - 01:21 AM
Anyway, that's a rather awkward move to make. Oh, and since it looks like you're using GIMP, don't use the pencil tool for blood. Use the brushes that look like stains, but in red. It looks more like blood.
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Posted Nov 13 2012 - 12:42 AM
1. Who is that gold guy? Where did he come from? How does he know Loganto? What's their relation? How did he get the power to turn people into great beings, and why did he do it?
2. What about Loganto? Why did he go to him when he died? Why was he worthy or capable of becoming a great being?
3. Great Beings aren't made for fighting, they're made for creating and being really tall.
Posted Nov 13 2012 - 02:48 PM
He saved me so I could live. I dont die, AND i can do cool stuff.
When a matoran dies, he goes thrue his mask's spirit. most masks dont have a spirit, so streight true the vail they go. I have bulita as my mask spirit. the one who gave me the powers, remember?
the only way to make me live was to become immortal, so I turned into a great being.
I just needed to live to fight kalarezka, and I know, but look at rohalison, he is still a matoran, yet a great being too.
Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 13 2012 - 06:04 PM.
Posted Nov 13 2012 - 06:08 PM
Posted Nov 13 2012 - 06:19 PM
You fired your lazer... Never seen that before..
Great job, dude!
Edited by Haldir of Lorien, Nov 13 2012 - 06:20 PM.
Posted Nov 13 2012 - 06:22 PM
Ummmmm so yeah.
Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 13 2012 - 06:23 PM.
Posted Nov 13 2012 - 06:38 PM
LETS GET AWAY FROM THE SUBJECT.
Posted Nov 13 2012 - 07:37 PM
Posted Nov 13 2012 - 11:38 PM
Well. This is awkward. Have you two even met?
On to the comic, then.
I couldn't really tell who was saying what around the beginning, the dialogue was confusing. Anyway, SHOOP DA WHOOP LAZOR. Instantly solves villain problems instantly.
Looks like he burned him so badly that his blood congealed.
Posted Nov 14 2012 - 07:19 AM
I said lets change the subject to cheese!
Posted Nov 14 2012 - 09:25 AM
hello? anyone home?
END OF SEASON ONE!
PGS spots open (go for it soran! I dare ya!)
Time for changes.
All my PGS's, can you:
give me your element type and any extras
any changes you wish to make to your char.
If anyone has comic sugestions, go for it.
Cat names Contest!
poor (to be named later) has no name!
ALL ENTRIES MUST BE IN THE FORM OF A PM.
only one entry per BZPer
no I will not name him oneker. unless that's the best you got.
it is a HE.
Edited by -Windrider-, Nov 15 2012 - 12:32 AM.
Posted Nov 15 2012 - 12:29 AM
Season 2! Fresh start, leaving all the noobish fails from before deep within the bottomless pits of old Brickshelf folders...
You've definitely improved a lot. I guess I'll go PM you now.
Posted Nov 15 2012 - 02:39 PM
Also, I found a patch on PDN for object outlines, so glow text comics are coming up! (clap for me will ya!)
I'll give ya a preview in about an hour. im at school right now. last piriod though!
See ya soon!
Posted Nov 15 2012 - 03:53 PM
Glow text( which you will be doing anyway) it looks cleaner if your not a pro on speech bubbles.
Grammar: It will be better if you come up with conclusive grammar for the next season. You have obviously improved since the first comics but just keep that in mind. Connect thoughts clearly and put text that comes first above other text so people can read the story downward.
Spelling: Use google and try not to misspell any words. It will make the comics more enjoyable. I know I'm not great at spelling because English is not my language but I try to look up all the words I don't know.
You have improved the asthetics from the beginning so I don't have much more to say other than good luck.
Posted Nov 19 2012 - 01:56 PM
I am working on my grammar and spelling.
Also, I am working on getting cash for a virus protection program.
I am trying to get comic Ideas, so feel free to help.
I also only have... two PGS spots left? so hurry up and get some grub!
see ya guys!
Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Nov 19 2012 - 02:14 PM.
Posted Nov 28 2012 - 01:44 PM
Posted Nov 28 2012 - 05:45 PM
make that one PGS spot, and what is all this comotion about chimoru R?
Nothing, I suggest you keep with Chimoru r. Contrary to what I have said before.
Posted Nov 28 2012 - 06:04 PM
Posted Dec 02 2012 - 11:30 AM
did my comics die? am I all alone in this world? somebody say something! PLEASE!
Edited by -Windrider-, Dec 25 2012 - 10:35 PM.
Posted Dec 25 2012 - 05:53 PM
Posted Jan 02 2013 - 01:05 PM
Who cares if people aren't commenting. Just keep posting comics if it's what you enjoy.
Posted Jan 07 2013 - 05:05 PM
Thats the thing, all my files are on My computer. but I cant go on mine. only the family computer.
Posted Feb 07 2013 - 05:11 PM
NEW FRIGGAN COMIC UP! WOHOO!
but don't tell anyone, I'm still grounded.
Posted Feb 07 2013 - 05:18 PM
About the cat.
Posted Feb 07 2013 - 06:05 PM
Great Being powers are hilarious.
It was a good random short comic, I guess.
Posted Feb 07 2013 - 06:53 PM
That was one random take there, yet hilarious.
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
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