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#161 Offline Phovos the Raptor

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Posted Apr 30 2013 - 05:24 AM

Hai. I'd like a review of some random about of the Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings please. I've gone and picked out the Skylim arc, featuring Nuhvok, Lehvak and Gahlok, as the arc with Pahrak and Tahnok and Kohrak's chapters have been a tad random.

The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings
Author: Phovos the Raptor
Status of your comedy: In Progress, for ever and ever also forever.
Chapters to be reviewed: The Skylim Arc - 1, 2, 3, 4



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#162 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted Apr 30 2013 - 06:02 AM

Kaithas: It's just the first strike. No big deal.

Phovos: I'll try to get this review done myself.


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#163 Offline Kaitholas Cage

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Posted Apr 30 2013 - 09:19 PM

I would like a review.

 

  1. Technic Coliseum: After Hours
  2. Canis Lupus
  3. Beginning
  4. Chapters One and Two

Just a quick warning/description: The comedy is mostly based on the game Technic Coliseum, and uses a lot of RoboRiders and Slizers as characters. Thank you for reviewing!

REVIEW COMPLETE

 

Also, I'm handing in my resignation for the foreseeable future. I can't juggle this and finals at the same time, and I have a lot of stuff over the summer.

 

Sorry.


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#164 Offline Phovos the Raptor

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Posted May 01 2013 - 01:50 AM

I'm in no rush for a review, so I don't mind if I'm waiting a few weeks.



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#165 Offline ZHX

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Posted May 01 2013 - 03:57 AM

Yo.

 

How does one apply to be a Critic?



#166 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted May 01 2013 - 07:18 AM

Same as before - through looking at the first post, pming me, all that good sorta stuff.


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#167 Offline ZHX

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Posted May 01 2013 - 07:34 AM

Right then! Here we go again~



#168 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted May 01 2013 - 08:48 PM

Jalina & Kaithas: Reviews are being logged. Jalina, am I correct in assuming you scored the comedy in the 70% area?

 

Kaithas: Sorry to see you go, but life must come first.

 

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#169 Offline Jalina T.T.

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Posted May 02 2013 - 01:07 PM

Yeah, 70%-ish sounds about right. Thanks for letting me know, I wasn't sure.


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#170 Offline Phovos the Raptor

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Posted May 08 2013 - 12:49 AM

My review sucked. I think I'll just give up now.



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#171 Offline Hurricane iBrow

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Posted May 08 2013 - 07:40 PM

The review doesn't look that bad, but it wasn't my comedy being reviewed. Shoot me a pm and I'll try to work this out.


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