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Metrukuta, Rahi Zaku, and Tahuri for the RZ Revolutions kit
Edited by Tenuk, Aug 13 2012 - 10:04 PM.
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Yeah it leads up to a future story most of the comics won't have you guessing at the meaning.
First I am going to say, Welcome to BZ Power.
As for your comic, I honestly do not get it but I assume it is leading to some future story you have planned. If that is the case, then good job and keep on working. I hope you enjoy it here, as I have in the past week and good luck with your comics ;P
As for the enlarging I do things vastly different then most comic makers as I use a mac and have been unable to find a good program to make comics (I have photoshop but I don't use, it scares me). Do you think I have I have improved since the last time you reviewed me?
I'm not sure what you're trying to do here.
But it is artistic and a nice new style. Most advice I would give at this point is to use "Nearest Neighbor" for interpolation when enlarging sprites. You apparently used Bicubic for yours; makes it look kind of messy in my opinion.
Silhouettes are great though; they should be used more often in my opinion.
Edited by Tenuk, Jul 27 2012 - 11:35 AM.
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Posted Jul 27 2012 - 02:19 PM
Thank you kind sir.
If I'm interpreting this correctly, that's totally hot.
You hit the nail on the head. I actually got the idea for literal topic closure when I was watching a clip of Veon's movie. Anyway, I'm glad you like the series.
Well, on the first comic, I rather like the interpretation. I don't think anyone has interpreted the idea of closing a topic so literally (at least not anyone recently) and I rather like the concept.
So, from what I read in the second comic (which, by the way, I found hilarious) this series follows a comic maker who no longer makes comics, which is an angle I've never seen explored in this way. I really like that.
The effects are rather good, considering how new you are. I'm interested in what will happen next.
There you go, I'm invested. Keep up the (so far) great work!
Edited by Tenuk, Jul 27 2012 - 02:21 PM.
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Here are some actually great comics that I feel deserve a bit more attention as well.
One Nation Under The Great Spirit - The Lazy Life of a Comic Maker 3.0 - 009 Makes Comics - Tilted - The Awesomepacolypse - Tavkorp: Since 2008 - Akano's Comics
If you don't like my comics, atleast try those topics out.
Posted Jul 31 2012 - 10:59 AM
I like the concept of this series. I actually can't recall seeing this concept done before,
where the series revolves around a matoran who's had his "topic closed".
You have a really great start, the backgrounds look decent enough to fair well with the sprites (Glad you're not using Chimoru like 90% of the forum ), and those speech bubbles are really well done. I like the humor in this as well. It's a nice change from the usual stuff other newbies bring in.
Great job on these, so far. They're looking really spiffy.
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Posted Aug 11 2012 - 02:30 PM
That's just how I see the villain/author relationship, the villain along with the rest of the cast are all paid to do their job.
Oh wow. Very nice and big comic. I really love how all your comics have a sort of clean feeling. I liked how your put in SeeKay and made it look like I was in my studio. The weight falling was also very amusing and I love the last panel.
Thats kinda funny that I needed a villain. LOL
Thank you, I'd greatly appreciate that.
The Toaster-bot concept... I have no idea why it picked up, to be honest. The characters were mildly interesting but the notion of a mass-produced character is fairly boring now that I look back at it. Of course you can use it- there's nobody to stop you. Of course, you probably can't use TBL's Toaster, and probably not the ICC's demigod version I created.
Just a warning- I'm pretty sure that they made a better Vahki head for RZMIK. I'll get you the link if I can find it while I still remember this topic.
Interesting stuff, by the way.
Edited by Tenuk, Aug 11 2012 - 05:52 PM.
Posted Aug 13 2012 - 10:18 PM
Do you think I have I have improved since the last time you reviewed me?
Posted Aug 14 2012 - 01:43 PM
Posted Aug 14 2012 - 02:12 PM
I greatly appreciate this advice, finally someone else who uses a mac!
These are actually quite good.
Only thing is that the comics are waay too large. I'm assuming you're using comic life, so when you're exporting the file into a .png, remember to keep it at 72dpi. Otherwise, it's going to be massive.
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