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[Hurricane iBrow]

Okay, since I'm getting sick of 0 replies to my topics and I'm just posting this so someone actually READS the Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings, here's another one.

The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings
The Bohrok-Kal appear in a colour-coded comedy because they hate scripts.
In Progress
Written by me.

Oh Huuuuubert....

-ibrow

[ZHX]

Which chapters? You cannot review a comedy without knowing which chapters to review! The template is required~!

[Hurricane iBrow]

Oh god it;s not a oneshot aaaaaaaugh
You must fix it, Phovos of the Raptors!

-ibrow

[Phovos the Raptor]

All of the chapters.

Especially the recent ones.

I don't get it, I read everyone else's comedies but no one reads mine

[Hurricane iBrow]

There's a chapter limit for reviews, so if your comedy is longer than that, Hubert'll probably just do the newer or older ones, and not both.

-ibrow

[Phovos the Raptor]

Okay, let's have it from this chapter then. That's since the last person replied.

I update TBKR daily, in the hope to get someone to actually read it, but maybe that's in vain...

[Hurricane iBrow]

You heard the fellow, Hubert. Onward, soldier!

-ibrow

[ZHX]

Yessir!

It's good that I'm only doing those six chapters from that post, because if I did the entire comedy, there would be nineteen chapters to review.

EDIT: Anyway, Review here.

Edited by It's a Gundam!, Oct 06 2012 - 05:24 AM.

[Phovos the Raptor]

And I just replied to your review. I have a feeling that you kinda didn't get the idea behind it.

[Hurricane iBrow]

fightfightfight
kisskisskiss

Anyway, I'll leave this mostly up to Hubert to defend his reviewing style (since it's uh, his reviewing style). However, having a cohesive plot can give any piece of writing far more appeal, and can help to keep drawing readers in as they will want to read the next instalment of the piece.

That's all I will say here; Hubert can defend himself from here. =P

-ibrow

[ZHX]

A piece of fiction can be interpreted in many different ways. Even ways completely different from the idea that was the driving force behind its creation.

[Hurricane iBrow]

A piece of fiction can be interpreted in many different ways. Even ways completely different from the idea that was the driving force behind its creation.

And the defense has arrived! Would the accuser like to take this to the CCCC*, or shall we simply debate here, or has it all ended?

-ibrow

*Comedies Critics Club Court

[Phovos the Raptor]

Hahaha, CCCC. Let's hope there isn't a CCCCC. Or a CCCCCC.

[Applejack]

I'll give you guys something to do.

I have two comedies with 0 replies. I wish to correct that. I've been good, reading other people's comedies but no one seems to want to return the favour.

An Ask Us Comedy With A Twist (AAUSCWAT)
So, since you've interrupted their peace and quiet, you might as well ask them some questions...
In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: All of them.

Yet Another Comedy I Will Probably Forget About (YACIWPFA)
Nidhiki is stuck with a Bohrok, a Bohrok-like being, a Raptor, an Enderman, a doctor and a worm with a jetpack. If something funny doesn't happen, I'll eat Lehvak.
In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: All of them.

Author: Me.

Reviewed!

[Hurricane iBrow]

Added into the list.

-ibrow

[Tech Warrior]

Been working on this for a bit now; I think it's time to request a civilized review...

[/b]http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4468
]Tahu's Tips to Survival[/url]
Author: Tech Warrior
Status of your Comedy: In progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-5 (assuming that's the limit)


It's nothing too incredibly serious, but there is a devious plot behind it... Chapters 1-5 give a good introduction to the story, I feel; the later chapters further the plot. I'd like a review on the beginning five chapters for now, though, since that's where most of the humor lies.


Thanks!
~ TW

Edited by Tech Warrior, Oct 18 2012 - 04:26 PM.

[Hurricane iBrow]

Been working on this for a bit now; I think it's time to request a civilized review...

[/b]http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4468
]Tahu's Tips to Survival[/url]
Author: Tech Warrior
Status of your Comedy: In progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-5 (assuming that's the limit)


It's nothing too incredibly serious, but there is a devious plot behind it... Chapters 1-5 give a good introduction to the story, I feel; the later chapters further the plot. I'd like a review on the beginning five chapters for now, though, since that's where most of the humor lies.


Thanks!
~ TW

Assigned to fishers64.

-ibrow

[fishers64]

Been working on this for a bit now; I think it's time to request a civilized review...

[/b]http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4468
]Tahu's Tips to Survival[/url]
Author: Tech Warrior
Status of your Comedy: In progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-5 (assuming that's the limit)


It's nothing too incredibly serious, but there is a devious plot behind it... Chapters 1-5 give a good introduction to the story, I feel; the later chapters further the plot. I'd like a review on the beginning five chapters for now, though, since that's where most of the humor lies.


Thanks!
~ TW

Assigned to fishers64.

-ibrow

Got it. Will try to pull it in by the end of this weekend. (I've already read some of this... in the past, so shouldn't take me too long.)

Edit: Sorry for the delays, but here it is:

Tahu's Tips to Survival
Chapters Reviewed: 1-5, per request.
Reviewer's Rating: 8/10

Edited by fishers64, Oct 25 2012 - 12:20 AM.

[Hurricane iBrow]

The review has been recorded!

-ibrow

[Jalina T.T.]

I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!

You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!

Road Trip 2!
Status: In progress
Chapters to review: 1-5, of course. But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.

Have fun!

Edited by Jalina T.T., Nov 02 2012 - 06:48 PM.

[Hurricane iBrow]

I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!

You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!

Road Trip 2!
Status: In progress
Chapters to review: 1-5, of course. But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.

Have fun!

Hubert, this review shall be yours!

-ibrow

[Cederak]

Well, I haven't posted a comedy in over five years and since I don't recall there being a CCC back then, it's nice to be able to make use of your service here. Thanks.


Rewriter
Author: Cederak
Status: Finished
Chapters: 1

[Hurricane iBrow]

Well, I haven't posted a comedy in over five years and since I don't recall there being a CCC back then, it's nice to be able to make use of your service here. Thanks.


Rewriter
Author: Cederak
Status: Finished
Chapters: 1

Since I've already sort of reviewed this, Rarity, you're up!

-ibrow

[ZHX]

I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!

You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!

Road Trip 2!
Status: In progress
Chapters to review: 1-5, of course. But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.

Have fun!

Hubert, this review shall be yours!

-ibrow

I should have it finished by the end of the Melbourne Cup Long Weekend.

[Hurricane iBrow]

fishers, time to get busy! I am throwing a request at you!

ROBOTS!
Author: iBrow
Status: Finished
Chapters: 3

-ibrow

[fishers64]

fishers, time to get busy! I am throwing a request at you!

ROBOTS!
Author: iBrow
Status: Finished
Chapters: 3

-ibrow

Reviewed.

ROBOTS!
Author: iBrow
Chapters Reviewed: All.
Number Rating: 7/10.

Don't turn purple.

Edited by fishers64, Nov 05 2012 - 04:19 PM.

[ZHX]

I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!

You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!

Road Trip 2!
Status: In progress
Chapters to review: 1-5, of course. But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.

Have fun!

REVIEW COMPLETE.

[Hurricane iBrow]

Belatedly I will inform you that your review was recorded.
Rarity, you have 5 days to finish you review starting tomorrow.

Just as a word of warning to you all, I'm considering shortening the window you have to review comedies from two weeks to one - other critics club operate under that just fine, and they are far more busy than we are.

-ibrow

[Applejack]

But I like the 2 week window.

I'll have to review it tomorrow, when I'm back home.

[fishers64]

Just as a word of warning to you all, I'm considering shortening the window you have to review comedies from two weeks to one - other critics club operate under that just fine, and they are far more busy than we are.

-ibrow

It doesn't matter to me one way or another, since I usually finish within a few days anyway.

[ZHX]

I prefer the two week, but I can manage with one.

[Applejack]

Well, I haven't posted a comedy in over five years and since I don't recall there being a CCC back then, it's nice to be able to make use of your service here. Thanks.


Rewriter
Author: Cederak
Status: Finished
Chapters: 1

Since I've already sort of reviewed this, Rarity, you're up!

-ibrow

R-R-Reviewed!

[Hurricane iBrow]

Alright, review recorded.

As of right now, the review time window has been reduced to one week.

-ibrow

[Applejack]

Aw. I liked the 2 week window.

Oh well.

[Cederak]

Thank you for the CCC review. Any/all criticism is greatly appreciated.

-Ced

[ZHX]

Will be on camp for the next five days. So I won't be able to do any reviews.

[Hurricane iBrow]

Alright, Rarity or fishers, this is to keep you busy:

Dark Unto Days
Author: iBrow
Status: Finished
Chapters: All 4

[fishers64]

Alright, Rarity or fishers, this is to keep you busy:

Dark Unto Days
Author: iBrow
Status: Finished
Chapters: All 4

That one should go to Rarity. End of semester...I'm swamped.

[ZHX]

Also means we may have to recruit more minions critics for the cause.

[Applejack]

Alright, Rarity or fishers, this is to keep you busy:

Dark Unto Days
Author: iBrow
Status: Finished
Chapters: All 4

That one should go to Rarity. End of semester...I'm swamped.

I have end of semester too.
Eh. I'll try.