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#401 Offline ZippyWharrgarbl

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Posted Jan 06 2013 - 10:41 PM

I was under the impression that each entry would be judged by each judge. When it was accepted by every judge, it would be ready for polling.

 

Then again, I'm not even sure if there's a set of rules for the judges or anything. There probably is, so I guess all we can do is wait and see!


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Posted Jan 07 2013 - 12:44 AM

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:
Memento Vivere by Infrared

I approve this entry.



#403 Offline TLhikan

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Posted Jan 07 2013 - 09:10 AM

I was under the impression that each entry would be judged by each judge. When it was accepted by every judge, it would be ready for polling.

 

Then again, I'm not even sure if there's a set of rules for the judges or anything. There probably is, so I guess all we can do is wait and see!

 

 

No, Bones gets the final say in all entries. As far as I know, he isn't expecting each of us to review every entry. 

 

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Posted Jan 08 2013 - 01:40 AM

I was under the impression that each entry would be judged by each judge. When it was accepted by every judge, it would be ready for polling.

 

Then again, I'm not even sure if there's a set of rules for the judges or anything. There probably is, so I guess all we can do is wait and see!

 

 

No, Bones gets the final say in all entries. As far as I know, he isn't expecting each of us to review every entry. 

 

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Oh, I see! Well, that's understandable. Thank you!


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#405 Offline TLhikan

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Posted Jan 09 2013 - 12:58 PM


 

 

 

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:

Casualties   by toa jalokim

I see problems with this entry.

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Edited by TLhikan, Jan 09 2013 - 01:08 PM.

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Posted Jan 09 2013 - 01:44 PM

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:

Casualties by toa jalokim

I see problems with this entry.

 

Mostly grammar, all should be easy fixes.



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Posted Jan 09 2013 - 02:12 PM

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:
Rising by Toa Makao
I approve this entry. 


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Posted Jan 09 2013 - 04:02 PM

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:

Certainty by Baron Von Nebula

I approve this entry.

 

 

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:

The Teacher by Tikiturbo


I see a very minor problem with this entry.


Edited by The First Speaker, Jan 12 2013 - 03:46 AM.


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Posted Jan 10 2013 - 10:24 PM

Hey, bones, could you do my entry, The Journal, sometime? I had some questions to ask if they were okay in that topic, and I wanted your review to check.


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Posted Jan 11 2013 - 06:11 PM

 

The following comes from an authorized Contest Judge: At least one inaccuracy or error has been found in your entry. After reading this judge post, you are authorized to edit your entry to fix these errors. After editing to fix these things, please post in the entry topic saying what you changed.

 

What I found is very, very minor so I almost feel guilty for not giving you the approval right away.

 

 

 

“That’s right, I whispered. “This time we all made it. We made it together… “

 

There's a quotation mark missing after right. It should be “That’s right", I whispered.

 

 

This correction came from The First Speaker and has been fixed. It now reads "That's right," I whispered, instead of "That's right, I whispered.


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Posted Jan 12 2013 - 03:43 AM

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:

The Teacher by Tikiturbo


I approve this entry.


Edited by The First Speaker, Jan 12 2013 - 03:46 AM.


#412 Offline TLhikan

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Posted Jan 12 2013 - 11:41 AM


As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:

Belief by Dual Matrix

I approve this entry

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Edited by TLhikan, Jan 12 2013 - 11:43 AM.

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Posted Jan 13 2013 - 06:05 AM

As an authorized Contest Juge, I have read and judged this entry:

 

The First Hunter by Emissary to the Void

 

I see problems with this entry.



#414 Offline toa jalokim

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Posted Jan 24 2013 - 07:26 PM

I finnaly fixed my entry.

 

the word count has changed to 1,326.

 

I also changed the ending slightly and added a new scene



also, my entry needs to be updated on the list to say that bones judged mine.


this guy is a retired BNGer and is now a fully fledged bio-tuber.


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Posted Jan 26 2013 - 11:24 PM

I have now completed my final proof-read of my entry (or at least I hope so) and have some corrections to make. Can I have permission to make these changes (I ask here just in case the request I made in the actual topic is not noticed)?


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#416 Offline TNT-Vezon with an Olmak

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Posted Jan 27 2013 - 01:40 PM

What's the estimate on when the voting can begin on the contest at the moment? Sorry if this has been asked already.


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Posted Jan 28 2013 - 12:41 PM

Ok,my story has been judged by two judges, but I have yet to get a response from them. I fixed the errros, so idky they haven't responded yet.


Edited by DeltaStriker, Jan 28 2013 - 12:43 PM.

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#418 Offline toa jalokim

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Posted Jan 28 2013 - 06:06 PM

My story has also been judged by two judges. Would anyone else care to read it?

 

EDIT: OH, and my story has been updated. Can you update the entry list Bonesiii?


Edited by toa jalokim, Jan 28 2013 - 06:08 PM.

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Posted Jan 29 2013 - 08:53 AM

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:
Brothers by DeltaStriker.
I see problems with this entry.

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Posted Feb 03 2013 - 05:49 AM

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:

 

Casualties by toa jalokim

 

I see problems with this entry.



#421 Offline Mersery

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Posted Feb 09 2013 - 01:20 AM

Forgot to say, the word count for my entry is currently 4,739.


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Posted Feb 12 2013 - 12:30 PM

 
As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:
Brothers by DeltaStriker.
I see problems with this entry.
 


All three sets of problems have been rectified. I have yet to receive word from the judges.


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Posted Feb 12 2013 - 02:53 PM

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:

Brothers by DeltaStriker

I approve this entry.

Sorry for the delay.


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Posted Feb 17 2013 - 10:19 AM

As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:
Dragon by Willess12.
I see problems with this entry.

 

Basically a problem with one of the contest rules, should be fixable.



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Posted Feb 28 2013 - 01:42 AM

As an authorized contest judge, I have read and judged this entry: 
 
Brothers by Delta Striker
 
I find a minor problem with this entry.


Edited by fishers64, Feb 28 2013 - 01:43 AM.

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Posted Feb 28 2013 - 11:46 AM

So how's everything going?


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Posted Feb 28 2013 - 11:47 PM

Here is an update to The List, which hopefully should move things along: 

 

Nidhiki:
Memory by Exitum:
 Judged by:
Toa Lhikan Hordika: Approved
Infared: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Problems found
fishers64: Approved
Takamavahu: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Approved
Takamavahu made some suggestions, which Exitum took.
Takamavahu: Approved
Infared: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
 
Casualties by Toa Jalokim
Judged by:
TLhikan: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems found
bonesiii: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Toa of Italy: Problems found
 
Zaktan:
Rising by Toa Makao

Judged by:
Toa of Italy: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems Found
Post addressed. 
TLhikan: Approved
 

Spiriah:
All That Glitters by Magnus Greel
 
Judged by:
bonesiii: Approved
fishers64: Problems Found
Toa of Italy: Approved
Edits were made to fix the errors

Ihu:
Reflections by toa kopaka4372
 
Judged by:
fishers64: Approved
bonesiii: Approved
TLhikan: Approved
The First Speaker: Approved

The Mentor's Way by Mersery
 
Judged by:
The First Speaker: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Approved
fishers64: Problems Found
fishers64: Problems Found
bonesiii: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
(bones and Mersery go back and forth over the errors Mersery found.)
 
Naho:
First Kill by TheSkeletonMan939
 
Judged by:
TLhikan: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Approved
 

Toa by Iku
 
Judged by:
bonesiii: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors

Hydraxon:
Three on Three by Makuta Matata
 
Judged by:
fishers64: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors

 
Lhikan:
Protector by Colt McCoy & J. Mascioli
Judged by:
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Approved

Legends of Lhii by Yio
TLhikan: Problems Found

Dawning Valor by DoomIgnika
TLhikan: Problems Found
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
TLhikan: Approved (were the errors fixed?)
 
Reysa:
Predators by Toasylar
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
fishers64: Problems Found
(Issue of Reysa's Dream/vision still under dispute)

Memento Vivere by Infrared
fishers64: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Toa of Italy: Approved
Takamavahu: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Takamavahu: Approved


The Journal by Click
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors; However, one major problem remains unresolved.

fishers64: Problems found

 
Mavrah:
Dragon by Willess12
fishers64: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
fishers64: Approved
bonesiii: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Approved
 
Botar:
Belief by Dual Matrix
TLhikan: Problems Found
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Approved

 
Jovan:
Teacher by Tikiturbo
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Approved
The First Speaker: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Approved

Brothers by DeltaStriker
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Approved
fishers64: Problems Found
 
Icarax:
Certainty by Baron Von Nebula
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Toa of Italy: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Approved
The First Speaker: Approved

 
Matoro:
Invasion by Lewa Krom
TLhikan: Problems Found
No Response Yet
 
Gorast:
Hunter's Folly by Felix Dzerinsky
TLhikan: Problems Found
Errors addressed by bonesiii
fishers64: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
fishers64: Problems Found 
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
 
Ancient:
The First Hunter by Emissary to the Void
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Approved
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
 
Kodan:
The Last Chronicle by TNT-DJ Vezon
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
fishers64: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors

The Unknown Turaga by ZippyWharrgarbl
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Toa of Italy: Approved
 
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The First Speaker = Mr. Hyde on the judges list (he changed his name back).  


Edited by fishers64, Mar 25 2013 - 01:54 AM.

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Posted Mar 01 2013 - 12:35 AM

Wow, that entry list makes my story look even more rejected. :D

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Posted Mar 03 2013 - 08:18 AM

Couple things:

I may have given Dawning Valor an approval too soon, someone should go over it.

 

Also, Hunter's Folly is extremely long, has a number of grammar issues, and is currently in bright green font. Anyone wanting to judge it is going to have a bit of a headache. 

 

 


Wow, that entry list makes my story look even more rejected.  :D

 

Did you ever hear back from Bones on that one issue?

 

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Edited by TLhikan, Mar 03 2013 - 08:20 AM.

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Posted Mar 03 2013 - 02:36 PM

No, I asked him to look over it a few times, but he has yet to do so.

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Posted Mar 03 2013 - 06:27 PM

Also, Hunter's Folly is extremely long, has a number of grammar issues, and is currently in bright green font. Anyone wanting to judge it is going to have a bit of a headache. 
 
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That's my fault because I set my posts to be that color. I didn't know it'd do that, I'll see if I can change that without editing my story. Also I changed my name from Felix Dzerzhinsky to Scanty Demon for the record.

Edit: I fixed the green text problem. I just went to the customize posts setting so I didn't edit the story. So now you can review it headache free.

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Posted Mar 03 2013 - 09:45 PM

As an authorized contest judge, I have read and judged this entry:

The Journal by Click

I see problems with this entry.

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Posted Mar 20 2013 - 12:14 PM

How's everything going? Just wondering because of the silence for the last few weeks.


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Posted Mar 24 2013 - 06:55 AM

I'd really like to know how judging's going on, too. The anticipation is too much for me!


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Posted Mar 25 2013 - 01:51 AM

Basically it's pretty much bogged down IMO. You all can consult the list for a status, but some judges (like me) are bogged down with other projects at the moment, and other people haven't got back to us on the errors we have found, so it is taking some time. 


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Posted Mar 25 2013 - 04:04 AM

This is a busy time of year. Almost everyone here is either in school or working. If you're a University student, this is crunch time. I know I'm going to be up to my ears in school until the end of April. After that, there should be more people with time on their hands to get back into this contest, but for now we'll just have to be patient. Bionicle isn't going to get up and walk away in the mean time.



#437 Offline ZippyWharrgarbl

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Posted Mar 25 2013 - 06:50 AM

I thought something like that would be happening. Well, I'm still really excited!


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Posted Apr 07 2013 - 05:26 PM

Ok, after a long time, Ive finnaly been able to fix my entry.

 

the Word count is now 1,342


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Posted May 17 2013 - 05:45 AM

I'm assuming the contest's on hold until all the judges get the time to pay it proper attention? :P


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Posted May 17 2013 - 04:47 PM

Something like that, I think. 


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