Kaithas: Acknowledgement acknowledged.
Hubert: Appreciated and logged.
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The Comedies Critics Club
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Posted Jan 23 2013 - 06:02 PM
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Posted Jan 27 2013 - 11:24 PM
<blockquote class='ipsBlockquote'data-author="Gavroche" data-cid="494172" data-time="1358741028"><p>
<blockquote class='ipsBlockquote'data-author="X-Ray" data-cid="494123" data-time="1358735987"><p><span style='font-family: trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif'><span style='color: #008080'>Comedy: </span><a href='http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=7847'><span style='color: #008080'>Glatorian of Bara Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal</span></a></span><br />
<span style='color: #008080'><span style='font-family: trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif'>Author: X-Ray</span></span><br />
<span style='color: #008080'><span style='font-family: trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif'>Status: Finished</span></span><br />
<span style='color: #008080'><span style='font-family: trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif'>Chapters to be reviewed: 14-18</span></span><br />
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X-Ray </span></span></p></blockquote>
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Kaithas, for you.<br />
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Review complete: http://www.bzpower.c...c=7847&p=497411
Edited by Jon Snow, Jan 28 2013 - 08:28 PM.
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Posted Jan 29 2013 - 10:16 AM
That quote is messed up. But still, being logged.
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Posted Jan 29 2013 - 08:03 PM
Blame mobile posting. The tags don't work with it.
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Posted Jan 31 2013 - 11:51 PM
Terry's Horrendous Misadventures
by Dude w/ a Hat
In Progress
Chapters I-II, Non-Canon Misc. Nonsense I
"You should never underestimate an opponent. Nor should you underestimate their arrogance."
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Do not be alarmed, I will not hand you a sombrero, and then light you on fire. Number Sixteen, in the house!
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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 06:52 AM
The tags don't work because it seems more HTML-ey than BBCode.
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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 09:54 AM
Terry's Horrendous Misadventuresby Dude w/ a Hat
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Chapters I-II, Non-Canon Misc. Nonsense I
This one goes to Jordboy.
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Posted Feb 04 2013 - 04:23 PM
- [/b]Solek's Story Part 2
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- Status of your comedy: Almost Finished.
- Chapters to be reviewed: All 3 of them
Bionicle news #2 click it, you know you want to. It's a comedy. With awesome humor. And contests. And a shadow leech. Who's evil.
http://www.bzpower.c...p?showtopic=987 Solek's story. Its probably my best comedy ever. Plot, action, and in narrative form.
http://www.bzpower.c...p?showtopic=987 Solek's story. Its probably my best comedy ever. Plot, action, and in narrative form.
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Posted Feb 05 2013 - 07:56 PM
Terry's Horrendous Misadventuresby Dude w/ a Hat
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Chapters I-II, Non-Canon Misc. Nonsense I
This one goes to Jordboy.
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Reassigned over to Hubert.
- [/b]Solek's Story Part 2
- Author: Me
- Status of your comedy: Almost Finished.
- Chapters to be reviewed: All 3 of them
Assigned to Toa Kaithas.
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Posted Feb 06 2013 - 11:48 AM
Acknowledged.
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Posted Feb 06 2013 - 07:24 PM
I'll get to it on the weekend.
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Posted Feb 06 2013 - 08:11 PM
Good to hear, lads! Good to hear!
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Posted Feb 09 2013 - 08:45 AM
Terry's Horrendous Misadventuresby Dude w/ a Hat
In Progress
Chapters I-II, Non-Canon Misc. Nonsense I
This one goes to Jordboy.
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Reassigned over to Hubert.
I have no idea how I took so long to do this review, but eh, it's done.
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Posted Feb 09 2013 - 04:54 PM
Logged in! And no font color!
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Posted Feb 12 2013 - 11:03 PM
Solek's story: REVIEW COMPLETE
I was a bit timelimited, but I got it done.
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Posted Feb 13 2013 - 03:45 PM
By my computer's clock you submitted your review three minutes late. I think I might be able to survive that without giving a strike. [/end jokes]
ALSO: Jordboy has temporarily resigned, meaning that we are once again dangerously low on critics! Advertise the club! Drag someone in (actually don't)! Get an in-depth reviewer to bring our numbers back up!
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Edited by Gavroche, Feb 13 2013 - 09:35 PM.
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Posted Mar 05 2013 - 07:38 AM
I'd review for you, except my attention span is probably too low for me to efficiently review constantly.
Sorry; I'm too lazy to read. It hurts my eyes.
Even though I spend more time on technology than on paper.
My Comedies: No you may not read them i haven't posted since last year 
Awesome stuff not mine: TBTTRAM, TFC:T. TvT: Resurrection
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Posted Mar 17 2013 - 12:00 AM
Comedy: Bionicles at Work
Author: X-Ray
Status: Finished
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-4
X-Ray
"All that is not eternal is eternally out of date." -C.S. Lewis
The Selected BZPower.com Literary Works of X-Ray
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Glatorian of Bara Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal * Nuva Nation * Bionicles at Work * X-Ray: The Return (One-Shot)
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Bionicle: Infinities (Old review topic) (New review topic)
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What Comes After * The Golden Age * Hero of the Day * The Settlement * The Ballad of Master Chief * West of Po-Koro
* Whatever Happened to the Agent of the Bat?
#139
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Posted Mar 17 2013 - 08:04 AM
Comedy: Bionicles at Work
Author: X-Ray
Status: Finished
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-4
This request is assigned to Kaithas - you have one week. lol giving hard time
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Posted Mar 20 2013 - 10:19 PM
Karzahni. My life is nuts.
Oh well, I'll try to get it done.
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Posted Mar 26 2013 - 12:30 AM
I've lost my groove guys.
So I gotta quit.
Sorry.
See ya all~
#142
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Posted Mar 26 2013 - 08:31 PM
I guess we'll not be seeing you, then?
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Posted Mar 28 2013 - 12:14 PM
And there were two.
Welp, recruitment time.
Welp, recruitment time.
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Posted Mar 31 2013 - 07:26 PM
Comedy: Bionicles at Work
Author: X-Ray
Status: Finished
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-4
This request is assigned to Kaithas - you have one week. lol giving hard time
#145
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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 08:14 PM
Alright, I'll log it later (remind me if I forget). I'm thinking about re-extending the reviewing window to two weeks, since life is getting me, and everybody.
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Posted Apr 04 2013 - 04:18 PM
You haven't logged it, I don't think.
And yes, the extra time would be nice.
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Posted Apr 06 2013 - 12:22 PM
Are you guys busy at the moment? I'm considering signing up to be a critic but I have oh so little faith in my own criticising skills (and myself in general) so I don't know if I'd be any good.
Also I'd like another review for The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings at some point but I'll ask you properly when I finish the current Skylim (spelling mistake intended) story.
Also I'd like another review for The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings at some point but I'll ask you properly when I finish the current Skylim (spelling mistake intended) story.
The images above take you to nice places.
I appear missing...
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Posted Apr 06 2013 - 03:49 PM
Are you guys busy at the moment? I'm considering signing up to be a critic but I have oh so little faith in my own criticising skills (and myself in general) so I don't know if I'd be any good.
Also I'd like another review for The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings at some point but I'll ask you properly when I finish the current Skylim (spelling mistake intended) story.
We're rather un-busy at the moment, actually. And we'd love to have you on board - just shoot me a pm withint the next week and I can start you through the screening process.
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Posted Apr 07 2013 - 01:38 AM
Not busy then. I'll send you a PM when I'm on my computer. Sending PMs via mobile is annoying.
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Posted Apr 14 2013 - 11:11 AM
I would like a review.
- Technic Coliseum: After Hours
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Just a quick warning/description: The comedy is mostly based on the game Technic Coliseum, and uses a lot of RoboRiders and Slizers as characters. Thank you for reviewing!
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Posted Apr 14 2013 - 06:48 PM
Kaithas, this is yours. You have two weeks.
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Posted Apr 18 2013 - 12:54 PM
It should be noted that I know about this, I just forgot to post an acknowledgement.
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Posted Apr 18 2013 - 01:18 PM
iBrow, are you still looking for critics? I've got a pretty light spring term, so I'm not busy on the weekends if you need a hand.
It's nice to see the club doing well, by the way. You're doing a good job.
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Posted Apr 18 2013 - 02:30 PM
It should be noted that I know about this, I just forgot to post an acknowledgement.
No problem.
iBrow, are you still looking for critics? I've got a pretty light spring term, so I'm not busy on the weekends if you need a hand.
It's nice to see the club doing well, by the way. You're doing a good job.
Thank you! And I actually think I still have you listed as an honorary curator, so if you want to I can just officially induct you.
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Posted Apr 19 2013 - 07:41 PM
URL: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=9474
Name: The Legend of the Bionicle...Toys
Author: ToaKapura1234
Status: Beginning
Chapters to be reviewed: 1-5.
Edited by ToaKapura1234, Apr 20 2013 - 12:24 PM.
Me playing MNOG: Aw poor Taipu. First he has to do double work then he's kidnapped. And poor Maku. She gets quarantined for saving her village.
Me playing MNOG II: CURSE YOU TAIPU! DIE DIE DIE! GRR, STOP SCORING! MAKU, YOU CAN'T BLOCK ANYTHING! YOU'RE FIRED!
The Legend of the Bionicle...Toys. My comedy. Give it a read. It's only $9.99(free if you give a USEFUL comment) and it has free ice cream. End shameless advertising.
(Ice cream does not apply if you live in North America, South America, Asia, Europe, Africa, Australia, or Antartica)
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Posted Apr 20 2013 - 12:19 PM
Jalina, you can have this if you want it. Otherwise it shall be mine.
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Posted Apr 23 2013 - 12:55 PM
Sorry, I'm still working on checking back on a regular basis again. Sure, I'll take it. 
EDIT: BAM! Done!
..BTW, are we still using a numbering system, or did we abandon that due to the fact that everyone rates a '7' differently?
Edited by Jalina T.T., Apr 26 2013 - 10:44 PM.
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Posted Apr 29 2013 - 06:30 AM
I requested my review on the fourteenth. It is now the twenty ninth. It has been two weeks, and I have not received my review.
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Posted Apr 29 2013 - 02:21 PM
I'll talk to Kaithas about it. The CFE might have messed stuff up with timing, but it's still not good.
Jalina: Yeah, we use scores, which I then convert into a percentage.
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Posted Apr 29 2013 - 09:07 PM
I apologize. Between tests and writing for the CFE, I've been a bit busy.
I'm working on it, should be up tonight. I hope.
Just so you know, if I'm not fired I may have to temp resign soon.
Edited by Kaitholas Cage, Apr 29 2013 - 09:18 PM.
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