Edited by Emissary to the Void, Jun 26 2012 - 06:39 PM.
Flying Octopi, Grubby Villains, And Guardsmen Basketballs
Posted Jun 26 2012 - 06:36 PM
"One day, I'll send you out on a routine inquiry and it'll turn out to be just that."
Posted Jun 26 2012 - 08:49 PM
You are missing a quotation mark there.
“I have been waiting for you", the Matoran-shaped Makuta spoke, his voice harsh and grating.
Posted Jun 27 2012 - 03:26 AM
Posted Jun 27 2012 - 01:37 PM
Posted Jun 29 2012 - 03:53 AM
Agree with that last sentence, the intro was very serious and the rest was very funny.
Looks like the Turaga forgot a lesson in the Toa training...anyway, liked this. Sweet and simple, and that works really good for comedy. One thing I particularly liked was the serious intro you gave, which made the twist all the more shocking.
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