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#81 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted Nov 25 2012 - 03:39 PM

If it's end of semester, I'll boost your limit to two weeks this one time. Also because it's me and I'm not that important.

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Posted Nov 27 2012 - 04:29 PM

Comedy: Nuva Nation
Status: Finished
Chapters requested for Review: 24-28

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"All that is not eternal is eternally out of date." -C.S. Lewis

The Selected BZPower.com Literary Works of X-Ray

 

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Glatorian of Bara Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal * Nuva Nation * Bionicles at Work * X-Ray: The Return (One-Shot)

 

-Epics-

Bionicle: Infinities (Old review topic) (New review topic)

 

-Short Stories-

What Comes After * The Golden Age * Hero of the Day * The Settlement * The Ballad of Master Chief * West of Po-Koro

* Whatever Happened to the Agent of the Bat?

 


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Posted Nov 27 2012 - 09:10 PM

Comedy: Nuva Nation
Status: Finished
Chapters requested for Review: 24-28

:akaku: X-Ray :akaku:


I guess this one is mine, since my critics are all deserting. >.>
Expect it Friday or Saturday!

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Posted Nov 30 2012 - 03:16 AM

Deserting? Nah, I was just losing blood and water and getting tanned over two days of rest and three days of hiking and camping along the Great Ocean Road.

But I'm back now.


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Posted Nov 30 2012 - 07:10 PM

Deserting? Nah, I was just losing blood and water and getting tanned over two days of rest and three days of hiking and camping along the Great Ocean Road.

But I'm back now.

 

Alright, I'm actually going to give you the request, then. :/ I've got too much on my plate this weekend.

 

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Posted Nov 30 2012 - 07:26 PM

Right on it sir. I have a lot of free time this week, so I can do it.

EDIT:

Comedy: Nuva Nation
Status: Finished
Chapters requested for Review: 24-28
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REVIEW COMPLETE


Edited by Ordinary Magician, Dec 02 2012 - 04:04 AM.


#87 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted Dec 04 2012 - 03:34 PM

Recorded in the index!

 

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Posted Dec 04 2012 - 04:08 PM

Great. Now all we need to do is wait here, twiddling our thumbs until someone wants a review.



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Posted Dec 04 2012 - 08:35 PM

Rarity, just a reminder that you have four days to post your review.

 

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Posted Dec 05 2012 - 01:21 AM

Rarity, just a reminder that you have four days to post your review.

 

-ibrow

So it IS my review... K.

 

Also, I may have to resign in a few weeks.



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Posted Dec 05 2012 - 01:32 AM

Oh dear.

 

Why is that, though?



#92 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted Dec 05 2012 - 09:39 PM

Well, yes. You DID say you would take it, and I thusly DID assign it to you.

 

We'll be sorry to see you go, although I must echo Hubert's question here.

 

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Posted Dec 06 2012 - 09:05 AM

Hi, I'm here to request a review (: 

 

 

Comedy Title: Ask Makuta Returns
Author: Karzhani the Utahraptor
Status of your comedy: In Progress 
Chapters to be reviewed: 92 and 93 (optionally 1-91, but that's in the archive) 

 

 

Edit: Hi, for some reason the editor isn't allowing me to link the text above, so the link is here  (: 


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#94 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted Dec 06 2012 - 03:22 PM

Hi, I'm here to request a review (: 

 

 

Comedy Title: Ask Makuta Returns
Author: Karzhani the Utahraptor
Status of your comedy: In Progress 
Chapters to be reviewed: 92 and 93 (optionally 1-91, but that's in the archive) 

 

 

Edit: Hi, for some reason the editor isn't allowing me to link the text above, so the link is here  (: 

 

Alright, assigned to Hubert.

 

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Posted Dec 06 2012 - 05:04 PM

Will get onto that as soon as possible. Like, a day or two.



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Posted Dec 06 2012 - 05:49 PM

Well, yes. You DID say you would take it, and I thusly DID assign it to you.

 

We'll be sorry to see you go, although I must echo Hubert's question here.

 

-ibrow

I'm not going to have much free time.

Workin all day, school all night, all day, erry day, next semester. :/

 

 

Also, I should have your comedy reviewed either tonight or tomorrow.


Edited by Rarity, Dec 06 2012 - 05:49 PM.


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Posted Dec 08 2012 - 06:15 AM

 

Hi, I'm here to request a review (: 

 

 

Comedy Title: Ask Makuta Returns
Author: Karzhani the Utahraptor
Status of your comedy: In Progress 
Chapters to be reviewed: 92 and 93 (optionally 1-91, but that's in the archive) 

 

 

Edit: Hi, for some reason the editor isn't allowing me to link the text above, so the link is here  (: 

 

Alright, assigned to Hubert.

 

-ibrow

 

REVIEW COMPLETE.



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Posted Dec 08 2012 - 05:03 PM

Recording review. Rarity, you have until tonight to finish your review or you will receive a strike.

 

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Posted Dec 08 2012 - 06:22 PM

Recording review. Rarity, you have until tonight to finish your review or you will receive a strike.

 

-ibrow

Cool. It's quick review time ya'll. :afro:

 

Posted it just before midnight.

 

Anyway, that's it for me.

Thank you iBrow for letting me have the opportunity to be a reviewer, it was nice while it lasted.

 

Now to fly off into the sunset and hope my wings don't burn off.


Edited by Rarity, Dec 09 2012 - 12:56 AM.


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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 03:42 PM

It was good working with you, Rarity. Perhaps you'll have the time to re-join us in the future. To my lone remaining critic, Hubert, I must inform you of fisher's disappointing departure as well. School has caught up to all of us, it seems.

 

So now we must hire!

 

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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 05:50 PM

Oh dear. Time to advertise using my super awesome signature then.



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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 08:02 PM

The Comedy Forum being lowly populated? Oh ze noez!

 

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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 09:19 PM

Good news: I have one possible critic already going through the screening!

 

Bad news: Well, none yet.

 

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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 11:34 PM

That's good, because we really need some Critics.

 

You should advertise too boss.



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Posted Dec 30 2012 - 10:30 PM

Comedy: X-Ray: The Return

Author: X-Ray

Status: Finished

Chapters to be reviewed: 1 (It was a one shot)

 

:akaku: X-Ray :akaku:


"All that is not eternal is eternally out of date." -C.S. Lewis

The Selected BZPower.com Literary Works of X-Ray

 

-Comedies-

Glatorian of Bara Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal * Nuva Nation * Bionicles at Work * X-Ray: The Return (One-Shot)

 

-Epics-

Bionicle: Infinities (Old review topic) (New review topic)

 

-Short Stories-

What Comes After * The Golden Age * Hero of the Day * The Settlement * The Ballad of Master Chief * West of Po-Koro

* Whatever Happened to the Agent of the Bat?

 


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Posted Dec 31 2012 - 05:03 AM

Heyyo, old chaps! :P

 

Comedy: Mata Nui High School

Author: Jordboy1

Status: In Progress

Chapters to be reviewed: 18-22

 

The first three chapters are on the old board, but I have "18" linked. It might be a lot to read depending on chapter length...so take your time if you need :P

Thanks!

 

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Posted Dec 31 2012 - 04:26 PM

Comedy: X-Ray: The Return

Author: X-Ray

Status: Finished

Chapters to be reviewed: 1 (It was a one shot)

 

:akaku: X-Ray :akaku:

 

Toa Kaithas, this one is for you.

 

Heyyo, old chaps! :P

 

Comedy: Mata Nui High School

Author: Jordboy1

Status: In Progress

Chapters to be reviewed: 18-22

 

The first three chapters are on the old board, but I have "18" linked. It might be a lot to read depending on chapter length...so take your time if you need :P

Thanks!

 

-Jordboy1 :miru:

 

Hubert, this request is yours.


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Posted Dec 31 2012 - 11:01 PM

Gotcha. By the way, you still haven't added Kaithas to the Critics list.



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Posted Jan 01 2013 - 11:31 AM

I know... the past week, I've either been too busy or dealing with migraines (and other assorted sickness stuff) the likes of which I never knew before.

Suffice it to say it hasn't been the best way to close out 2012/open up 2013, but hey. I'm starting to feel better again.

 

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Posted Jan 04 2013 - 06:32 AM

Heyyo, old chaps! :P

 

Comedy: Mata Nui High School

Author: Jordboy1

Status: In Progress

Chapters to be reviewed: 18-22

 

The first three chapters are on the old board, but I have "18" linked. It might be a lot to read depending on chapter length...so take your time if you need :P

Thanks!

 

-Jordboy1 :miru:

REVIEW COMPLETE



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Posted Jan 04 2013 - 05:15 PM

Review noted!

JORDBOY1, I HAVE A REVIEW FOR YOU.

 

Comedy: The AfterWords

Status: In Progress

Chapters: Prologue-Chapter 4

 

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Posted Jan 04 2013 - 06:53 PM

Comedy: X-Ray: The Return

Author: X-Ray

Status: Finished

Chapters to be reviewed: 1 (It was a one shot)

 

:akaku: X-Ray :akaku:

 

REVIEW COMPLETE


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Posted Jan 08 2013 - 12:33 AM

Review noted!

JORDBOY1, I HAVE A REVIEW FOR YOU.

 

Comedy: The AfterWords

Status: In Progress

Chapters: Prologue-Chapter 4

 

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DONE!

 

Also, the link you have in "the list" to the review of "X-Ray: The Return" links to a picture of the "share" image instead of the actual review :P

 

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#114 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted Jan 08 2013 - 03:24 PM

AAAAAUUUUUGH

 

it will be corrected

your review is being recorded


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Posted Jan 08 2013 - 09:54 PM

BIONICLE: The Legend Imploded
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Status of your comedy: In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-5

I'm interested to see how well you guys review comedies, so I'm requesting a review here. I can always use some constructive criticism :) .

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Posted Jan 09 2013 - 08:29 PM

BIONICLE: The Legend Imploded
Author: TNTOS
Status of your comedy: In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-5

I'm interested to see how well you guys review comedies, so I'm requesting a review here. I can always use some constructive criticism :) .

-TNTOS-

 

Time to shake my reviewing socks up and put them on; this request is for none other than ibrow. I haven't reviewed a comedy since July, yeesh.

 

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Posted Jan 20 2013 - 09:39 PM

Comedy: Glatorian of Bara Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal

Author: X-Ray

Status: Finished

Chapters to be reviewed: 14-18

 

:akaku: X-Ray :akaku:


"All that is not eternal is eternally out of date." -C.S. Lewis

The Selected BZPower.com Literary Works of X-Ray

 

-Comedies-

Glatorian of Bara Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal * Nuva Nation * Bionicles at Work * X-Ray: The Return (One-Shot)

 

-Epics-

Bionicle: Infinities (Old review topic) (New review topic)

 

-Short Stories-

What Comes After * The Golden Age * Hero of the Day * The Settlement * The Ballad of Master Chief * West of Po-Koro

* Whatever Happened to the Agent of the Bat?

 


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Posted Jan 20 2013 - 11:03 PM

Comedy: Glatorian of Bara Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal

Author: X-Ray

Status: Finished

Chapters to be reviewed: 14-18

 

:akaku: X-Ray :akaku:

 

Kaithas, for you.

 

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Posted Jan 20 2013 - 11:46 PM

Acknowledged. I'll get to work on that straightaway.
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Posted Jan 22 2013 - 06:12 AM

BIONICLE: The Legend Imploded
Author: TNTOS
Status of your comedy: In Progress
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-5

I'm interested to see how well you guys review comedies, so I'm requesting a review here. I can always use some constructive criticism :) .

-TNTOS-

 

Time to shake my reviewing socks up and put them on; this request is for none other than ibrow. I haven't reviewed a comedy since July, yeesh.

 

-ibrow

Because the Chief doesn't have the time, he handed the job of reviewing said comedy to me, and here it is.

 

Ladies.






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